My man, this piece was exceptional emotion wise. I could feel it on a personal level as I too have experienced a personal loss. You didn't need to get complex or use a high vocabulary and I was glad to see you just let your emotion's take control. Real deep piece and I was feeling it all the way through. Chorus wasn't long, but it was loud in it's message. Great job man. Pz.
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