Moose35 vs Moti

[moose35]

10 lines, due midnight. No hate votes, d/r, etc. Good luck and check in.

[Moti]

Check, i'll drop later tonight.

[moose35]

Things to know:

-Posted on threads "Willing to go down" and "You all suck"
-

So it's a cycle.

Here we go...

I'll leave you with a Scar-face, make anybody look at it and feel sick,
At least you can say "say hello to my little friend!"...and take out your dick,
Saw "Willing to get down" and "You all suck" threads, and saw your chance,
Responded, misinterpreted it, got excited...and pulled down your pants,
And we're all grown men here, we all know a woman's body has more than just tits,
So you don't need to explain that your menstruation is why you get bitch fits,
Hasn't battled once, even newbies turn him down in the "Bitch Slapped" section,
And judging by his dating life....guy's used to all the rejection,
After I'm done with him, I'll slap this guy on canvases with a paint mixture,
And like poor kids, it'll be a rare occurrence seeing Moti-on pictures

Links:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=429185
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...143/index.html

[Moti]

theres different ways to say someones good, but ur wack y0
if i ever say this bratislava, im talking about ur nations capital
N ur verses are no fun, thinking you could beat me was dumb
so watch as i drop 35 effortlessly like kobe versus the suns
i've never peeped your closed battles, you suck i already know
so if i ever PM a mod i'll simply say archive.... got another KO
you don't have advanced skill, so battling me i'll slaughter yah
I'll get the W easly, like harry did against you in the carnivalle
i'm not the type to talk shit, but i'll honestly leave you bleedings
so when i say fuck moose,
im not talking shit just listing 2 faggots i've beaten

[Flying Carcass]

I'll leave you with a Scar-face, make anybody look at it and feel sick,
At least you can say "say hello to my little friend!"...and take out your dick,
wack but whatever
Saw "Willing to get down" and "You all suck" threads, and saw your chance,
Responded, misinterpreted it, got excited...and pulled down your pants,
another gay joke? no
And we're all grown men here, we all know a woman's body has more than just tits,
So you don't need to explain that your menstruation is why you get bitch fits,
another one? this is meh
Hasn't battled once, even newbies turn him down in the "Bitch Slapped" section,
And judging by his dating life....guy's used to all the rejection,
okish actually, ha
After I'm done with him, I'll slap this guy on canvases with a paint mixture,
And like poor kids, it'll be a rare occurrence seeing Moti-on pictures
wtf, no man fuck u

vs


theres different ways to say someones good, but ur wack y0
if i ever say this bratislava, im talking about ur nations capital
ok
N ur verses are no fun, thinking you could beat me was dumb
so watch as i drop 35 effortlessly like kobe versus the suns
decent
i've never peeped your closed battles, you suck i already know
so if i ever PM a mod i'll simply say archive.... got another KO
no
you don't have advanced skill, so battling me i'll slaughter yah
I'll get the W easly, like harry did against you in the carnivalle
no
i'm not the type to talk shit, but i'll honestly leave you bleedings
so when i say fuck moose,
im not talking shit just listing 2 faggots i've beaten
ehh

vote moti easily for having a few ok bars, moose came overly wack

[Moti]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=7680552
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...08/index2.html

[Switch.]

I'll leave you with a Scar-face, make anybody look at it and feel sick,
At least you can say "say hello to my little friend!"...and take out your dick,
meh but lol
Saw "Willing to get down" and "You all suck" threads, and saw your chance,
Responded, misinterpreted it, got excited...and pulled down your pants,
again not the hardest but still funny
And we're all grown men here, we all know a woman's body has more than just tits,
So you don't need to explain that your menstruation is why you get bitch fits,
nah not feelin
Hasn't battled once, even newbies turn him down in the "Bitch Slapped" section,
And judging by his dating life....guy's used to all the rejection,
decent
After I'm done with him, I'll slap this guy on canvases with a paint mixture,
And like poor kids, it'll be a rare occurrence seeing Moti-on pictures
forced and didnt come off too well

vs

theres different ways to say someones good, but ur wack y0
if i ever say this bratislava, im talking about ur nations capital
doesn't rhyme too well
N ur verses are no fun, thinking you could beat me was dumb
so watch as i drop 35 effortlessly like kobe versus the suns
cool
i've never peeped your closed battles, you suck i already know
so if i ever PM a mod i'll simply say archive.... got another KO
Nope this didnt work for me
you don't have advanced skill, so battling me i'll slaughter yah
I'll get the W easly, like harry did against you in the carnivalle
It would've been good if you actually rhymed this!!
i'm not the type to talk shit, but i'll honestly leave you bleedings
so when i say fuck moose,
im not talking shit just listing 2 faggots i've beaten
meh

Urgh both could've done a lot better especially motti!! if u had rhymed your opener and the carnival line. Both only had one decent bar in their verses and so im gonna decide the winner based on the better punch and i feel Motti had the better punch coz it was more personal and relevant. Motti if u had rhymed the two lines where i said the rhyme scheme wasnt working then u would have no problem taking this battle but coz u didnt u may have a problem depending on how the other voters look at it. Not bad but keep it up guys. No hate

v/Motti

[moose35]

upping

[Malice]

I'll leave you with a Scar-face, make anybody look at it and feel sick,
At least you can say "say hello to my little friend!"...and take out your dick,
blah
Saw "Willing to get down" and "You all suck" threads, and saw your chance,
Responded, misinterpreted it, got excited...and pulled down your pants,
ok at best
And we're all grown men here, we all know a woman's body has more than just tits,
So you don't need to explain that your menstruation is why you get bitch fits,
no
Hasn't battled once, even newbies turn him down in the "Bitch Slapped" section,
And judging by his dating life....guy's used to all the rejection,
simple but yeah
After I'm done with him, I'll slap this guy on canvases with a paint mixture,
And like poor kids, it'll be a rare occurrence seeing Moti-on pictures
best punch ive ever seen from you, creative, with good word choice

vs


theres different ways to say someones good, but ur wack y0
if i ever say this bratislava, im talking about ur nations capital
ok
N ur verses are no fun, thinking you could beat me was dumb
so watch as i drop 35 effortlessly like kobe versus the suns
very good
i've never peeped your closed battles, you suck i already know
so if i ever PM a mod i'll simply say archive.... got another KO
eh
you don't have advanced skill, so battling me i'll slaughter yah
I'll get the W easly, like harry did against you in the carnivalle
eh
i'm not the type to talk shit, but i'll honestly leave you bleedings
so when i say fuck moose,
im not talking shit just listing 2 faggots i've beaten
ok


breakdown
prob the best ive seen from you moose, youve elevated quite a bit, good job on that, just fine tune the direction, work on more nameplay and youll be good, unfortunately it wasnt quite enough, moti had 3 decent punches to your two

v/moti

[moose35]

ehm...up

[Novade]

And we're all grown men here, we all know a woman's body has more than just tits,
So you don't need to explain that your menstruation is why you get bitch fits,

vs

theres different ways to say someones good, but ur wack y0
if i ever say this bratislava, im talking about ur nations capital
N ur verses are no fun, thinking you could beat me was dumb
so watch as i drop 35 effortlessly like kobe versus the suns
i've never peeped your closed battles, you suck i already know
so if i ever PM a mod i'll simply say archive.... got another KO


vote=moti,
ex win for moti..came wit a well solid, completly better verse, harder punches and a bit more creaitivty within the strucure....blah blah blah..moti go dis....good day...and rtf fuckers..

[Bender]

Saw "Willing to get down" and "You all suck" threads, and saw your chance,
Responded, misinterpreted it, got excited...and pulled down your pants,

vs

theres different ways to say someones good, but ur wack y0
if i ever say this bratislava, im talking about ur nations capital

i'm not the type to talk shit, but i'll honestly leave you bleedings
so when i say fuck moose,
im not talking shit just listing 2 faggots i've beaten

this was a pretty close battle...moose i think you coulda came alot harder...a few of your punches had potential but were just worded fucked up...moti you had some better punches like the opener and closer quoted above...the closer in particular i thought was pretty funny...pretty well squared up match but moti came a little bit harder

v/moti