That Sh!+ That You Dont Know About

[Nokay]

look, im on that shit you no nothin ABOUT, punches & metaphores is all im writtin ABOUT, look... u dont WANT-TROUBLE, my flows "on route" like "BUS-SHUTTLES", they'll leave you in the dirt & MUD-PUDDLES, its like ull be takin more hits than STUNT-DOUBLES, cuz my flows "2 niice" like when u "MEET-A-PREACHERS-WIFE", but u can still get cuz up when i hold a MEAT-CLEAVER-TIGHT, & u FLIPPIN-RITE im FLIPPIN-NIICE, i cut people up like a "brooklyn style pizza" so you'll get a "BIGGER-SLICE", now tell me who thought of that SH!+-BEFORE-I-THOUGHT-OF-IT, & when im shootin you gon hear a CLICK-BEFORE-IM-STOPPIN-IT, cuz i dump a whole CLIP-WHEN-IM-POPIN-IT, & i dont do this just 2 AMUSE-YOU-ALL, but ill send u 2 the hospital 2 get ur USUAL... no good?

This piece isn't long enough for this forum.

- Atty

[Piztol Pete]

this was mediocre to me not the worse but not the best some of the punches was hot maybe u should have made it longer with more lines and u shoulda also wrote it different like that paragraph style make it hard to read separate the lines ....str8 verse tho