On Stage; Directors Cut FT. Client

[Spoken]

On Stage

Method
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"I write so deviant that my heart dwells in its roots"
-Carrie Hoovard

Made movies, played roles, light camera to action.
Placed in manifested casings the mirrored walls showed no passion.
Reflection of you... Such a lost meanings in act
switched to full grunted to show how the meaningless fall back.
Shackled to the ground, plastered with drama
"its bad luck to make a foolish wish" is what i was told of karma
picket trails along picket cells derail in a single pale
cradled into a single shell and always forever hidden; creped looking pail.
so the veins of memoirs flood through a dime mirror
that shatters into its past to bring a present into the future of color
black and white paintings fall to the ground; sound break
SHH!.....
So you must hush for a moment as happiness always arrives late.

That once perfect storyline is missing its fucking spine
Because the light that once was lime is now black and will not shine
Now he can’t perform in the clutch because he lost that vital touch
But it’s not bad luck; he’s just not getting enough adrenaline rush
And he’s going insane stuck behind the camera, not in the script
While the actors reel in the fame and become rich off his pencil tip
He wants to call it quits but is addicted to the reviews of critics
Until one day he portrays and image that’s so vivid he really lives it
Unable to hold in his feelings his depression leaves him possessed
To the point where there’s only one thing that will relieve his stress
So to make his message clear he waited for the play to premier
Lights, camera, action and his eraser makes em’ all disappear



"My life was enrooted into such a play that once it died i died with it"
-Tony Montello

So play on mister as I play the role of a dead
Laying in a row of thoughts as blood leaks onto my bed
Dead across the surface, purchased a second ticket
To the next showing of massacre entitled “as I slit my wrist”
Suburban o this ordinance as I hide behind this closed door
Picket fences built in a self conscious defense; I lay on the floor
Bashed under this nightmare; seeped no one cares
I let one thought escape; the building collapses to this bloody affair
My pen scribbles the next lines; paper crumpled and thrown
My soul travels as its mate; plagued gestures plastered, my heart is prone.
Climatic emphasis created with a personal emotion
They say let the heart flow; I let it go as it flow with the bloody ocean
Behind this door is my little secret chamber of thoughts
I stay shackled and hidden for my ideas will forever be lost
So riddle me this and yet so riddle me that
That one writer of a play you loved will never in life be back.

[Spoken]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=319524
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=319928

[las]

im very very impressed by the rhyme set up in the first verse. the set up and entire scheme of the verse seems very very methodical and time consuming to create so mad props. I also was surprised to see the theme of the rap continue all the way through both sets of verses rather than like one line or something stupid like i see from a whole bunch of others up in the mother, again mad mad props for the the whole flow,the scheme of everything was set-up very well i took alot from this rhyme about how i can improve my own flow.
well done homie

[Spoken]

bump for some feed

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hello

muthafuckin bumpin

[P. Mortuus]

Another good colab....surpriesed at a lack of inclusion into the mag..but yeah..overall this was good though i believe that method should have ended it better...the first 2 verses were more entertaining than the last one..the 2nd verse did pick the speed up quite a bit and the third verse should have incorporated both styles and it would have made it that much more better na mean. Though i have to say this was yet another piece that could have been that much more better...idk both of you are great writers and your pieces are always good..now try and incorporate different cocnepts into making a whole..like branch off 1 topic into various sub-topics that still relate to that one maine one, if you get what i mean...anyhow, it was a veryg good read so yeah stay up^.

[Spoken]

thanks paka appreciate it and the mag shit i know bruh....wow shits gay but whatever..

[Client]

word

[Spoken]

dude i need to up this as this was just by passed with no inclusion or some shit..no REC at all fags thanks alot