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    untitled #1.

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    since the day when we were walkin i couldnt even believe my eyes
    remeniscine of the times; talkin of the passes of our lifes
    see back at the times it was just a scene i sent to see
    i feel it inside; of our dreams are meant to be
    of wat u givin me missin your lovin,huggin, n your kissin
    every word that u spoken got me hooked cuz u im missin
    every night its you im thinkin wishin u by my side
    your my one n only; never the lonely thats on my mind
    all the time in this world together in any wheather
    lovin u rain or shine no matter where; when ever
    every year from every second; january to december
    those signs you sendin, inventin, tendin; i remember
    forever deep'n my heart;im keepin u right from the start
    together it was harsh when we were no longer apart
    look now; better days we were crazy
    your my lady; things have changed; you amaze me

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    Re: untitled #1.

    ill post the links here ill edit them in

    ill go grab em now

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    Re: untitled #1.

    this wasa nic epiece and fist things first welcome to the site and dont be afraid ofany hate cus this site is full of hate. but your scheme you used was nice and i liked how you cut form time to time and the flow was onpoint it was somewhat fast then slow then fast then slow and it was cool short but sweet nah mean you did a nice job in this now just broaden a bit more on your vocab and use more wording apprehhences nah mean read around and grab some swag not jack there swag but get the concept of it and somewhat use it to your own ways!..

    nice drop!

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