dudes just all talk, yaps n yaps while i just take a bow
pshh, fronts so much.. he should be at the start of the line by now
J's mainstream, he'll probly drop a bar about poppin' a hundred shots
with a style so old... its startin' to develop liver spots
vs
^^^^I never been the type to quote verses..but watch me mention
that I don't follow rappers...but I'll still take Rizzo's sloppy seconds
vote=zelph,
beeter verse by a lil bit...close and decent battle...
this is gay, bump for non-noob votes!
^ lol bumpy
^^^
Jim you should be scared, i'll help you take a huge step on deck
Payne will finally be Unleashed.. once I've removed the chain from his neck
Decent word play, but love the meaning... He's a biiiiiiittch!
this time im jus guessin', maybe Jimmy can actually handle a hottie
i heard she has a fat camel toe.. along with the rest of her camel body
Eh... Be better if you had a pic of her or if she was standing right there...
dudes just all talk, yaps n yaps while i just take a bow
pshh, fronts so much.. he should be at the start of the line by now
Oooooo!!!!!!!! Beautiful! Loved this one!
J's mainstream, he'll probly drop a bar about poppin' a hundred shots
with a style so old... its startin' to develop liver spots
Loved how the second line was looking... but ehhh... the "develop" thru it off the loop
fat dirty whore ur probably think that your bad now, please
your girl finally sucked your meat.. n caught a case of mad cow disease
Feels... unfinished?
I take him down a couple notches, like I'm losin weight and adjustin' my belt
cuz you could be touchin' your own dick....still wouldn't be feelin' ya zelph
Now here we go! Beautiful beautiful personal! this is like a haymaker!
Your gay it's a fact...everyone just looks, as this dude drops and shake
cuz the last time your popped anything...it was your fat ass out of a birthday cake
and your not blowin' out no candles...your blowin' all the dicks you can handle
this guys not gay...he just flip flops like a pair of sandals
Eh.... ok... and the punch? Oh it's with the wordplay right?
Quote:
Once im done with him, ill give his remainders to jimmy payne
^^^^I never been the type to quote verses..but watch me mention
that I don't follow rappers...but I'll still take Rizzo's sloppy seconds
I'm guessing personal from what I can pick up... S'ok s'ok
you need to run, I know your scared...I hear that your not at all a fighter
Cuz the only time I'm losing Z's, when I'm pullin' an all nighter
ooooooo!!!! Another WORDPLAY hit! Beautiful man... props on this, maybe d00d chose wrong name
Multis: ?????? where they at?
Personal: Hands down, Payne!
Presentation wise: Z
Conclusion: Payne!
Overall: Honestly... I would have to go with Payne, the fight was close... not by much, but them haymaker's... Ooooo! Z left his last line too open... and it's like "YEA YEA YEA, Whaaaaaat?" At least with payne you could go "YEA YEA yea yea YEA YEA DAAAAAAAMN" Get what I'm saying? Anyways...
Vote : Payyyyyyynnnne!
5th up...i only get 2 more were the fuck are the votes?
Jim you should be scared, i'll help you take a huge step on deck
Payne will finally be Unleashed.. once I've removed the chain from his neck
-decent...i think...maybe?
this time im jus guessin', maybe Jimmy can actually handle a hottie
i heard she has a fat camel toe.. along with the rest of her camel body
-that gave me a chuckle
dudes just all talk, yaps n yaps while i just take a bow
pshh, fronts so much.. he should be at the start of the line by now
-dude. really? weak an played.
J's mainstream, he'll probly drop a bar about poppin' a hundred shots
with a style so old... its startin' to develop liver spots
Loved how the second line was looking... but ehhh... the "develop" thru it off the loop
fat dirty whore ur probably think that your bad now, please
your girl finally sucked your meat.. n caught a case of mad cow disease
Feels... unfinished?
I take him down a couple notches, like I'm losin weight and adjustin' my belt
cuz you could be touchin' your own dick....still wouldn't be feelin' ya zelph
Now here we go! Beautiful beautiful personal! this is like a haymaker!
Your gay it's a fact...everyone just looks, as this dude drops and shake
cuz the last time your popped anything...it was your fat ass out of a birthday cake
and your not blowin' out no candles...your blowin' all the dicks you can handle
this guys not gay...he just flip flops like a pair of sandals
Eh.... ok... and the punch? Oh it's with the wordplay right?
Quote:
Once im done with him, ill give his remainders to jimmy payne
^^^^I never been the type to quote verses..but watch me mention
that I don't follow rappers...but I'll still take Rizzo's sloppy seconds
I'm guessing personal from what I can pick up... S'ok s'ok
you need to run, I know your scared...I hear that your not at all a fighter
Cuz the only time I'm losing Z's, when I'm pullin' an all nighter
v/payne
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this is my actual vote. accidental post last one was.Originally Posted by Yuckmann
dumbass noobs
certainly your not referring to me sir.
shut up dagel
dagel...i'm not even gonna ask what that is...dont get mad cause your wack kid.
good battle,pretty funny stuff.Liked all the personals.Both had flow and struc.But I think jimbo took it with a couple better punches.Why would zelph pop out of a cake though? The belt line was prob the best though.
v=jim
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cuz his avvy was a pic of a gay dude comin out of a birthday cake lolWhy would zelph pop out of a cake though?
^^ if thats considered an up this is my last one
one more vote!!!!
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