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    Musick

    Fencing music with a sword of Damocle's, postmortems apogee is
    Eccentric usage of melliflous tones and recorded masterpieces
    Pedantic heeding to details, new mixmasters shun the honorable
    Frantically breeding an evil called existence after the iconical
    A vision of vivid disaster in the hospital, with music hooked to an IV
    With faulty doctors called mainstream: mutants looked at divinely
    Suprise me, put dope tracks in a TV box, tie it with a boy scout knot
    Before the current abundance of wack destroys our thoughts
    Exploit it not? The weak beats walk the bass line graveyard
    Most cats say "I write fake lines trynna make mine behave hard"
    It's always the same bars, objectify women and toss a curse in
    MC's say the wanna save rap not kill it and draw the curtain
    But Im certain thats how their murdering the game and its players
    So please explain how Hip- Hop has started saying its prayers
    Enslaved by the fakers, chewed up and spit our by grillz all around
    Labels making faulty attempts to distill the false sound
    A village of rabid hounds, devouring the sweet soul of it
    This is just a corroding bliss, that will explode to bits
    Infecting most the kids, mainstream marches on with the tyranny
    How, why when, how, will? it be surviving this: shy chances
    So i deny romances with snap music, crunk, and whispers
    Lady Mainstream just abusively struk her little sister
    Now Hip-Hop is crying in the corner with mother music, whos spanking her
    Her dad's gonna beat her, getting hit and abused with flagrant words
    And it's the same with many worlds, She is dying and She is fading
    She takes upon the heavy task: surviving what we call mainstream



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    This piece was dirty. I liked it. Good use of imagery in what can be viewed as an abstract topic. You had a good use of personification that brings music to life and were able to incorporate some strong emotion thanks to this. Good piece, excellent if you're actually only 13.

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    Fencing music with a sword of Damocle's, postmortems apogee is
    Eccentric usage of melliflous tones and recorded masterpieces
    Pedantic heeding to details, new mixmasters shun the honorable
    Frantically breeding an evil called existence after the iconical

    That wording was AMAZING!

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    Thanks

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    seemed grimy. i liked it though. the flow was tight. the structure was decent. and the topic was unoriginal. but you took it to a differnt area with it. the vocabulary was pretty nice andit was used consistently. the minor flaws were in the complexity and the rhyming scheme i thought. but keep em comin. i liked it. peace.
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