The beginning of hate

**TbDavis** · February 4th, 2007, 06:25 PM

Filled with hatred, loathing on my hurtful past
mom raped by are slave, and such a shadow it casts
my heart turned black and compassion i lacked
i must pull the pure together and get back on track
cover up in white robes and begin to probe
rid us of these black fowl beasts off are globe
purification is key, a new day and time on eve
all those men are alike, thief’s, not to be free
captives, they are meant to do are labor
disrespect them, but make sure they respect are neighbor
white now reigns supreme in the eyes of these beings
so those evil "animals" are not to be seen
as we gather in the purest white, representing are life
we lead the fight, to one day be honored like knights
take their life’s, burn crosses, hanging the blacks from trees
my minds appeased, at ease, to get rid of this "colored" disease
some call it the new age "black" plague
no real intentions, so the future seems a bit vague
us, now dubbed the KKK, we lack remorse
we use force, hate against the black the source
extermination, on levels like Armageddon
make sure all these blacks get their life deaden
hidden under the pure white mask till we die
affiliation and the truth is what we deny

The beginning of hate

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=325772
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=325777

**TbDavis** · February 4th, 2007, 10:00 PM

uppin

**GrimmyReaps** · February 4th, 2007, 10:01 PM

so u dont ban that name its me its not a biter...

**GrimmyReaps** · February 5th, 2007, 12:27 AM

up.

**GrimmyReaps** · February 7th, 2007, 01:07 PM

rise

**P. Mortuus** · February 7th, 2007, 07:05 PM

Okay this was an aight piece. There were many many spelling and grammatical errors that really came and shadowed the piece and lessened the overall enjoyment of it. I reckon you sould have revised the piece and sorted out them mistakes before posting it up as an om...the story was aight, the way you linked the image to KKK was good, you dealt with it in a good manner also, yet if the basic mistakes had not been there this could have been a better piece. No doubt, Stay up^.