Front Lines Chat

[miracle]

Dies it have links up?

touche

[miracle]

give me 30 mins

[kid sick,]

Last night it was Kush and Ciroc, I was super geeked.

[Ol Negro]

^can i beat my dick off your sig

[Letterman]

@Wordz AhGod.

Every bartender, but dickriders stay on your jock
So these shots will easily fuck him up...like a bottle of ciroc

Similes son...

[Wordz AhGod.]

You're using wordplays all wrong in my view.. could just say bar tender rather then bartender just to throw it off a bit. I prefer wordplays where you spell out the phrase rather then just the wordplay. That way, it hits harder when dudes connect it together and doesn't come off as cliché or played. 2nd line was butt cheese shit and you know it lol

[Letterman]

But if you don't use the wordplay(and you say it seperately) some people might actually miss it. They might not get the connection. And the second line was a good concept lmao but I didn't word it right.

[KnowP]

wordz hates wording... i cant do this anymore

*walks past officers with hands in pockets*

[Letterman]

wordz hates wording... i cant do this anymore

*walks past officers with hands in pockets*

Is KnowP actually nope? Lol I've seen people use it like that in some of your battles but I always looked at it like "no P"

[Wordz AhGod.]

dudes missing is the chance you have to take.. its up to how you connect it.. also, a lot of dudes put the connection thats supposed to tie it together at the beginning of the first line, in some cases its a bad move since by the time they hit the finale, they'll forget that connection was even there unless they go back to look. its like the line I used against Gal for the LLL semis, I honestly thought it would have gotten more "its forced" comments then what it actually got. was something like,

My audios could resurrect the site, ur CD's get thrown like frisbees
I promise, if ur in any track.. it better be stones going thru ur swollen kindeys.

^that likely couldn't have worked if I used the actual word it was meant to replace but because of the wording it did.. not a dope bar now that I look back on it but it got quoted by the majority.

[Letterman]

dudes missing is the chance you have to take.. its up to how you connect it.. also, a lot of dudes put the connection thats supposed to tie it together at the beginning of the first line, in some cases its a bad move since by the time they hit the finale, they'll forget that connection was even there unless they go back to look. its like the line I used against Gal for the LLL semis, I honestly thought it would have gotten more "its forced" comments then what it actually got. was something like,

My audios could resurrect the site, ur CD's get thrown like frisbees
I promise, if ur in any track.. it better be stones going thru ur swollen kindeys.

^that likely couldn't have worked if I used the actual word it was meant to replace but because of the wording it did.. not a dope bar now that I look back on it but it got quoted by the majority.

Tract? Yeah it wouldn't have worked. It's like sometimes they work that way and sometimes they don't, depending on the word.

[body bags]

Yeah i learned something from this since i switch over to a wordplay heavy style good points but i only quoted that bar cuz of the creativity not the wordyplay itself

[Ol Negro]

boby bags blows

[Amen]

Chilling @Lawd - been crazy busy these past few weeks, man.

[Greedy]

Will vote on tag battles later.