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Thread: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob Diss]

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    BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob Diss]



    emotionless poverish poetic method that roll with it
    notice this over thick mixture combined poetness.
    the soul of this
    creeping beneath the demons controlling it
    floating just
    over the ocean who hold the frozen ship
    see the titanic when they paniced and went over it
    be the life 'hoping its over before u notice it
    drown in the emotional pain with no condolences
    coming from the inside like the liquid when you go to piss

    paint the picture quicker in a scripture written old as this
    open your fucking eyes and let me know who you rolling with..


    keep acting like a boy im a turn into a soulja bitch
    strangle by the tangle to a angle for the cobra hit

    The Mob been over since sammy went an told the shit
    now they on threads like a grandma nittin clothing strips ??
    my lyrics a drown ya Flowers like water overflowing it...
    im just having a ball while u watching on the bowling bench..


    i was born as the fence and ya cant get over it..
    ill make TAY pop off the top like a soda kiss..

    now seriously who u wanna go against ???
    J SCRIPTZ,LOOSE,SELFSAVIOR or the coldest chick ??



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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    The 1st Lady Murdered The "Mob"

    Honestly, read all the lyrics out loud and hear the rhythm.
    If this was an audio, all the members of the Mob would change their names and pray nobody looks up their IP address.

    11/10

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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    this was nice. flowed real well. some nice lines in there n multis.. good use of rhyme scheme through out as well

    keep droppin!

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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    Quote Originally Posted by SelfSavior View Post
    The 1st Lady Murdered The "Mob"

    Honestly, read all the lyrics out loud and hear the rhythm.
    If this was an audio, all the members of the Mob would change their names and pray nobody looks up their IP address.

    11/10
    get off her diss u whack fucking wanna be emcee

    if this isnt the most dickridng review i ever seen in my life then i dont know what is

    this was an ok piece, but as a diss piece it was parts that was blah and there was nice parts


    The Mob been over since sammy went an told the shit
    now they on threads like a grandma nittin clothing strips ??
    my lyrics a drown ya Flowers like water overflowing it...
    im just having a ball while u watching on the bowling bench..

    that was sick i thought, the rest had some ok lines but it was spread out

    dude ur crew has to stop sucking ur cock cuz who gives a fuck if ur own crew thinks its dope of course there gon side with u there bigger pussies then anyone obviously


    this was nice, 7/10

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    lol i dont have a cock to suck thanks for the high rank though
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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    emotionless poverish poetic method that roll with it
    notice this over thick mixture combined poetness.
    the soul of this
    creeping beneath the demons controlling it
    floating just
    over the ocean who hold the frozen ship
    see the titanic when they paniced and went over it
    be the life 'hoping its over before u notice it
    drown in the emotional pain with no condolences
    coming from the inside like the liquid when you go to piss
    ^ ^ This Was Tight, Cool Flow & Multis, Alliteration? So-So But This Wasnt Really A Diss To The Mob. A Diss Usually Starts Off Hardcore Dissing Someone [Or Crew In This Case] All The Way. Dont Usually Have Like 2 Bars Of A Diss And Then Thats It. And That Wasnt Really Even A Diss, Some Of That Shit Gotta Have Significance Cuz Otherwise It Wouldnt Really Make A Hit. This Gave More Of A Poetical Vibe Than Anything Else. Sorry, Not A Diss. No Hate Though, Good Piece Though.

    However, Diss-Wise? This Equals A:

    :fail:

    6.5/10

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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    im just getting warmed up so i dissed ya'll in the last few bars here

    The Mob been over since sammy went an told the shit
    now they on threads like a grandma nittin clothing strips ??
    my lyrics a drown ya Flowers like water overflowing it...
    im just having a ball while u watching on the bowling bench..


    i was born as the fence and ya cant get over it..
    ill make TAY pop off the top like a soda kiss..

    now seriously who u wanna go against ???
    J SCRIPTZ,LOOSE,SELFSAVIOR or the coldest chick ??



    ^^^^

    its a warning shot really thanks though for ur honest opinion
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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    Quote Originally Posted by God0fWar View Post
    get off her diss u whack fucking wanna be emcee

    if this isnt the most dickridng review i ever seen in my life then i dont know what is

    this was an ok piece, but as a diss piece it was parts that was blah and there was nice parts


    The Mob been over since sammy went an told the shit
    now they on threads like a grandma nittin clothing strips ??
    my lyrics a drown ya Flowers like water overflowing it...
    im just having a ball while u watching on the bowling bench..

    that was sick i thought, the rest had some ok lines but it was spread out

    dude ur crew has to stop sucking ur cock cuz who gives a fuck if ur own crew thinks its dope of course there gon side with u there bigger pussies then anyone obviously


    this was nice, 7/10
    Talk to your husband with that tone of voice, not me.

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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    yea this wasn't really a diss, wayyy to poetic...had some nice metaphors but as far as disses and punches go it was pretty elementary and basic...
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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr. DJ View Post
    ^ ^ This Was Tight, Cool Flow & Multis, Alliteration? So-So But This Wasnt Really A Diss To The Mob. A Diss Usually Starts Off Hardcore Dissing Someone [Or Crew In This Case] All The Way. Dont Usually Have Like 2 Bars Of A Diss And Then Thats It. And That Wasnt Really Even A Diss, Some Of That Shit Gotta Have Significance Cuz Otherwise It Wouldnt Really Make A Hit. This Gave More Of A Poetical Vibe Than Anything Else. Sorry, Not A Diss. No Hate Though, Good Piece Though.

    However, Diss-Wise? This Equals A:

    :fail:

    6.5/10
    nice flow for a poem...but for a diss:hosea2:....try again hoe...whoeva wants to battle let me know and stop it with these wack ass fake disses its makin ya look bad.
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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    emotionless poverish poetic method that roll with it
    notice this over thick mixture combined poetness.
    the soul of this
    creeping beneath the demons controlling it
    floating just
    over the ocean who hold the frozen ship
    see the titanic when they paniced and went over it
    be the life 'hoping its over before u notice it
    drown in the emotional pain with no condolences
    coming from the inside like the liquid when you go to piss


    flow and multies is there as always...but thats about it^

    paint the picture quicker in a scripture written old as this
    open your fucking eyes and let me know who you rolling with..

    that line was deliverd good...but it didnt really hurt

    keep acting like a boy im a turn into a soulja bitch
    strangle by the tangle to a angle for the cobra hit

    ok

    The Mob been over since sammy went an told the shit
    now they on threads like a grandma nittin clothing strips ??
    my lyrics a drown ya Flowers like water overflowing it...
    im just having a ball while u watching on the bowling bench..

    first three lines are fire...that last one fucked it up tho
    needa better punch




    i was born as the fence and ya cant get over it..
    ill make TAY pop off the top like a soda kiss..

    really basic


    now seriously who u wanna go against ???
    J SCRIPTZ,LOOSE,SELFSAVIOR or the coldest chick ??


    wasnt much of a diss....maybe some facts....and a warning shot..

    keep writing

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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    this uh.. yeah it was cool ..but who is the mob? cuzz i read this thinkin mafia and then i was like yo -this had nothing to do with a mafia. so who are they?

    flow wise it was rockin, diss wise i wasnt really impressed. pic wise -is that you dancing on a pole? show me a better one

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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    The Mob been over since sammy went an told the shit
    now they on threads like a grandma nittin clothing strips ??
    my lyrics a drown ya Flowers like water overflowing it...
    im just having a ball while u watching on the bowling bench

    this was ill...but overall i wasnt feelin the "it itch shit" the whole piece

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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    Overall, I thought it was cool.. Flow, multis, scheme, vocab.. But not really a heavy hitter..
    Like when I picture a diss, some reason I think of 2pac's 'Hit Em Up'.. Like shits supposed to be aggressive.. Don't really feel like I was reading a diss.

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    Re: BLood Line : Picture Painted Mafiia [The Mob D

    Quote Originally Posted by Adolf Spitler View Post
    this uh.. yeah it was cool ..but who is the mob? cuzz i read this thinkin mafia and then i was like yo -this had nothing to do with a mafia. so who are they?

    flow wise it was rockin, diss wise i wasnt really impressed. pic wise -is that you dancing on a pole? show me a better one
    lmao interesting way how the last one became a part of u breaking down the rap buddy thanks to everyone for ya honest opinion much appreciated it was more of a warning shot i was just getting my canibus on and jabbin them at the end
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