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    Sometimes Money Ain't Funny

    This is a piece about a man who works for a cigarette corporation. Enjoy.

    Money Ain't Funny

    I’m existential with my potential for an optimal need
    Consequently debating the fading of incredible greed
    Repetitive sedatives, derivatives of competitive speed
    Levitate the euphoria with an aura of needs we feed…
    The seed is planted in the flattened campus of youth
    Salute the truth bearing roots of our imperative proof
    Comparative parents caring with embarrassing views
    Smoking is choking, revoking but provoking life, to lose.
    Blues aren’t fiction; they’re an affliction with jurisdiction
    Of death ridden burdens, concernin’ the basis of life.
    The question’s impression is a depressin’ lesson, here’s why
    Life is golden and molded, upholded but folded by lies
    Posin’ the query, “will it steer me to drive another to die?”
    Cigarettes are sediments that compliment my bloody heart
    Marking the monument as a condiment; the end of a start
    I conjure the fonder; a charmer with a shot in the dark
    to embrace the taste of fate at the end of a poison-tip dart.
    Surroundings enclosed and proposed, marry Death for cash
    Implode the whole show, divorce and take half the lives he has
    Endorse the propaganda as a clown’s severed hand and dash
    Laugh with ananastasia and collapse ‘cause I’m not a man.
    All apologies follow me directly inspecting the scene
    Of the toxicology histology impetrating the motive to be
    free of the shackles, perpetrating me from obtaining the green
    Restraining my vocation, impatience is faceless and tasteless
    Like cancerous membranous……… until it’s mixed with me.
    The smoke thickens with the wicked visions of hope
    But the conditions don’t boast enough prisons to hold
    the millions who won’t, yet advocate for these smokes
    Seized the opportunity for riches – and it left me broke.


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    Last edited by I Am Unreal.; August 8th, 2006 at 01:11 PM
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    I don't know why this hasn't been responded yet.
    It's an excellent peice of work.
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    thanks man...............................
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    lol............................................... ..
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    give me some fucking feedback you faggots.
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    Yo this was a nice and extraordinary peice all through out multies galore as well as some very nice vocab you had a strong take on the topic very complex aswell vivid and sharp imagery it's just nice like man idk what inspired you to write on this but tu`shae to that man lol nice drop you did great here keep writing man...damn.

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