Heavy Weight Champ Match!!!!!!!!
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Heavy Weight Champ Match!!!!!!!!
[I]12-20 lines
Agree on limit or match 1st poster
Check in by Wednesday 1159 pm eastern
Verses due Friday 1159 pm eastern
Last edited by KnowP; March 28th, 2011 at 11:37 AM
check...goin 14
Yeah.
DayumNation
lol... this will have to do, good luck man.
I may do you a favor, because you prolly thinkin I'm wack and I'm hoping,
Cause I'm here to change your mind... when I crack your head wide open,
Don't quit ya day job to rhyme just cause you employed a style like mine,
Cause you can't expect unemployment... when steppin up to my firing line,
Your always dropping bitch bars, so I doubt your ability to ever spit hard,
Wondered why DLB talked out his ass, then found out where your lips are,
No sense in debatin, I ain't ducked your callout, just aint as active lately,
But its true, I've been bitch slapped, like I tried Marv's game on the ladies,
Your fag verse.. I'll trash it, fuck the facts, your mental cap cant hack it,
Marv don't think ahead when he writes, thats why he's left to get shafted,
The doc dropped you on your face n he cracked it, talk shit? now back it,
If you even survive this face off......... you'll be leavin twice as attractive,
Fucking biter, guess what, I'm just waiting on the title to be coughed up,
Cuz you got band-aid punches that'll only sting the fucks u ripped em off of...
DayumNation
my bar's out this world son u aint takin none of my shyne.
i gota be a mc atmosphere cuz he ducked me a couple of times.
i kno ur in embarrass that,ur house has less room than a cadillac.
y grab the gat i got savage cats i call gmail.com,they comin after @.
run along with ur average raps...nobody a ever sign this sucker.
when it comes to droppn jewls im slick rick & ur umm brian pumper.
this broke has no swag thats why his wifey stay wit me.
see how he dress in avy? A got the attire of a mechanic in his late 50's.
this nigga say he dope but stay losin im saught of not relatin.
i saw so many atL's if u add em up u'll have georgia's population.
c'mon lets stop hatin!..ima legend and fagget you a ZERO.
how can i lose to a stupid queer tho..who wish he was a super hero.
he wanna be wolverine lmaoo i can tell u bored when u write.
need some feed? marvel help you..that was worse om i saw in my life.
my bar's out this world son u aint takin none of my shyne.
i gota be a mc atmosphere cuz he ducked me a couple of times.
not really a good opener...
i kno ur in embarrass that,ur house has less room than a cadillac.
y grab the gat i got savage cats i call gmail.com,they comin after @.
I like thatnice nameplay...good punch...nice bar
run along with ur average raps...nobody a ever sign this sucker.
when it comes to droppn jewls im slick rick & ur umm brian pumper.
nope maybe in a audio forum///
this broke has no swag thats why his wifey stay wit me.
see how he dress in avy? A got the attire of a mechanic in his late 50's.
didnt really rhyme ...ok personal still not that funny
this nigga say he dope but stay losin im saught of not relatin.
i saw so many atL's if u add em up u'll have georgia's population.
nice nameplay...again mayb u should stick to name plays...lol good bar
c'mon lets stop hatin!..ima legend and fagget you a ZERO.
how can i lose to a stupid queer tho..who wish he was a super hero.
nope..
he wanna be wolverine lmaoo i can tell u bored when u write.
need some feed? marvel help you..that was worse om i saw in my life.
ok at best...
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I may do you a favor, because you prolly thinkin I'm wack and I'm hoping,
Cause I'm here to change your mind... when I crack your head wide open,
ok multi not very good punch...ok
Don't quit ya day job to rhyme just cause you employed a style like mine,
Cause you can't expect unemployment... when steppin up to my firing line,
nope idnt really hit for me
Your always dropping bitch bars, so I doubt your ability to ever spit hard,
Wondered why DLB talked out his ass, then found out where your lips are,
lol...thats funny
No sense in debatin, I ain't ducked your callout, just aint as active lately,
But its true, I've been bitch slapped, like I tried Marv's game on the ladies,
ok...not as hard as it could have been still ok tho
Your fag verse.. I'll trash it, fuck the facts, your mental cap cant hack it,
Marv don't think ahead when he writes, thats why he's left to get shafted,
nope set up multi was cool tho
The doc dropped you on your face n he cracked it, talk shit? now back it,
If you even survive this face off......... you'll be leavin twice as attractive,
i get it but it seems...weird idk maybe im trippin but y would u leave him more attractive, mayb half as attractive i dont get the 2x part
Fucking biter, guess what, I'm just waiting on the title to be coughed up,
Cuz you got band-aid punches that'll only sting the fucks u ripped em off of...
nope..bad closer
v/marv for 2 good name flips ...thats about it..
"the ink of a scholar, is worth a thousand times more, than the blood of a martyr"--lupe fiasco
"I'm sonnin' ya'll like father's day/disrespect pop and get popped like Marvin Gaye" Skillz
WRITTEN VOICES
I may do you a favor, because you prolly thinkin I'm wack and I'm hoping,
Cause I'm here to change your mind... when I crack your head wide open,
cool idea
Don't quit ya day job to rhyme just cause you employed a style like mine,
Cause you can't expect unemployment... when steppin up to my firing line,
dopeee
Your always dropping bitch bars, so I doubt your ability to ever spit hard,
Wondered why DLB talked out his ass, then found out where your lips are,
reall cool
No sense in debatin, I ain't ducked your callout, just aint as active lately,
But its true, I've been bitch slapped, like I tried Marv's game on the ladies,
ightt
Your fag verse.. I'll trash it, fuck the facts, your mental cap cant hack it,
Marv don't think ahead when he writes, thats why he's left to get shafted,
nice set up, didnt like the punch
The doc dropped you on your face n he cracked it, talk shit? now back it,
If you even survive this face off......... you'll be leavin twice as attractive,
i didnt like this
Fucking biter, guess what, I'm just waiting on the title to be coughed up,
Cuz you got band-aid punches that'll only sting the fucks u ripped em off of...
decent closer
vs
my bar's out this world son u aint takin none of my shyne.
i gota be a mc atmosphere cuz he ducked me a couple of times.
arite opener
i kno ur in embarrass that,ur house has less room than a cadillac.
y grab the gat i got savage cats i call gmail.com,they comin after @.
dopee, sick word play
run along with ur average raps...nobody a ever sign this sucker.
when it comes to droppn jewls im slick rick & ur umm brian pumper.
i like this
this broke has no swag thats why his wifey stay wit me.
see how he dress in avy? A got the attire of a mechanic in his late 50's.
okk
this nigga say he dope but stay losin im saught of not relatin.
i saw so many atL's if u add em up u'll have georgia's population.
cool name play again
c'mon lets stop hatin!..ima legend and fagget you a ZERO.
how can i lose to a stupid queer tho..who wish he was a super hero.
simple rhyme but decent punch
he wanna be wolverine lmaoo i can tell u bored when u write.
need some feed? marvel help you..that was worse om i saw in my life
nice finish
Overal: At, came pretty cool that line with the "stepped in my firing line" and the "talkin out of your ass and found out where your lips are" lines were dope as fuck haha, i was with your flow through the whole verse pretty good job. Marv that gmail line after @ was dopee and your closer just had a really raw feeling to it... flow was on punches were creative..
Vote Marv - for just coming a little bit harder, heated battled both of you came hard in my opinion just Marv was a bit more consistant... Nice Drops
Hit these up with an honest one if ya can, good luck to both of you.
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A.T.
I may do you a favor, because you prolly thinkin I'm wack and I'm hoping,
Cause I'm here to change your mind... when I crack your head wide open,
descent opener
Your always dropping bitch bars, so I doubt your ability to ever spit hard,
Wondered why DLB talked out his ass, then found out where your lips are,
lol
No sense in debatin, I ain't ducked your callout, just aint as active lately,
But its true, I've been bitch slapped, like I tried Marv's game on the ladies,
this bar was ok. but i bolded it because it was a good preemptive bar and took the sting out of Marv opener.
The doc dropped you on your face n he cracked it, talk shit? now back it,
If you even survive this face off......... you'll be leavin twice as attractive,
this could have been pretty dope wording hurt this bar
Fucking biter, guess what, I'm just waiting on the title to be coughed up,
Cuz you got band-aid punches that'll only sting the fucks u ripped em off of...
good closer, flow was a bit off at the end though
vs
Marv
my bar's out this world son u aint takin none of my shyne.
i gota be a mc atmosphere cuz he ducked me a couple of times.
i dont think this bar was a feeding but A.T.s bar def hurt the impact of this bar.
i kno ur in embarrass that,ur house has less room than a cadillac.
y grab the gat i got savage cats i call gmail.com,they comin after @.
i liked this punch.
this broke has no swag thats why his wifey stay wit me.
see how he dress in avy? A got the attire of a mechanic in his late 50's.
this feels Aye Verb'ish. needed something to connect with this one to make it a punch and not a diss
this nigga say he dope but stay losin im saught of not relatin.
i saw so many atL's if u add em up u'll have georgia's population.
good hit here
he wanna be wolverine lmaoo i can tell u bored when u write.
need some feed? marvel help you..that was worse om i saw in my life.
descent closer
i actually have this battle going to A.T.. I see that a lot of Marv's punches come off as disses. im not saying A.T. went in on Marv but just looking at the quality of the punches this is in the youngins favor. I think Marv saw that he A.T. didnt drop as hard as normal and was a bit lazy because Marv has dropped a ton doper than this.
v/A.T.
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I may do you a favor, because you prolly thinkin I'm wack and I'm hoping,
Cause I'm here to change your mind... when I crack your head wide open,
this was cool but could have been worded harsher.. haven't seen this concept before I think so its pretty fresh.
Don't quit ya day job to rhyme just cause you employed a style like mine,
Cause you can't expect unemployment... when steppin up to my firing line,
wording was a bit off.. not too bad though.
Your always dropping bitch bars, so I doubt your ability to ever spit hard,
Wondered why DLB talked out his ass, then found out where your lips are,
meh
No sense in debatin, I ain't ducked your callout, just aint as active lately,
But its true, I've been bitch slapped, like I tried Marv's game on the ladies,
nah
Your fag verse.. I'll trash it, fuck the facts, your mental cap cant hack it,
Marv don't think ahead when he writes, thats why he's left to get shafted,
nah
The doc dropped you on your face n he cracked it, talk shit? now back it,
If you even survive this face off......... you'll be leavin twice as attractive,
cool.. seen a lot of face off lines but this one was pretty new.
Fucking biter, guess what, I'm just waiting on the title to be coughed up,
Cuz you got band-aid punches that'll only sting the fucks u ripped em off of...
nah.. wording was bad plus no proof of biting (to my knowledge)
vs
my bar's out this world son u aint takin none of my shyne.
i gota be a mc atmosphere cuz he ducked me a couple of times.
didn't feel this one at all.
i kno ur in embarrass that,ur house has less room than a cadillac.
y grab the gat i got savage cats i call gmail.com,they comin after @.
wack nameplay.
run along with ur average raps...nobody a ever sign this sucker.
when it comes to droppn jewls im slick rick & ur umm brian pumper.
wack..
this broke has no swag thats why his wifey stay wit me.
see how he dress in avy? A got the attire of a mechanic in his late 50's.
meh..
this nigga say he dope but stay losin im saught of not relatin.
i saw so many atL's if u add em up u'll have georgia's population.
terrible wording and played out wordplay/nameplay.. seen this done way better.
c'mon lets stop hatin!..ima legend and fagget you a ZERO.
how can i lose to a stupid queer tho..who wish he was a super hero.
wack.
he wanna be wolverine lmaoo i can tell u bored when u write.
need some feed? marvel help you..that was worse om i saw in my life.
nah.. this was pretty bad..
well.. this was onesided easily.. A.T. came with some fresh concepts and some bland ones but he never really fell behind in this battle.. marv didn't really put any effort into it from what I can tell and it showed. cool battle here though..
v/A.T.
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Your always dropping bitch bars, so I doubt your ability to ever spit hard,
Wondered why DLB talked out his ass, then found out where your lips are,
The doc dropped you on your face n he cracked it, talk shit? now back it,
If you even survive this face off......... you'll be leavin twice as attractive,
Don't quit ya day job to rhyme just cause you employed a style like mine,
Cause you can't expect unemployment... when steppin up to my firing line,
vs
my bar's out this world son u aint takin none of my shyne.
i gota be a mc atmosphere cuz he ducked me a couple of times.
this nigga say he dope but stay losin im saught of not relatin.
i saw so many atL's if u add em up u'll have georgia's population.
clsoe battle here. Marv had some good lines but some rushed ones that needed to be edited and revised. That cadillac and gmail bars woulda hit but wording was off. Too many errors for a champ match. AT actually had some good substance. that biter line was raw, but i dont know MJ to be a biter though so it was void to me. But the DLB and Attractive bars were funny shyt. Good stings. i got AT takin this by a hair. Woulda went Marvs way if he cleaned up a few bars, but other than that, this was a good battle.
v. AT
Your always dropping bitch bars, so I doubt your ability to ever spit hard,
Wondered why DLB talked out his ass, then found out where your lips are,
No sense in debatin, I ain't ducked your callout, just aint as active lately,
But its true, I've been bitch slapped, like I tried Marv's game on the ladies,
The doc dropped you on your face n he cracked it, talk shit? now back it,
If you even survive this face off......... you'll be leavin twice as attractive,
vs
i kno ur in embarrass that,ur house has less room than a cadillac.
y grab the gat i got savage cats i call gmail.com,they comin after @.
this nigga say he dope but stay losin im saught of not relatin.
i saw so many atL's if u add em up u'll have georgia's population.
This was a little onesided imo at had a lot more attempts and hits where marv needed more than an ordinary verse at gets my vote here
v/ AT
I may do you a favor, because you prolly thinkin I'm wack and I'm hoping,
Cause I'm here to change your mind... when I crack your head wide open,
mild opener
Don't quit ya day job to rhyme just cause you employed a style like mine,
Cause you can't expect unemployment... when steppin up to my firing line,
wording seemd lil off but ok
Your always dropping bitch bars, so I doubt your ability to ever spit hard,
Wondered why DLB talked out his ass, then found out where your lips are,
ehh decent
No sense in debatin, I ain't ducked your callout, just aint as active lately,
But its true, I've been bitch slapped, like I tried Marv's game on the ladies,
could have been flipped better
Your fag verse.. I'll trash it, fuck the facts, your mental cap cant hack it,
Marv don't think ahead when he writes, thats why he's left to get shafted,
cool
The doc dropped you on your face n he cracked it, talk shit? now back it,
If you even survive this face off......... you'll be leavin twice as attractive,
nah
Fucking biter, guess what, I'm just waiting on the title to be coughed up,
Cuz you got band-aid punches that'll only sting the fucks u ripped em off of...
wording was meh, concept was decent
vs
my bar's out this world son u aint takin none of my shyne.
i gota be a mc atmosphere cuz he ducked me a couple of times.
didnt really connect
i kno ur in embarrass that,ur house has less room than a cadillac.
y grab the gat i got savage cats i call gmail.com,they comin after @.
decent nameplay
run along with ur average raps...nobody a ever sign this sucker.
when it comes to droppn jewls im slick rick & ur umm brian pumper.
no
this broke has no swag thats why his wifey stay wit me.
see how he dress in avy? A got the attire of a mechanic in his late 50's.
didnt hit/mild avy punch
this nigga say he dope but stay losin im saught of not relatin.
i saw so many atL's if u add em up u'll have georgia's population.
cool bar
c'mon lets stop hatin!..ima legend and fagget you a ZERO.
how can i lose to a stupid queer tho..who wish he was a super hero.
came off like a statement
he wanna be wolverine lmaoo i can tell u bored when u write.
need some feed? marvel help you..that was worse om i saw in my life.
decent
this battle is close..kinda weak for a champ match..both had a good share of misses n came with mild hits. nothing stood out as 'wow'.
with that said, i feel a.t came slightly stronger. seemd like there was more power in his bars, were marv's were statementish n not that harsh
vote-> AT