Supreme Justice

[Molotav]

Supreme Justice

Just to stretch the truth...




Enhance deep passion rolling on cement virtues the facial cracks
Prance creeps, assassins holding in contempt curfews and racial acts
Where they were slaves, in fact I'll actually like to take you back to
To the time African tribes struggled for freedom held in pagan shackles
Only them and god knows how many children where whipped, they wept
At the same moment of being raped in the same cabin in which they slept
Now as I take you back to reality where the pain is equal to love
With a prayer being delivered by a large flock of seagulls and doves
Birds of two feathers over powers whomever, until their bones show
With co-operation cold consolations only speaking of what I don't know
Visualize a prison of guys killing each individual inside, felling suprised?
Willing to die for those saving a building with over a million children inside
A double helix represents my history I don't need a book to listen to
Symbolic remarks I'm writing in the dark with visions so Hieroglyphical
The pictures falsh full course collision forge my vision, a dead smile
Land slide destroy my home in the gorgeous day I live in exile
You've never witnessed seeing guns fired, innocent individuals shot
Ripping and penetrating flesh that reseembles a synical, though its not
Now this shit is getting out of hand torture, in all multi-visual spots
I'd try physicaly but it feels as if I have no hands like digital clocks
Rogue in vogue control my whole globe so really I don't know, though
I can uphold my own so don't for one second think I wont explode
Before you die I'll kick your whole body off of about eleven cliffs
Put you in your coffin and roll it off the top of Mount Everest
It's sick in life stab the belly of the beast then twist the knife
The most valuable thing to him is nothing more than his life
He has nothing left wife murdered along with his family of ten kids
Now the biggest pain is toturing the individual and letting him live


"Cased Closed"

[Molotav]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327989
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=327483

[CHOPPER UK]

i quite like this piece expecailly this bit

Enhance deep passion rolling on cement virtues the facial cracks
Prance creeps, assassins holding in contempt curfews and racial acts
Where they were slaves, in fact I'll actually like to take you back to
To the time African tribes struggled for freedom held in pagan shackles
Only god knows how many how many children where whipped they wept
At the same moment of being raped in the same cabin in which they slept

[Molotav]

Ummmm okay?...thanks uppin please.

[Molotav]

Feed?

[DCPISFREE]

This is pretty good. I don't know if it's the way I read it, but towards the end it kinda looks like it's going in different directions. But the rhyming inside the lines is real nice, like this one:

Birds of two feathers over powers whomever, until their bones show
With co-operation cold consolations only speaking of what I don't know
Visualize a prison of guys killing each individual inside, felling suprised?
Willing to die for those saving a building with over a million children inside

Good job. Defintley like to see more from you

[Molotav]

Thanks upp plz.

[.:~Digital~:.]

Nice piece dude - words ya used were great
Some rhymin seemed forced and stretched at times

but..... other than that
if ya worked on that ya piece would be really good
the imagery and creativeness was on point and the topic
was great---- so basically thats my only feed other than great job writin this
every want to get down on collab hit me up wit a topic

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