King vs Killing Spree [King wins]

[Fresh]

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@King vs
@Killing Spree

Check ins due THURSDAY JULY, 31 2014 11;59PM EST

Verses due WEDNESDAY, AUGUST, 6 2014 11:59PM EST

12 - 20 lines.

ALL FL RULES APPLY.

GOOD LUCK GENTLEMEN

[King]

fafadsfa

[Spree]

14 or 16?

[King]

14.

[Fresh]

@Killing Spree @King verses are due today

[Spree]

King D…Youtube Shots fired.

that meant me gambling on dudes i wasn't confident would show.

Fuck’a fat kid! Shred ya cabage for thinkin ya rappin hard…
Ya soft & only time ppl diet king..s’when he pull up a seat @ the salad bar!
Try’n to sell himself as a net beast, but what you produce aint deadly…
& He couldn’t handle the price of losing a champ…so then he left Netcees!
You aint hood & chicks want u to lay last, but you dropped prior…
So if they say they shake it on king D? its cos they booty clapp’n to shots fired!
He’s to massive to swing for the fence, u fuckin blubber’n waste…
Its no wonder jeter wants to hang’m up…King’s known for cover’n plates!
Fat fucks feeling exhaust, trying to pick up spree?… This bros fucked…
So this the last day your stuck in first, & I have no clue how to fix a blown clutch!
This dudes a fake faggot with no future how I ether lames…
Went to KING from Lyrisic and we have yet to see you live up to either name!
Ya punches are rich but lack cents.. this dummy? Dropped’m!...
Its clear you a faggot from the quote^^^ and also you really got a money problem!

[King]

i'm not gonna be able to drop tonight. i can definitely drop tomorrow night if ur cool with an ext or i'll just key up some bullshit later. ur call.

my bad

[Spree]

Do what ever I'm gone till monday

[Spree]

@Fresh @KiNG.

Give him till mid night he's had a week to write

[Fresh]

@Fresh @KiNG.

Give him till mid night he's had a week to write

@King you have till midnight

[King]

word

[King]

just gonna post what i have.




This is noob bashing...

Cats wanna see a crazy show. Top tier exchangin blows
Only time they wanna see a King/Killing Spree show is game of thrones
U cant compare to the GOAT. Ur trash, the whole site is feelin' me
We only got one thing in common: ur Killing Spree...n I'm KILLING Spree
His chick is NASTY. n I heard she done got her box sick,
Now that ho pussy smell like old Sushi. Spree gotta eat her out w/ chop sticks
n If u dont think ur writtens are what the definition of trash is
Plz leave in an orderly fashion: gettin dragged in a nut house kickin n thrashin
U champ?!? Ur funny. I'm lmao. Can barely squeeze a breath
Ur like a text comic..w/ exclamations after punches we never see connect
Ur wack
Its a fact
Eat a dick
Quick

[Elvis Freshley]

Fuck’a fat kid! Shred ya cabage for thinkin ya rappin hard…
Ya soft & only time ppl diet king..s’when he pull up a seat @ the salad bar!
^^^3.5/5 Haha I laughed at “Fuck’a fat kid!” haha the punch was cool though, not sure everyone knows what King’s is though since I’m pretty sure it’s only in PA?

Try’n to sell himself as a net beast, but what you produce aint deadly…
& He couldn’t handle the price of losing a champ…so then he left Netcees!
^^^ 3/5 again this is a personal that only people that were on that site at the time would really get. It’s too obscure and even assuming it’s true.. it’s not that hard.

You aint hood & chicks want u to lay last, but you dropped prior…
So if they say they shake it on king D? its cos they booty clapp’n to shots fired!
^^^ 3.5/5 haha this one wasn’t bad, set up was shaky but punch was cool.

He’s to massive to swing for the fence, u fuckin blubber’n waste…
Its no wonder jeter wants to hang’m up…King’s known for cover’n plates!
^^^ 3/5 isn’t King not actually fat? Like a punch or two could be ironically funny but basing the whole verse around an untrue personal is risky man.

Fat fucks feeling exhaust, trying to pick up spree?… This bros fucked…
So this the last day your stuck in first, & I have no clue how to fix a blown clutch!
^^^3.5/5 the blown clutch thing is pretty slick, initially with the set up I was like “Seriously another fat thing” haha

This dudes a fake faggot with no future how I ether lames…
Went to KING from Lyrisic and we have yet to see you live up to either name!
^^^ 4/5 I really felt this one, solid shit man.

Ya punches are rich but lack cents.. this dummy? Dropped’m!...
Its clear you a faggot from the quote^^^ and also you really got a money problem!
^^^ 4/5 the sense/cents thing has been beaten the fuck up, but this was still a pretty nice flip to it. I liked it.

Overall: 24.5/35 The fat stuff got old considering he’s not fat. But overall you came pretty correct, some misses some basic stuff but a couple solid hits.

King

Cats wanna see a crazy show. Top tier exchangin blows
Only time they wanna see a King/Killing Spree show is game of thrones
^^^ 4/5 game of thrones punches are cool to me right now haha so this came off correct.

U cant compare to the GOAT. Ur trash, the whole site is feelin' me
We only got one thing in common: ur Killing Spree...n I'm KILLING Spree
^^^ 4/5 This was pretty fucking nasty honestly. Dug this a lot

His chick is NASTY. n I heard she done got her box sick,
Now that ho pussy smell like old Sushi. Spree gotta eat her out w/ chop sticks
^^^3.5/5 this was funny, wouldn’t really call it a punch but the flow was cool “done got her box sick” seemed sort of awkward though.

n If u dont think ur writtens are what the definition of trash is
Plz leave in an orderly fashion: gettin dragged in a nut house kickin n thrashin
^^^3/5 meh… mainly just some filler

U champ?!? Ur funny. I'm lmao. Can barely squeeze a breath
Ur like a text comic..w/ exclamations after punches we never see connect
^^^ 3.5/5 This was funny because he does use the “!” a ton… but I think the correlation went over my head. How do comics and punches that don’t connect… connect?

Ur wack
Its a fact
^^^ 0/5 yeah

Eat a dick
Quick
^^^ 0/5 mhmm

Overall: 18/35 You started off pretty sick really, fizzled a little the more you went on until ultimately dropping early.


This isn’t really a fair one to judge because Spree just had more content to help him out, whereas king has the harder hits overall. It was like two big haymakers… vs a thousand little jabs. Spree just out lasted him ultimately. Vote Spree.

[Wordz AhGod.]

Fuck’a fat kid! Shred ya cabage for thinkin ya rappin hard…
Ya soft & only time ppl diet king..s’when he pull up a seat @ the salad bar!
not sure if you going for some wordplay with "diet King" but it doesn't make sense, salad bar was weak too since you're calling him fat.
Try’n to sell himself as a net beast, but what you produce aint deadly…
& He couldn’t handle the price of losing a champ…so then he left Netcees!
this wasn't too hard, could have been a good personal if it was true.
You aint hood & chicks want u to lay last, but you dropped prior…
So if they say they shake it on king D? its cos they booty clapp’n to shots fired!
nahh this could have been dope but the execution just wasn't right
He’s to massive to swing for the fence, u fuckin blubber’n waste…
Its no wonder jeter wants to hang’m up…King’s known for cover’n plates!
ok concept, would have worked out if there was someone on the site named jeter though, as it stands.. it is unrelated to him so the concept comes of as a reach.
Fat fucks feeling exhaust, trying to pick up spree?… This bros fucked…
So this the last day your stuck in first, & I have no clue how to fix a blown clutch!
could have been worded better, not a bad concept.
This dudes a fake faggot with no future how I ether lames…
Went to KING from Lyrisic and we have yet to see you live up to either name!
this was cool, not sure if he was lyrisic or not tho.. if he was then this was a good hit.
Ya punches are rich but lack cents.. this dummy? Dropped’m!...
Its clear you a faggot from the quote^^^ and also you really got a money problem!
this was terrible, felt lazy.

vs

Cats wanna see a crazy show. Top tier exchangin blows
Only time they wanna see a King/Killing Spree show is game of thrones
nahhh, wasn't feeling it.
U cant compare to the GOAT. Ur trash, the whole site is feelin' me
We only got one thing in common: ur Killing Spree...n I'm KILLING Spree
nahhh, wasn't feeling it.
His chick is NASTY. n I heard she done got her box sick,
Now that ho pussy smell like old Sushi. Spree gotta eat her out w/ chop sticks
nahhh, wasn't feeling it
n If u dont think ur writtens are what the definition of trash is
Plz leave in an orderly fashion: gettin dragged in a nut house kickin n thrashin
think I seen this word for word before, or maybe just played.
U champ?!? Ur funny. I'm lmao. Can barely squeeze a breath
Ur like a text comic..w/ exclamations after punches we never see connect
this was cool, not hard but cool
Ur wack
Its a fact
Eat a dick
Quick

so king had one line I would consider quotable vs killing spree who had a lot of attempts but nothing really standing out. I almost went with Killing spree here cos i wasn't seeing shit from king.

v/king

[KnowP]

You aint hood & chicks want u to lay last, but you dropped prior…
So if they say they shake it on king D? its cos they booty clapp’n to shots fired!
Fat fucks feeling exhaust, trying to pick up spree?… This bros fucked…
So this the last day your stuck in first, & I have no clue how to fix a blown clutch!



vs



His chick is NASTY. n I heard she done got her box sick,
Now that ho pussy smell like old Sushi. Spree gotta eat her out w/ chop sticks
U champ?!? Ur funny. I'm lmao. Can barely squeeze a breath
Ur like a text comic..w/ exclamations after punches we never see connect



sucks king key'd up a verse. would've been better to make Spree work for this title a bit harder. didnt use personals and wording was bad. Spree had poor wording but his misses werent as bad as kings. had some aight concepts but execution was pretty good. not a bad champ match, but i woulda liked to have seen better verses from both. close and will go either way.



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