I`ma Instigator

[Tragedian.]

Im as Bloody as a dirty jonny worn by a bitch called Whiteflame
I’ll cripple you then sue you for any compensation you might claim

You sure instigated this said my bros name jus so u could exists,
Grab ya neck and twist let me see ya and you’ll be kissin my k-swiss
I fucked ya sis….let me hand ya another L while I’m at it
Quit rap ya suck at it…you catching losses is automatic
Feel the static…when ya getting ya negative feed back…
Style what you lake…but only 1 man had the nerve to say that ya wack
Your diss track was shit…really stop trying to spit…
Congrats u rhymed a word take ur keyboard and smash ya head wit it
You got the whole dope talk going…but like u audio why aint it showing
Maybe its cause u know the wackness on it is glowing...
Now really do me a favour n retire…your never gon get hired
I can feel the heat on ya flow…now just stick your head in a god dam fire.
Instigating this must’ve been ya worst mistake
I think I finally put out something that says.” following eminem is not great”
Now fuck this shit I’m done ive said what I have to say
Emo fuck killin ur self is not the way its ok man theres nothing wrong bein gay

[Tragedian.]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=309003
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=308866

[King Dumb]

punches personals kind of basic, i hate it when people make diss OMs but i liked how u made usage of ur words and rhymescheme.....its an iight peace..

[Tragedian.]

haha word i was bored...so i just replyed lol

upp..

[haji]

wat?is this supposed 2 b a battle or wat?well nice flows and all
u need 2 know d diff btw OM and battle.aiight?keep writin

[Seti]

This wasn;t great I thought parts of it were good but other parts seemed to fall of like. I can see your dissing him but maybe you didn't really feel this topic or something becuase you haven't really hit hard against him. Though i did prefer this to your topical i have to say. I think you can do better though so carry on.

[Tragedian.]

wat?is this supposed 2 b a battle or wat?well nice flows and all
u need 2 know d diff btw OM and battle.aiight?keep writin

its a diss...and seti dont free post please.
upp.

[Spekz.]

^^for a quick diss it was overly bad...but not great, like some said already you had some basic lines, some stuff that wouldnt please many in an actually text battle..but had some ok things....half the battle is concepts so take ur time (specially on a om diss..where there is no deadline)..to really dig for some personals..than the other half is wording, where ya need to make it sting at the end..each punch should be like OOOO!!!.....n like i said a Om Diss should be better than a battle..cuz its more of a statement....and u have all the time int he world to make it so much more.

overall..good job..keep ur head up