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DayumNation
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and heres my links the the battles I voted on.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=437173
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=435994
DayumNation
aight... here we go...
You claimed you was gonna murder me, but watch as I flip what you say though,
And like all of the Angels up in heaven, ain't nobody here gonna be missing a Halo.
This cats arms aint long enough to land a punch on me, so he reverts to a speech,
And just like state-of-the-art game developers, look how well I made "Halo reach",
The fact is that rap is discriminitive, but this cat still sticks with the gays though,
Winless fag has only one record he can hold, and thats taking more dick then J. Lo,
Halo aint new to faggin, but he's still looking for that big dick that he can swallow,
Dude, you aint mentally fit to lead a life, so heres another punch to make u fall low,
He aint gotta a criminal record, but gives private attention to those hung in a cell,
This sick bitch puts another twist on the term, "somebody's getting sprung from jail".
DayumNation
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Enriched with disgust, Rb couldn't hold such a whacker opponent
i guess its ya own ya asphalt .. when ya face's splattered upon it
I'm called Halo cuz i'm Godbody unlike this fag type crook
i'll give you a Halo too .. combined with an uppercut, jab and right hook
No bitch would love u, you're just a false porn star wanna be
cuz his crew is so full of pussy .. its the only Entertainment he'll ever see
Describing you; fake, lame, whack, garbo, trash - Blah, ya smelly
no chick ever been stuck with A.T .. except under her fat ass belly
This bum is a joke, he's dumb and he's broke - this MC's been super Hammer'd
cuz all ya lines make more false profits .. than Christian insurance scammers
[His crew: Inifante Entertainment]
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DayumNation
You claimed you was gonna murder me, but watch as I flip what you say though,
And like all of the Angels up in heaven, ain't nobody here gonna be missing a Halo.
good opener
This cats arms aint long enough to land a punch on me, so he reverts to a speech,
And just like state-of-the-art game developers, look how well I made "Halo reach",
liked that "not long enough" and "speech"
The fact is that rap is discriminitive, but this cat still sticks with the gays though,
Winless fag has only one record he can hold, and thats taking more dick then J. Lo,
I think I got the point, but it was weak..
Halo aint new to faggin, but he's still looking for that big dick that he can swallow,
Dude, you aint mentally fit to lead a life, so heres another punch to make u fall low,
missed punch..
He aint gotta a criminal record, but gives private attention to those hung in a cell,
This sick bitch puts another twist on the term, "somebody's getting sprung from jail".
haha nice one, liked that ending
VS
Enriched with disgust, Rb couldn't hold such a whacker opponent
i guess its ya own ya asphalt .. when ya face's splattered upon it
weak opener
I'm called Halo cuz i'm Godbody unlike this fag type crook
i'll give you a Halo too .. combined with an uppercut, jab and right hook
nice flow and rhyming, but a missed punch..
No bitch would love u, you're just a false porn star wanna be
cuz his crew is so full of pussy .. its the only Entertainment he'll ever see
liked that personal, tho again, was a lil missed to me
Describing you; fake, lame, whack, garbo, trash - Blah, ya smelly
no chick ever been stuck with A.T .. except under her fat ass belly
nah...
This bum is a joke, he's dumb and he's broke - this MC's been super Hammer'd
cuz all ya lines make more false profits .. than Christian insurance scammers
didn't like the punch, liked that MC Hammer"ed" part
Final vote: non of these verses came hard, I think Imma go go with A.T. for a better opener and ending, and I kinda felt his verse more.
A.T.
You claimed you was gonna murder me, but watch as I flip what you say though,
And like all of the Angels up in heaven, ain't nobody here gonna be missing a Halo.
clean wordplay, good
This cats arms aint long enough to land a punch on me, so he reverts to a speech,
And just like state-of-the-art game developers, look how well I made "Halo reach",
lol, liked this
The fact is that rap is discriminitive, but this cat still sticks with the gays though,
Winless fag has only one record he can hold, and thats taking more dick then J. Lo,
lol, funny but a little corny
Halo aint new to faggin, but he's still looking for that big dick that he can swallow,
Dude, you aint mentally fit to lead a life, so heres another punch to make u fall low,
pretty good
He aint gotta a criminal record, but gives private attention to those hung in a cell,
This sick bitch puts another twist on the term, "somebody's getting sprung from jail".
decent closer, funny
Halo:
Enriched with disgust, Rb couldn't hold such a whacker opponent
i guess its ya own ya asphalt .. when ya face's splattered upon it
solid
I'm called Halo cuz i'm Godbody unlike this fag type crook
i'll give you a Halo too .. combined with an uppercut, jab and right hook
decent
No bitch would love u, you're just a false porn star wanna be
cuz his crew is so full of pussy .. its the only Entertainment he'll ever see
lol, nice
Describing you; fake, lame, whack, garbo, trash - Blah, ya smelly
no chick ever been stuck with A.T .. except under her fat ass belly
eh, not really feeling this. setup line was weak and punch was soft
This bum is a joke, he's dumb and he's broke - this MC's been super Hammer'd
cuz all ya lines make more false profits .. than Christian insurance scammers
setup line was wack, and the wordplay is ok, just a little stretched/outdated.
Vote: Good battle, but I gotta give it to A.T. for more consistency and harder punches. Both came good.
You claimed you was gonna murder me, but watch as I flip what you say though,
And like all of the Angels up in heaven, ain't nobody here gonna be missing a Halo.
This cats arms aint long enough to land a punch on me, so he reverts to a speech,
And just like state-of-the-art game developers, look how well I made "Halo reach",
The fact is that rap is discriminitive, but this cat still sticks with the gays though,
Winless fag has only one record he can hold, and thats taking more dick then J. Lo,
Halo aint new to faggin, but he's still looking for that big dick that he can swallow,
Dude, you aint mentally fit to lead a life, so heres another punch to make u fall low,
He aint gotta a criminal record, but gives private attention to those hung in a cell,
This sick bitch puts another twist on the term, "somebody's getting sprung from jail".
vs.
Enriched with disgust, Rb couldn't hold such a whacker opponent
i guess its ya own ya asphalt .. when ya face's splattered upon it
I'm called Halo cuz i'm Godbody unlike this fag type crook
i'll give you a Halo too .. combined with an uppercut, jab and right hook
No bitch would love u, you're just a false porn star wanna be
cuz his crew is so full of pussy .. its the only Entertainment he'll ever see
Describing you; fake, lame, whack, garbo, trash - Blah, ya smelly
no chick ever been stuck with A.T .. except under her fat ass belly
This bum is a joke, he's dumb and he's broke - this MC's been super Hammer'd
cuz all ya lines make more false profits .. than Christian insurance scammers
* I say this battle was close as fuck...so imma bring it down to the two bars that were most interesting...
A.T.
the Halo reach punch was decent, i dont think it was all that
*the last punch was legit. .but besides that the rest was not too harsh
Halo
your entertainment one was aight and your last one...so it is even ground...
but the last "Christian insurance scammers to false profits thing was nice"
because A.T. was stretched as shit i did not feel the haol reach one
V/Halo
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Nice battle....
A.T.---->
You claimed you was gonna murder me, but watch as I flip what you say though,
And like all of the Angels up in heaven, ain't nobody here gonna be missing a Halo.
-i really liked this line.. like this style..
vs.
HALO ----->
Enriched with disgust, Rb couldn't hold such a whacker opponent
i guess its ya own ya asphalt .. when ya face's splattered upon it
-I really liked this opener also.. good wordplay
Vote- A.T. easier flow, went smoother, hit me with the laughs... good battle thoug
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I agree here, both have the concepts and the ideas of punches and what it is to execute them, just need some witty lines an more creativity in this battle. Not bad. V/Halo.
Hit this link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...p/n-o-z-437215
You claimed you was gonna murder me, but watch as I flip what you say though,
And like all of the Angels up in heaven, ain't nobody here gonna be missing a Halo.
decent name flip...
This cats arms aint long enough to land a punch on me, so he reverts to a speech,
And just like state-of-the-art game developers, look how well I made "Halo reach",
not really a fan of similies... especially not 2 in a row... but this is ok too...
The fact is that rap is discriminitive, but this cat still sticks with the gays though,
Winless fag has only one record he can hold, and thats taking more dick then J. Lo,
eh... weakish...
Halo aint new to faggin, but he's still looking for that big dick that he can swallow,
Dude, you aint mentally fit to lead a life, so heres another punch to make u fall low,
not feeling...
He aint gotta a criminal record, but gives private attention to those hung in a cell,
This sick bitch puts another twist on the term, "somebody's getting sprung from jail".
don't like this either...
vs
Enriched with disgust, Rb couldn't hold such a whacker opponent
i guess its ya own ya asphalt .. when ya face's splattered upon it
wording is off... but a decent punch on an old wordplay...
I'm called Halo cuz i'm Godbody unlike this fag type crook
i'll give you a Halo too .. combined with an uppercut, jab and right hook
eh... not a fan of flipping your own name...
No bitch would love u, you're just a false porn star wanna be
cuz his crew is so full of pussy .. its the only Entertainment he'll ever see
not feeling...
Describing you; fake, lame, whack, garbo, trash - Blah, ya smelly
no chick ever been stuck with A.T .. except under her fat ass belly
nah...
This bum is a joke, he's dumb and he's broke - this MC's been super Hammer'd
cuz all ya lines make more false profits .. than Christian insurance scammers
i see what you tried to do, but it didn't really work...
AT started off ok but fell off... Halo did the same, but only his opener was decent imo
vote AT