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    |The Devil May Testify| -Makeshyft

    |The Devil May Testify|


    The car tires blowout, and alarms sound .. streets flash
    From lamposts fallen down and electrical .. heat blasts
    Screams creep with deep black, skin burns and peels back
    Dreams turn fiend and swallow my sorrows with freakish laugh
    My knees grab the pavement I've been slayen' and impailed
    I glance to my arms, only to find a pulsating arrangement of nails
    My heart is pulsating, and when all the rage entangled fails,
    All we'll have left is the tears.. bottled and dranken like ale
    I'm drunk off my sorrows, the secret has etched in stone
    Engraved in my mind.. six-feet-deep it lies restless and cold
    But my trust has caused this suffering, buildings turn ash
    Spindles crack windows and explode into one million halves
    There is no escape, sewer grates travel at neck level,
    Garbage, recycle and loose rubble conspire wind tunnles
    The secret is safe with me.. I will never leak the proof
    My lips are shut .. mouth closed I'll never speak of you
    And the devil may testify, but in this court I'm one to sin
    Sold my soul for more than gold.. but the truth behind
    -my love for him.

    And as this chunk of earth crumples with disease
    My secret is visible;
    Above my eyes and cheeks
    LIES
    the mark of the beast.



    We are already dead,
    Only the truth may save us now.



    -Dedicated to anyone with a problem
    Yours truly, Shyft

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    Ill hit you with links tomorrow, its been a long day.
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    So were gon' sleep? ok, up.

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    The car tires blowout, and alarms sound .. streets flash
    From lamposts fallen down and electrical .. heat blasts
    Screams creep with deep black, skin burns and peels back
    Dreams turn fiend and swallow my sorrows with freakish laugh
    My knees grab the pavement I've been slayen' and impailed
    I glance to my arms, only to find a pulsating arrangement of nails
    My heart is pulsating, and when all the rage entangled fails,
    All we'll have left is the tears.. bottled and dranken like ale
    I'm drunk off my sorrows, the secret has etched in stone
    Engraved in my mind.. six-feet-deep it lies restless and cold



    nice opener the choice with words were gooD!.......you got alot of talent man i liked your metas man aswell......the vocab wasnt the best but it was there and it was invovled well , a nice nice topcal!...


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    I really respect a man who speaks truth despite tha popular conception. Keep spittin whut's real & Tha Truth will make paths in2 eternity in tha present.
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    Da Day Iz Comin' When E'ry Knee Will Bow Down & E'ry Tung Will Confess Dat JESUS Iz LORD!

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    Thanks for the feed guys, up.

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    yo seriously, this piece was short but sweet as fuck....i fuckin loved every section of it, especially the end...cause all that shit is real talk, ya vocab was decent but the multiz and wordplay were exceptional, i felt this piece....imagery was alive aswell, goddamn....even opened my eyes a lil bit, but honestly 10/10 <---just 4 being real with it

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