Originally Posted by
alphadog
Lenox,
Duke swinging at me in this battle, I straight ducked, now this bitch is missing me
He's missed so many punches in the past that journalists predicted he had muscular dystrophy,
^^^ Nice intro medi punch
Homie a child rapist and that's obviously the truth,
He throws kids down in his well, news casters identify him as the "fountain of youth"
^^ idk wat the reference is here but i think cud of been worded better, nice concept
Wine just mad cause cats ain't helping him, don't blame me, you ain't know me par,
The only time this "Wine" getting "Tips" is when he's working at his local bar,
^^ i see wat you were trying to achieve here but it was all forced and "know me par" wtf is that lol
I'll fuck up Sunny's dental till it shatters, none of his homies saving his back,
You'd think I'm referencing Metallica but Nothing Else Matters when your conscious is Fading To Black,
^^ don't like Metallica but i get the quote nah didn't work to stretched and no inner flow
He complains about not getting enough subs on his channel, you were never ahead of your time,
And just remember one thing, like a ugly bitches year book, you'll never get signed
^^ nice finisher there lad,, punch was light but effective
Vs
WineO
Len dont put in work. everything he writes makes him seem dense
dont even bother breaking your piggy bank.. ur shit still wont make sense
^^^ Whack pmsl real weak
I see everything, you miss things under your own roof in plain sight
I have an acute sense of awareness, you have acute mom I fuck every night
^^ nah badly worded and weird
im a craftsman in this rap shit..i'll beast all you fools
the only thing ur skilsaw is weakness like cheap carpenter tools
^^ not feelin this dude no effort
kid don't fuck with me again, I was your age at your birth
now I'm almost twice yours, like what ur girls says about my length and girth
^^ whack
comparing are skills? there's not a chance that your hurting me..
I got punches that will end Lens so quick you'll think i got lasix eye surgery
^^ i like wat u was trying to do here not very creative, but was ok
v Lenox
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