Front Lines Chat

[παmε]

Shup



Sawp




Lol wacklenoxrappin killed me tho can't front

[Lenox]

It's hard writing a verse against someone who you know your going to lose to.

[παmε]

nah. that's when you untuck the penis and put you big boy pants on and write to your full potential.



who knows? you may catch him sleeping. my mentors back in the day told me to always write to slaughter because anyone can beat anyone on any givin day.

[Lenox]

nah. that's when you untuck the penis and put you big boy pants on and write to your full potential.



who knows? you may catch him sleeping. my mentors back in the day told me to always write to slaughter because anyone can beat anyone on any givin day.

Word up, thanks for the advice

[Wordz AhGod.]

It's hard writing a verse against someone who you know your going to lose to.

Spits verse was good but not unbeatable. That's all the motivation you should need. He gave you a huge hook up too by dropping early.

[alphadog]

Is this good lol


ur gals got Fresh silly cone tits, id release the stich so her boob job leaks a bit
If i seen ur gal i wouldn't jus steroid make hormone n please the bitch,

[Wordz AhGod.]

Terrible. Wording is all over the place. Concept is not clear, transition from first line to the second is none existent, the wordplay isn't delivered well at all.. the word gal was used twice which makes the line bland and seem as though you don't have creativity. . The word steroid seems to be randomly placed there and it kills whatever attempt you are trying to make. First line is far too long which in turn disrupts the flow and kills your delivery.

[Lenox]

Spits verse was good but not unbeatable. That's all the motivation you should need. He gave you a huge hook up too by dropping early.

Word

[alphadog]

Is this good lol


ur chicks got fresh silicon tits, id release the stich so her boob job leaks a bit
If i seen ur gal i wouldn't jus stare i'd make her moan n please the bitch,

tat clear now

[Wordz AhGod.]

Got it.. now I see what you were trying to do with the steroid, it would have been beyond forced. Your punch lacks sting because you're saying she's good enough to stare at. The multi flow in your first line doesn't quite fit right with each other so this hurts the setup.

[alphadog]

. The multi flow in your first line doesn't quite fit right with each other so this hurts the setup.

syllable count

[Fresh]

Got it.. now I see what you were trying to do with the steroid, it would have been beyond forced. Your punch lacks sting because you're saying she's good enough to stare at. The multi flow in your first line doesn't quite fit right with each other so this hurts the setup.

To be fair he's Irish so probably does say I'd like oid lmao

[Wordz AhGod.]

Lol kill that noise bro

[Lenox]

I'm tryna drop but spit dropped 12 and I thought we were doing 10... We never agreed on it..

[Fresh]

I'm tryna drop but spit dropped 12 and I thought we were doing 10... We never agreed on it..

He dropped first u have to match