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[Easy.]

sometimes trying to hard makes the punch come off as wack

has nothing to do w/ superbrain creativity or w.e

either the angle is wack in its inception or it doesn't resonate. point blank period pretty much

none of u are dropping bars that are too complex. n if u really think that then u need a reality check.

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- to no one in particular. js

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sometimes I might miss a tie in or something

but thn its explained to me and im like nope. still wack. lol

complexity does not = effective all the time

Not what I meant. I know y'all see the direction of the bar, but I force them if I think of them... Like my "A-Loomin-Notti" bar in LLL. That's just me tryna be too witty and/or putting the play over the punch. I'm not saying that you don't get the bar, I'm saying the play is typically being shoehorned into the bar. And it's my fault. That by no means is an excuse.

[John Noir]

@Jonny Blaze lets battle 10 lines due tonight.

I would but

[OG Maestro]

^I got hiiigghhhhhh

[Attack of the Muff]

Not what I meant. I know y'all see the direction of the bar, but I force them if I think of them... Like my "A-Loomin-Notti" bar in LLL. That's just me tryna be too witty and/or putting the play over the punch. I'm not saying that you don't get the bar, I'm saying the play is typically being shoehorned into the bar. And it's my fault. That by no means is an excuse.

I wasn't referring to you

no one in particular. lol aka og maestro

hahahah hhahaha im dying

coz hes always like "YO B U LIKE THE 3rd person who missed my bar b" n im like no I got it. and hes like "nigga im the davinci code of text" and im like "ok ok og ur the superbrain. u take the limitless pillz n write the bestest most complexes barz og"

[OG Maestro]

I never said my bars were like stfuuuu

For 3 weeks straight, I had 3 battles where 1 bar was completely misunderstood and I was contemplating using expos in the future

das it.

[Easy.]

Lmao.

I got a question for y'all though. Does these two lines read different flow wise?

You get your Math-off-a-bit and the Net-Sees and says you won it
Vs.
You get your Math off a bit and the net sees and says you won it.

[OG Maestro]

and it was perfectly placed, no bad wording like some complicated bars with 1 too many concepts

[John Noir]

Stfu

[Attack of the Muff]

lol

[OG Maestro]

Lmao.

I got a question for y'all though. Does these two lines read different flow wise?

You get your Math-off-a-bit and the Net-Sees and says you won it
Vs.
You get your Math off a bit and the net sees and says you won it.

Depends on how you choose to read them.

If you read them in normal default cadence, there's no difference

[Attack of the Muff]

Lmao.

I got a question for y'all though. Does these two lines read different flow wise?

You get your Math-off-a-bit and the Net-Sees and says you won it
Vs.
You get your Math off a bit and the net sees and says you won it.

im lost. lol

a little bit I guess in the first one I say netcees as in one word.

in the second its separated so theres a slight delay I guess

[Easy.]

The question referred to how y'all read dashes. I do dashes to indicate plays and I was wondering if I should

[Notti]

Lmao.

I got a question for y'all though. Does these two lines read different flow wise?

You get your Math-off-a-bit and the Net-Sees and says you won it
Vs.
You get your Math off a bit and the net sees and says you won it.

please tell me this ain't something you ever considered using.

[OG Maestro]

please tell me this ain't something you ever considered using.

already did.

[Notti]

The question referred to how y'all read dashes. I do dashes to indicate plays and I was wondering if I should

well you shouldn't use the dashes cuz it looks childish, sometimes you may need something, but most the time if its wording properly the reader will get it

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already did.

lmfao, what is it supposed to mean.. i feel like im looking for a subliminal message in there