Open Mic Chat

[Cody Phoenix]

I'll set it up then.

[#PrimeTime]

wtf is RR? The Royal Rumble? the fuck..?

[Cody Phoenix]

wtf is RR? The Royal Rumble? the fuck..?

just another site

[Soule]

A shit site with a buncha rejects. Only good writer there is Kayge.

[Cody Phoenix]

A shit site with a buncha rejects. Only good writer there is Kayge.

Isn't that your alias lmfao

[KnowP]

some pretty sexy verses going up lately. we need to have 3 mandatory days of voting. I think that'll keep shit moving along in the right direction.

[_Lyrics]

@WHORTICULTURE‎;
multis mean multi syllable rhyme schemes
read and feed some pieces and im sure you'll get a quick understanding

[Cody Phoenix]

@WHORTICULTURE‎;
multis mean multi syllable rhyme schemes
read and feed some pieces and im sure you'll get a quick understanding

are you a weebo

[Soule]

Basically, rhyme inside the lines and not just at the end.

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@WHORTICULTURE

SYLLABLE COUNT

this is partially hand in hand with bar length. IF you count your syllables in each bar you want to have them around the same as well.. I usually stay around 12-15 syllables per line/bar.
Practice and you'll find a syllable count which your comfortable with.

RHYME SCHEMES

a rhyme scheme is basically like a blueprint for your writtens or freestyles for that matter. Its all about where your rhyming words are that make this important. Cuz where you rhyme in your lines drastically dictates how your flow will sound.

the "x" represents filler words that pertain to the line but doesnot rhyme

the CAPPED letters such as "A" "B" "C" "D "E" represent your rhyming words.

examples.)
Ex. 1)
xxxxxx xxxxxA
xxxxxx xxxxxA

Ex. 1a)
"one day I plan to see amongst all of this, smoke and the ashes
to be a part of this hip hop when you, hopelessly gassed kid"

this is a fairly simple rhyme scheme, the end of each bar is what rhymes. basic, but a good start.

Ex. 2)
xxxxxA xxxxxB
xxxxxA xxxxxB

Ex. 2a)
"I try to see the light but Its seems to me it's dimmin
and every time i try to do whats right I end up sinnin"

notice the words "light" and "right" approx. in the middle of each bar. that adds an internal rhyme scheme to this.. this is a little more advanced but not hard to get the hang of once you get crackin at it. as well as you have the original end words rhyming..

Ex. 3)

xxAxxx xxxxxA
xxAxxx xxxxxA

Ex. 3a)
"I'm tired of wakin-up, havin ta take-the-bus
sick a not makin-bucks, an bein... flat on my face-wit-luck"

this takes a little more practice and as you get better with multisyllable rhyming you will find this scheme alot easier.

Ex. 4)

A B C D E
A B C D E

Ex. 4a)

" I spray fools like grafitti with my nouns and verbs
and stay cool like tahitti smokin pounds of herb"

[_Lyrics]

well considering if you watched any magi you would know they are just a japanese interpretation of arabian nights stories.

so to put it short, no. but some anime is dope though

[Soule]

Only Magi I like is the Legend of Sinbad ironically.

[Cody Phoenix]

well considering if you watched any magi you would know they are just a japanese interpretation of arabian nights stories.

so to put it short, no. but some anime is dope though

true true

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Multies cant be taught through a forum tutorial, foh, you need to show @WHORTICULTURE other writers' and their ways of writing them out.

[_Lyrics]

johnny did you just move my thread?
there's a reason i posted it up here.
it's a lyric video, please do me a favor and put it back thanks

[Soule]

Post the verse up then with the video above it or something. This forum is for topicals bud.

[_Lyrics]

dont give me that bud bullshit, you think just cause you got some mod powers back that you can go and move my shit around to a dead fucking forum, it was a topical. im not reposting my shit, your going to be a good mod and do the right thing or another one will. im sure with all my posting it's such a necessity you have to sort where they're going right? please. this is why forums like these die, all these rules and enforcements, whos bringing the two link rule back exactly too johnny? all the mods and om in general, or you know, just you because you got your powers back you biting bastard.

i will digress when you put my shit back