your problem is you think you don't need critique. no one gets better if they're happy where they are.Originally Posted by mal diction
your problem is you think you don't need critique. no one gets better if they're happy where they are.
if it ain't broke ... dont fix it
you're problem is you let your site accolades predict how good you really are... and you're not good at all
my net battle record, before i came to this site, was like 100+(wins) and 70+(losses).. and i have yet to win since then.. just a few noshows.. and the poet haiku league.and the audio league at Rap is Alive(the second best site i've been to) Rap Battles' sister site... but i know what it is.. i just need to gain your respect...
I could imagine someone like Hitman using it, think I've heard him use the is/ist thing before. Hitman obviously isn't known for elite wordplay but it's of an acceptable standard.
I didn't have any word association, scheme etc where MV did, just a name flip in a simile. Similes are to battle bars what sarcasm is to wit. My bar was more of a cheap thrills with simple components but got you instantly 'there' & MV's took appreciation of the less obvious aspects of writing to bring it level.
I would say something like Blue's "wraps are fishy in auto" / raps aficionado is forced whereas "reception is" would be better described as ok but maybe a little shaky.
Not forced just a clear reach.
reception is and receptionist sound alike, said aloud but the punch didn't follow through..
thank you for the solid breakdown Bag.
most of yall are giving bullshit feedback but want people to give a shit about your bars. Fresh if you put half the thought and energy into your votes as you did defending your bigoted joke then you might be of more use than a punching bag. Amen you are irrelevant outside of chat battling.
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Mag is up. Ill set the threads tomorrow.
if you like the wordplay thats fine, but me personally i didnt like it.
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its clearly broke if no one likes your shit
What’s the problem
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Originally Posted by 3viction
mal and MV are mad at me for making a joke that required me to say the nigga word
thought i was facing you.. my bad
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not mad at you.. just want to slap you a few times
If the n word bothers you in a rap battle then idk what to say lol
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Yo post battles man I need to drop some bars @Phalanx
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Originally Posted by 3viction
he said he'll post later today
why are you so excited to text battle mr no lipped squidward shooter
I think a white person saying it was where the issue began. It is hard to gauge the contexts, if any, where it's ok. I've heard Em say it at live shows where he's ad libbing and he didn't get punched but there's also ginger Caustic saying it which you've probably seen
Gook is still ok though imo
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