Originally Posted by
Bomb Bard
King AKA Lyrisic aka Lil DzBit Ice..
Real Name - David Brown
Listen Faggit...
Strum ur strings I bit, & how U Legend, fat guy
Once I feed David Bowies Rockin. Then Find him more Decayed than That Guy
This was upward dog. I appreciate you trying your best with just David to go on.
Vs me? U a Shark in Mud, God dam this lame
Morgue'll put Brown On Ice after catchin More Cases.. than Evander Kane!
Do you fuckers watch every sport? Like every sport, every season? How in the fuck do you guys know every sports related person in the world? That said, I hated the setup - Shark in Mud is a real stretch. Brown on Ice is really the cool part of this bar and you surrounded it with too much. It was a cool punch. You kinda fucked it up.
Have Fat Boy Eatin bullets till all he do is fall
Take a Full Trey to the Gut! but theres No Plates Or Food Involved
So someone needs to explain how these types of punchlines are worded, to me. Like... I like full trey to the gut. I even kind of like the setup. I would be down with this, but I feel like it delivers the punch... and then continues, just to hit the multi? Full Trey to the Gut is the good part of this bar. Why doesn't it end here? Barcotic does this a lot and it drives me fucking crazy. But I do like full try to the gut.
Weak is nothin, frozen how voters squeeze ur nuts quick
This round they wont be Full Of Ice, While you'd devour a Freezer bucket!
So I really really hate your setups in this verse. I feel like the wording is just kind of forced and random. It confuses me. Like look at frozen how voters squeeze your nuts quick. It doesn't flow and it isn't clear. This isn't my favorite bar from you.
Hate Mag was a Newborn love,Sic's his prudest style
Funny call'n Ways Baby Bash Cos I'll use a brick & do that once U Produce A Child
This is more of that wording that really I don't fuck with. Baby bash is kind of a cool concept. The setup -- sic's his prudest style? I didn't love that. And then Baby bash was cool... but you have the whole second half which is just to satisfy the multi? Like... I really, truly don't get why punches are strung out like this. And I don't fuck with it.
My fucking verse was deleted... heres 10