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defender
The Judge
omg...............................4th............. ................................lmfao............. .............
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ayt the judge took this easily, better punches,structure flow every category goes to judge and personals werent bad either
the judge takes this easily he packed tha verse full of personals and good punches
defender had ok punches but they wernt very creative and the structure was crap
vote-judge
peep these and leave links
vs rec-d
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116940
vs touch to gold
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127
Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. - Axiom
Not even was defenders shit wack..
Bitten, prewrote, recycled or w/e aswell
Like 4 different styles blended into one wack whole.
..Bleh.
Judge took this.. landslide.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
Witty Unpredicatable Talent And Natural Game
My pokemon brings all the nerds to the yard, and there like "Do you wanna trade cards?" Damn Right lets trade some cards, I'll trade you, but not my charizard.
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The judge- came pretty good. the punches were intact and consistent. the flow was ok and the structure wasn't that bad either. you filled ur verse wit personals which is nice. didn't really have any multies but still, nice verse. 7.5/10
defender- those verses were almost not worth reading. i was annoyed with every line. ur punches weren't too good. ur structure and flow were off. i culdn't quite follow ur rhymes. and almost every line has been played, except you made them worst sumhow. lol. ok job. 3.5/10
vote- the judge
hit this one up plz 'Lost Soul vs Me'
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117419
thanx.
pz
Well, Judge came alot harder, was much wittier with his wordplay and definately merked this kid...
Defender did shit like this...
ill spit and kill this fag and Native-Pride
You couldnt defeate me even if you had the booth on your-side
Which is total huh?
I know ya refering to the recording booth...
But how does that pertain to The Judge and this battle?
And...
Ill rip you so badly, this defeate will force you to lay-low
Even if you had a career it would last as long as P-diddy and J-Low
How outdated and played is that?
The Judge came personally, stayed a bit too much on the "banning" shit...
But really, just merked the hell out of that played, out of place, and very elementary verse.
Peace
Pretty one sided..
Defender: Fix up your structure, some of your lines are stretched out and it took away from your flow of your verse...Your punches didnt really do anything....work on getting better punches and some better wordplay though.
Judge: Your verse was the better of the two....Had good structure.....the flow was nice in it....You had some nice punches in there....Had nice personals through out the verse...Liked the way you finished your battle verse with that closer, it was nice.
Overall: a one sided battle...vote goes to the judge...for having the better overall verse, just had better punches, personals....everything really.
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