10 lines due in an hour as suggested.
Good luck.
Niggamortis
OG Maestro
10 lines due in an hour as suggested.
Good luck.
LOL. Dope verse tbh.
"Architexts".... I sure do market wrecks, so these words won't delay.
The techs light his face during slumber for gettin' this message late.
This nigga finished, I've been a menace, you should've known dawg.
Deuce'll split this ace from society, we raise arms like a role call.
It didn't register? Ain't peep my tape? Hasn't this nigga stole, y'all?
I'll catch a double homi with six bucks, figured it's what I owe dawg.
You a bird, nigga, all G does is regurgitate words DNA been preachin'.
Crack his egg, end OG, then make his mom drink the shit he was thinkin'.
Die by the booth, either way, if he ain't there when we screech in the Lincoln?
We'll camp and shoot when OG comes out like some new sneaks releasin'.
Spoiler:
So you live in Dubai?Originally Posted by His Profile
About Niggamortis
Age:18 Locationubai Interests:Philosophy, Psychology
I'm guessing you use to Heat Pressed to ya Body. but my chrome is fair
When this Fire Goes Around Son? Guaranteed his Soul 'A Flare
If you're so In-Depth w/ Philosophy, only right I Bury Ya & leave ya optionless,
When I put this "Deep Thinker" underground. he'll be w/ his Sub-Consciousness
10 lines, huh? Shit. I can't breathe, laughing. That's what he asking?
OG the Architect,
He ain't built to win. Cat'll List 10 reasons then bomb it & STILL won't get a reaction
You dumb weak. I son each nigga that have "Shots Fired" at me to compete
You the type to watch Anime all day. Then talk guns but ironically ain't got One Piece
Dr. Frost the Orthopedist. I can tell he's a fake by eyeing the enemy
He wanna shoot with No Metal. that's not Bad to the Bone. that's an Iron Deficiency
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Architexts".... I sure do market wrecks, so these words won't delay.
The techs light his face during slumber for gettin' this message late.
(mmm eh)
This nigga finished, I've been a menace, you should've known dawg.
Deuce'll split this ace from society, we raise arms like a role call.
(ok. but ending ur punch in "we raise arms like a role call is hella light. I get that its apart of the same scheme n its leading up to something but still..this is filler thus far)
It didn't register? Ain't peep my tape? Hasn't this nigga stole, y'all?
I'll catch a double homi with six bucks, figured it's what I owe dawg.
(really creative w/ the movie reference. but its a little obscure man. for example... Ive watche that movie like 20x and to this day I didn't know exactly how much money he took from the register lol. wtf. that's like remember exactly what was on the sandwich the Chinese guy was mkin for o dawg. "yeah it had swiss cheese w/ exactly 24 holes in it lol" shit like that. this is a prime example of "doing too much" . its creative but it doesn't resonate a lot)
You a bird, nigga, all G does is regurgitate words DNA been preachin'.
Crack his egg, end OG, then make his mom drink the shit he was thinkin'.
(this was dirty tho)
Die by the booth, either way, if he ain't there when we screech in the Lincoln?
We'll camp and shoot when OG comes out like some new sneaks releasin'.
(mm ok)
I'm guessing you use to Heat Pressed to ya Body. but my chrome is fair
When this Fire Goes Around Son? Guaranteed his Soul 'A Flare
(dirty)
If you're so In-Depth w/ Philosophy, only right I Bury Ya & leave ya optionless,
When I put this "Deep Thinker" underground. he'll be w/ his Sub-Consciousness
(mmm not so much imho)
10 lines, huh? Shit. I can't breathe, laughing. That's what he asking?
OG the Architect,
He ain't built to win. Cat'll List 10 reasons then bomb it & STILL won't get a reaction
(mm barely ok)
You dumb weak. I son each nigga that have "Shots Fired" at me to compete
You the type to watch Anime all day. Then talk guns but ironically ain't got One Piece
(OH SHIT lotb)
Dr. Frost the Orthopedist. I can tell he's a fake by eyeing the enemy
He wanna shoot with No Metal. that's not Bad to the Bone. that's an Iron Deficiency
(this was pretty good)
I got og w/ a more consistent verse but I see what niggamortis was doing . just a little too much if u gotta post a shit load of explanations talm bout how much EXACTLY o dawg took from the register.
v/og
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@Niggamortis @OG Maestro
48hrs to provide two voting links or im closing this
You a bird, nigga, all G does is regurgitate words DNA been preachin'.
Crack his egg, end OG, then make his mom drink the shit he was thinkin'.
Die by the booth, either way, if he ain't there when we screech in the Lincoln?
We'll camp and shoot when OG comes out like some new sneaks releasin'.
pretty cool
I'm guessing you use to Heat Pressed to ya Body. but my chrome is fair
When this Fire Goes Around Son? Guaranteed his Soul 'A Flare
If you're so In-Depth w/ Philosophy, only right I Bury Ya & leave ya optionless,
When I put this "Deep Thinker" underground. he'll be w/ his Sub-Consciousness
You dumb weak. I son each nigga that have "Shots Fired" at me to compete
You the type to watch Anime all day. Then talk guns but ironically ain't got One Piece
I hate to say it but I have to give it to OG...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...-OPEN-FOR-FEED
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...s-CallmeHungry
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O dawg was aight, and the crack his head mother drink way he was thinking that was dope
Vs
Soul a flare, and anime...
Got you guys tied in quotes you both had some misses imo, nigg had some cool concepts but a few bars were all over the place. Og 's misses were better than niggs but some of them were worded a bit choppy but i got
Og taking this for better misses and half a quote better
V/og
Bring this to the chat.... Stop freeposting
Niggamortus:
O dog line was good.
Og:
Solar flare, shots fired.
Overall, easy battle for maestro.
Mortus, u got potential but try to make ur punchlines a lil more direct.
Vote og
Kill a bitch and kill her kid
all depends what her nigga did
-herbo
4-0 uppin
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just to close this...
mortis had that owe dawg line but the rest jus seemed to be ok concepts executed poorly. and a lot of unnecessary expos, if u think someone wont get it, dont post it.
og, the one piece part and the first bar were jus about enough to win this imo. concepts were pretty good, i think wording fucked u on a couple bars but u did enough to win w/ those 2 bars.
v. og
better consistency and overall just a better conceptually formed verse.
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the theory of cause and effect is flawed,
we expect the outcome to mirror the struggle, that's wrong.
@Killing Spree
5-0 KOOOOOOO!!!! lmfao
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