10 lines
due by 12 EST ..smh
no crew votes for obvious reasons
Fourloko
Switchaman
10 lines
due by 12 EST ..smh
no crew votes for obvious reasons
check...
i try'ed to use some of the critique some of the voters left off my other battles with define and n.o.t.i.c.e and hope this work better then my previous verse and alot easier to read and follow...
It's the hottest chance w/ punches off to land...
N rock the man till His whole ''Body move Side to Side'' like the carlton dance!!...
plot ya plans or I'll be croppin his frame...
no ''GooseBump Horror Story'' But I'm ''plot'' in his ''grave''...
this ock isnt brave... tell your chick to stop calling me mayne!!...
We know you be placing your ''Piece around Squares'' like a monopoly game!!...
jockin my phrase?... this nerd is aged in...
I burst this gay kid cuz all he ''Droppin in to See-Men'' like sperm donations...
who's this nerd replacement? u force raps up? so im not appeal...
I torch M.O.B cunts so watch how I 'switch-a-man'' like refusing to pick the cotton filed!!
EZ!!...
keystyle!!...
Just to shake off some rust...
Judgin by your last drops your style’s looking the worst
Nigga I’ll put more caps on you then you put in your verse
Four got bodied in his last battle, left in a fine bandage
Coz he couldn’t handle the def like he didn’t know sign language
My punches will end this bitch, im gonna be abusin this wack dude
I’ll fuck up your figure four...without even using that move
Dude’s never touched a girl’s pussy in his life and as it stands
The only time you’ll see forefinger is when you look at ya hands
I killed this nigga already, battling me? Dam what did this dyke think?
Fire? Nah, he couldn’t fucking give out a spark if he was a sprite drink..
Fourloko, you have been kwik killed.
jockin my phrase?... this nerd is aged in...
I burst this gay kid cuz all he ''Droppin in to See-Men'' like sperm donations...
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Judgin by your last drops your style’s looking the worst
Nigga I’ll put more caps on you then you put in your verse
I killed this nigga already, battling me? Dam what did this dyke think?
Fire? Nah, he couldn’t fucking give out a spark if he was a sprite drink..
Switch wins this easy, even though he was a bit rusty. Switchaman, some of you bars were basic, but it was enough to win the battle. Those 2 lines I posted were lines of the battle.
Fourloko, that bar I posted was your best, but it was still ok at best. The rest of you verse was filler/self-hype. Work on making harder punches. No hate to either.
v/Switchaman
thnx up1
nothing
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Judgin by your last drops your style’s looking the worst
Nigga I’ll put more caps on you then you put in your verse
I killed this nigga already, battling me? Dam what did this dyke think?
Fire? Nah, he couldn’t fucking give out a spark if he was a sprite drink..
onesided battle four its good to see ur learning but u gotta long way to go
switch ur verses were no cleverer than mine on my battle wit titan but this was more than enough to win
V/ switch
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It's the hottest chance w/ punches off to land...
N rock the man till His whole ''Body move Side to Side'' like the carlton dance!!...
no... this didn't work at all man...nothing hitting, no hard grasp... nothing...
plot ya plans or I'll be croppin his frame...
no ''GooseBump Horror Story'' But I'm ''plot'' in his ''grave''...
Childish man... you didn't swing with anything,... nothing...
this ock isnt brave... tell your chick to stop calling me mayne!!...
We know you be placing your ''Piece around Squares'' like a monopoly game!!...
negatory....you went no where with this...
jockin my phrase?... this nerd is aged in...
I burst this gay kid cuz all he ''Droppin in to See-Men'' like sperm donations...
who's this nerd replacement? u force raps up? so im not appeal...
I torch M.O.B cunts so watch how I 'switch-a-man'' like refusing to pick the cotton filed!!
I'm sorry dude, just nothing was there that i liked at all... you've got the idea, but your just putting things that you think hit, together, and makin' it rhyme, you can't elevate like this.... picture ya one two, and get inspiration with the first, to knock em out with the second, i'm no god here man, please beleive, just take the advice.
VS
Judgin by your last drops your style’s looking the worst
Nigga I’ll put more caps on you then you put in your verse
come on dude.... shits played man, you know that....
Four got bodied in his last battle, left in a fine bandage
Coz he couldn’t handle the def like he didn’t know sign language
lol, nice personal.
My punches will end this bitch, im gonna be abusin this wack dude
I’ll fuck up your figure four...without even using that move
no....
Dude’s never touched a girl’s pussy in his life and as it stands
The only time you’ll see forefinger is when you look at ya hands
I dunno man, i see the punch, but you didn't hit him with it....
I killed this nigga already, battling me? Dam what did this dyke think?
Fire? Nah, he couldn’t fucking give out a spark if he was a sprite drink..
no...
Switch.... wtf? you know reading through your shit, i can tell you know what your doin'.... but damn dude... there wasn't really anything that came about like, heavy hittin, it was pretty weak man. Creativity.
Vote goes to switchman though..... he had the capability to pull it off with the knowledge and know how.
Hit em up and get em over with.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...185/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...43/index2.html
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It's the hottest chance w/ punches off to land...
N rock the man till His whole ''Body move Side to Side'' like the carlton dance!!...
Funny, but not effective
plot ya plans or I'll be croppin his frame...
no ''GooseBump Horror Story'' But I'm ''plot'' in his ''grave''...
Weak not feeling this at all
this ock isnt brave... tell your chick to stop calling me mayne!!...
We know you be placing your ''Piece around Squares'' like a monopoly game!!...
Not bad at all
jockin my phrase?... this nerd is aged in...
I burst this gay kid cuz all he ''Droppin in to See-Men'' like sperm donations...
Not feeling this dude
who's this nerd replacement? u force raps up? so im not appeal...
I torch M.O.B cunts so watch how I 'switch-a-man'' like refusing to pick the cotton filed!!
Weak closer, bad nameplay
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Judgin by your last drops your style’s looking the worst
Nigga I’ll put more caps on you then you put in your verse
Meh, he didnt use that many caps
Four got bodied in his last battle, left in a fine bandage
Coz he couldn’t handle the def like he didn’t know sign language
Cool, but the wording was bad
My punches will end this bitch, im gonna be abusin this wack dude
I’ll fuck up your figure four...without even using that move
Not bad at all dude
Dude’s never touched a girl’s pussy in his life and as it stands
The only time you’ll see forefinger is when you look at ya hands
Meh, not really feeling
I killed this nigga already, battling me? Dam what did this dyke think?
Fire? Nah, he couldn’t fucking give out a spark if he was a sprite drink..
Alright decent closer
Hope you appreciate the feed, Peep my battle w/ Moose35
up3
i think Four isnt quite gettin the credit he deserves, he had some decent concepts and what not, just has to work on the structure a bit, polish up the delivery and he will do just fine
switch came consistant and well in his verse though, and also carried a good structure as well as well delievered punches
favorite bars:
Four got bodied in his last battle, left in a fine bandage
Coz he couldn’t handle the def like he didn’t know sign language
My punches will end this bitch, im gonna be abusin this wack dude
I’ll fuck up your figure four...without even using that move
Dude’s never touched a girl’s pussy in his life and as it stands
The only time you’ll see forefinger is when you look at ya hands
turns out my favorites were your whole middle section, id try to think about putting a stronger closer and opener in for you battles, the first and last thoughts are usually the ones that resinate the most in peoples minds
Four-Loko:
i also thought the middle three bars were your best concept, your opener was good, fairly amusing, but i think as far as an opener goes id use a harder intro, not necessarily something to get a chuckle
V/switcha, more consistant
formatting on this vote is kinda off, was trying to rush it cause im short on time, if its an issue i can do a full break down and all that later, but this should suffice
nah its kool...up4
come on u lazy fucks jus one more vote
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