Ok, I might be able to gain enough strength to read thatOriginally Posted by Fresh
Ok, I might be able to gain enough strength to read that
yeah let me take a shower quickly
Not sure what you’re talking about?
Haha.. slide them clothes off and start writing
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Audio section.. thread from like 2017
Don’t recall.
@Art what do you mean wordy
like to many words or my choice of words?
how do i change that? i had to read a couple text battles to even get the format i did
i thought i did it was the same. let me no what i can change
i see your the champ so you prolly got the best advice
Less is more.
Remember that when delivering a concept. You want to try and word it as clear as possible with a concise delivery.
and the more harsh the wording is in the least amount of words the more effective and likely to garner a stank face
Don’t listen to @Fresh
He’s been text battling for 20 years and still struggles to deliver his concepts. He writes a paragraph just to deliver the message “you suck, faggot.”
lol
stfu old angry man
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guy will constantly say my shits overworded even when i have shorter lines than my opponent. go figure
Lmfao
<3
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Just because you have shorter lines doesn’t mean it isn’t over worded bro, lmao. If that’s what you think, you still haven’t grasp the art of text battling man.
i need to get a mic
Majority over word your concepts by adding a bunch of tie ins that aren’t needed, what you should focus on is how you’re going to deliver that concept in a HARSH manner rather than trying to complex the concept by adding multiple tie ins. While the creativity is appreciated it lessens the effectiveness of the original concept rather than just focusing on the concepts potential for impact.
but i prolly need to get my life together first lol
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can u read my verse against lenox and like breakdown a bar to make me under stand better
if you have the time if not no worry
