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Thread: Influence (keystyle)

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    Echo
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    Influence (keystyle)

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    Just imporvised some shit that's on my mind now.... Enjoy

    My mother wants me to go to college and be a pro learner
    I want to drive expensive cars and be a money earner
    My father thinks I should be a fuckn' poker player
    but I'm an Emcee slayer, God answer this fucked up prayer
    I wanna become big, find a gig at some clown house
    Frown at this mouse fitting in her fuckn' blouse
    snapping the buttons shut like she ain't got nothing else
    Is the only thing that matters is the size of my bra?
    I ain't Brittany, give me some fuckn' credit dawg?
    I'll hog the mike while I'm up on stage creating rage
    page me if you have a craving for some Emcee slaying.
    We young bangers will change the way rap is made!
    God gave us the gift of verbally angering any cat.
    Rat-tat-tat-tat, windows are rattling in the bathroom
    A mother's baby is about to fall out of the fuckn' womb
    Land on the floor and crack it's fuckn' head open
    That's the show that goes on when the mom's high is on
    Now the baby is going to be crying when it's mouth is dry
    but it won't be crying for milk, just crack, that's wacked
    it's a yummy snack the kid needs, when it's crying for more?
    a rapper like Echo falls out of the door and onto the floor.

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    the ideas ill a lil simple but well delivered all and all this wanst great but wasnt no where near shitty you got a m9ind for concept just advance your rhymes to it
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Nice man, your good at that shit, impressive keystle,

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    Aight you need to evolve the (a) (b) rhyme style. Add some consistency throughout the rhyme too.
    "Live by the sword and die by the sword, it’s not an option, it’s an obligation of honor."
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    thanks for the feedback

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    like wordperfect said nice idea but a little 2 simple
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