Jay Walker (9-2) Vs. Feeble Minded (7-1)

[Mystery~Murdera]

regular rules
must vote on 3 battles
verses due Friday.
Now check in.

[Richard Parker]

I'm in

16 good?

[Jay Walker]

yep.

[Richard Parker]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=297108
Jay, I got you a battle. hope you see this on time..

[Jay Walker]

yea, thanks man.

[Jay Walker]

man, ii'm drunk as it gets rigt now, and dont feel like typing a verse over sleeping. n seing u havent posted either , twell etend this til tomorrow night. i'm done with work at 10, so i'll post around then/

[Richard Parker]

on the issue of who will win this, I got something to tattle
I'll leave this up to you... you're only good for bumping my battles
Battle by battle your crews hating, stop hiding you love it
Week in & week out - just describes you in private & Public
I got that dope clout, this faggots blown out, his wins won't mount
you can add up your 5 fingers.. but on the other hand you don't count
Lucky you're behind a computer. Just admit when you flop
You're safe and sound.. like complete shit when you drop
I would ask your opinion on lines both recent or hot
but no can do.. as an answer to whether you're decent or not
Seen you accused of biting, but I have my doubts queer...
I wont look into your verses.. they're bad enough from out here
Man I'll let you walk in my shoes for a bit, its funny your sour
If we trade places for a day, you'll only be in first for 24 hours

[Jay Walker]

When you write a line and go for the "surprise" factor you have to think about whether the actual diss is good in itself in the first place.

ok. well, urs aint even on the podium, fuck the best in runnin
n we've already showed u its sure as fuck not good in the second coming...

anymore its like 6th or 7th.

lmao, now... lets talk about ya new crew a little

everyone in it sucks, 'cept key n myst is my dude
nique has balls... which makes u the biggest bitch in the crew
so talk big, go ahead n use ya vocab - i might hurl shit
u act posh... not smart, the mufuckin spice girl bitch
pussy. u fell off bad. n if u want me to throw in a hit
i'll base ya skill... cuz acid be right at home with that shit
i'm thinkin suicide, cause i hate you aint contending that well
but go head, shoot the shit... better u than me to send ya to hell
i show no homos love, so with u, i come doin the harmin
u on the flipside - cuz this faggot loves spoonin with marvin
i'ma caucasian thats 21. my two biggest fears r hearses n music
i thought i'd give u some personals. god knows ya verses could use it

[Donald Trump]

on the issue of who will win this, I got something to tattle
I'll leave this up to you... you're only good for bumping my battles
LOL This was a good persona
Battle by battle your crews hating, stop hiding you love it
Week in & week out - just describes you in private & Public
WOW this was real good nice punch feebs
I got that dope clout, this faggots blown out, his wins won't mount
you can add up your 5 fingers.. but on the other hand you don't count
Nice multies were good here and punch was cool also
Lucky you're behind a computer. Just admit when you flop
You're safe and sound.. like complete shit when you drop
Nah i wasnt feeling this
I would ask your opinion on lines both recent or hot
but no can do.. as an answer to whether you're decent or not
Ok this was a well excecuted punch
Seen you accused of biting, but I have my doubts queer...
I wont look into your verses.. they're bad enough from out here
LOL nice shit
Man I'll let you walk in my shoes for a bit, its funny your sour
If we trade places for a day, you'll only be in first for 24 hours
Ok punch


ok. well, urs aint even on the podium, fuck the best in runnin
n we've already showed u its sure as fuck not good in the second coming...
Nice punch Jay but a bit stretched
everyone in it sucks, 'cept key n myst is my dude
nique has balls... which makes u the biggest bitch in the crew
ROFL nice ass punch
so talk big, go ahead n use ya vocab - i might hurl shit
u act posh... not smart, the mufuckin spice girl bitch
Ok punch not feeling it that much though
pussy. u fell off bad. n if u want me to throw in a hit
i'll base ya skill... cuz acid be right at home with that shit
Nice punch
i'm thinkin suicide, cause i hate you aint contending that well
but go head, shoot the shit... better u than me to send ya to hell
This wasnt a real good punch dude =\
i show no homos love, so with u, i come doin the harmin
u on the flipside - cuz this faggot loves spoonin with marvin
Good personal not that hard hitting though
i'ma caucasian thats 21. my two biggest fears r hearses n music
i thought i'd give u some personals. god knows ya verses could use it
ROFL nice ass punch Jay

v-Feebs for more consistantcy

[Richard Parker]

ok. thanks for any honest votes. & really, I don't mind any honest feedback for why you didn't like a line if you didn't like it. And good battle Jay Walk. no shc tho guys

[Meks.]

on the issue of who will win this, I got something to tattle
I'll leave this up to you... you're only good for bumping my battles
ok
Battle by battle your crews hating, stop hiding you love it
Week in & week out - just describes you in private & Public
kind predictable but ok
I got that dope clout, this faggots blown out, his wins won't mount
you can add up your 5 fingers.. but on the other hand you don't count
decent at best
Lucky you're behind a computer. Just admit when you flop
You're safe and sound.. like complete shit when you drop
hah
I would ask your opinion on lines both recent or hot
but no can do.. as an answer to whether you're decent or not
nice
Seen you accused of biting, but I have my doubts queer...
I wont look into your verses.. they're bad enough from out here
ok
Man I'll let you walk in my shoes for a bit, its funny your sour
If we trade places for a day, you'll only be in first for 24 hours
not as good as the rest

good verse tho.

next

ok. well, urs aint even on the podium, fuck the best in runnin
n we've already showed u its sure as fuck not good in the second coming
decent
everyone in it sucks, 'cept key n myst is my dude
nique has balls... which makes u the biggest bitch in the crew
decent
so talk big, go ahead n use ya vocab - i might hurl shit
u act posh... not smart, the mufuckin spice girl bitch
nah
pussy. u fell off bad. n if u want me to throw in a hit
i'll base ya skill... cuz acid be right at home with that shit
hah
i'm thinkin suicide, cause i hate you aint contending that well
but go head, shoot the shit... better u than me to send ya to hell
ehh
i show no homos love, so with u, i come doin the harmin
u on the flipside - cuz this faggot loves spoonin with marvin
lol
i'ma caucasian thats 21. my two biggest fears r hearses n music
i thought i'd give u some personals. god knows ya verses could use it
ok

good verse, i'm still gonna have to vote feeble here for coming more consistent jay a couple of u punches missed and didnt hit as hard.

[Philly®]

on the issue of who will win this, I got something to tattle
I'll leave this up to you... you're only good for bumping my battles
LOL
Battle by battle your crews hating, stop hiding you love it
Week in & week out - just describes you in private & Public
nice punch
I got that dope clout, this faggots blown out, his wins won't mount
you can add up your 5 fingers.. but on the other hand you don't count
coo
Lucky you're behind a computer. Just admit when you flop
You're safe and sound.. like complete shit when you drop
meh
I would ask your opinion on lines both recent or hot
but no can do.. as an answer to whether you're decent or not
Ok
Seen you accused of biting, but I have my doubts queer...
I wont look into your verses.. they're bad enough from out here
LOL.. nice
Man I'll let you walk in my shoes for a bit, its funny your sour
If we trade places for a day, you'll only be in first for 24 hours
Ok


vs

ok. well, urs aint even on the podium, fuck the best in runnin
n we've already showed u its sure as fuck not good in the second coming...
Nice
everyone in it sucks, 'cept key n myst is my dude
nique has balls... which makes u the biggest bitch in the crew
lmfao
so talk big, go ahead n use ya vocab - i might hurl shit
u act posh... not smart, the mufuckin spice girl bitch
Ok
pussy. u fell off bad. n if u want me to throw in a hit
i'll base ya skill... cuz acid be right at home with that shit
Nice
i'm thinkin suicide, cause i hate you aint contending that well
but go head, shoot the shit... better u than me to send ya to hell
meh
i show no homos love, so with u, i come doin the harmin
u on the flipside - cuz this faggot loves spoonin with marvin
meh
i'ma caucasian thats 21. my two biggest fears r hearses n music
i thought i'd give u some personals. god knows ya verses could use it
rofl.. nice

v/Feebs... reason more consistancy...


you two vote on my contender's match

[Automatic.]

on the issue of who will win this, I got something to tattle
I'll leave this up to you... you're only good for bumping my battles
this is aight, ok wordplay
Battle by battle your crews hating, stop hiding you love it
Week in & week out - just describes you in private & Public
didnt like this at all
I got that dope clout, this faggots blown out, his wins won't mount
you can add up your 5 fingers.. but on the other hand you don't count
idk how this is dissing him. sure it is witty but its not a punch
Lucky you're behind a computer. Just admit when you flop
You're safe and sound.. like complete shit when you drop
naa not feeling this one either
I would ask your opinion on lines both recent or hot
but no can do.. as an answer to whether you're decent or not
haha this is cool
Seen you accused of biting, but I have my doubts queer...
I wont look into your verses.. they're bad enough from out here
aight aight
Man I'll let you walk in my shoes for a bit, its funny your sour
If we trade places for a day, you'll only be in first for 24 hours
naa theres no punch, ur just saying he'll be in first which isnt even true cuz ur not champ, self glory

vs.

ok. well, urs aint even on the podium, fuck the best in runnin
n we've already showed u its sure as fuck not good in the second coming...
ok ok
everyone in it sucks, 'cept key n myst is my dude
nique has balls... which makes u the biggest bitch in the crew
ive seen too many punches similar to this..
so talk big, go ahead n use ya vocab - i might hurl shit
u act posh... not smart, the mufuckin spice girl bitch
wording was meh
pussy. u fell off bad. n if u want me to throw in a hit
i'll base ya skill... cuz acid be right at home with that shit
liken this one
i'm thinkin suicide, cause i hate you aint contending that well
but go head, shoot the shit... better u than me to send ya to hell
naa not really a punch
i show no homos love, so with u, i come doin the harmin
u on the flipside - cuz this faggot loves spoonin with marvin
cool wordplay
i'ma caucasian thats 21. my two biggest fears r hearses n music
i thought i'd give u some personals. god knows ya verses could use it
decent at best

this battle was very close in my eyes. i think jay coulda pulled this off easily if he had one more good punch. the nique line wouldve been dope but there have been alot of punches like that just this season. imma have to go with feebs on this one, although i felt his verse was weaker then his usual.

v/ feebs

[Vaskez]

on the issue of who will win this, I got something to tattle
I'll leave this up to you... you're only good for bumping my battles
^^haha witty
Battle by battle your crews hating, stop hiding you love it
Week in & week out - just describes you in private & Public
^^hmm alright
I got that dope clout, this faggots blown out, his wins won't mount
you can add up your 5 fingers.. but on the other hand you don't count
^^reachin a bit with this one, I woulda worded it differently
Lucky you're behind a computer. Just admit when you flop
You're safe and sound.. like complete shit when you drop
^^haha, but kinda simplistic
I would ask your opinion on lines both recent or hot
but no can do.. as an answer to whether you're decent or not
^^cool
Seen you accused of biting, but I have my doubts queer...
I wont look into your verses.. they're bad enough from out here
^^alright
Man I'll let you walk in my shoes for a bit, its funny your sour
If we trade places for a day, you'll only be in first for 24 hours
^^hehe aight

vs.


ok. well, urs aint even on the podium, fuck the best in runnin
n we've already showed u its sure as fuck not good in the second coming...

anymore its like 6th or 7th.

^^ok

lmao, now... lets talk about ya new crew a little

everyone in it sucks, 'cept key n myst is my dude
nique has balls... which makes u the biggest bitch in the crew
^^funny but this's been done e.g. by Sobe: "Nique's the manliest..."
so talk big, go ahead n use ya vocab - i might hurl shit
u act posh... not smart, the mufuckin spice girl bitch
^^heh aight
pussy. u fell off bad. n if u want me to throw in a hit
i'll base ya skill... cuz acid be right at home with that shit
^^aight
i'm thinkin suicide, cause i hate you aint contending that well
but go head, shoot the shit... better u than me to send ya to hell
^^hmm a "shit" diss which I got criticised for, so I guess you cant get away with it either, hehe, although nice fresh flip

i show no homos love, so with u, i come doin the harmin
u on the flipside - cuz this faggot loves spoonin with marvin
^^haha but reachin a bit on the concept
i'ma caucasian thats 21. my two biggest fears r hearses n music
i thought i'd give u some personals. god knows ya verses could use it
^^meeeeh, seen this kinda thing too often

v/Feeble

[Mimesis.]

on the issue of who will win this, I got something to tattle
I'll leave this up to you... you're only good for bumping my battles
Battle by battle your crews hating, stop hiding you love it
Week in & week out - just describes you in private & Public
I got that dope clout, this faggots blown out, his wins won't mount
you can add up your 5 fingers.. but on the other hand you don't count
Seen you accused of biting, but I have my doubts queer...
I wont look into your verses.. they're bad enough from out here

vs.

everyone in it sucks, 'cept key n myst is my dude
nique has balls... which makes u the biggest bitch in the crew
so talk big, go ahead n use ya vocab - i might hurl shit
u act posh... not smart, the mufuckin spice girl bitch
i'ma caucasian thats 21. my two biggest fears r hearses n music
i thought i'd give u some personals. god knows ya verses could use it

Man, I was SO close to quoting Walker's 'shoot the shit' line, but the wording was off and it didn't seem to hit as hard as it could have. This was a good battle, though.

I have Feeble Minded taking it with one more quotable. .