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    Flowers

    No rhyme. So don't reply complainin' about it.

    They say flowers are a symbol of affection
    But eventually, even those die
    And what I want with you lasts forever
    So here, take these as a symbol of appreciation instead
    Appreciation for you bein' here
    Cuz you could be gone
    Or just get tired of comin' around anymore
    Either way, I'll find a new way to say I love you tomorrow
    Hopin' that you'll accept it
    Cuz nuthin' hurts more than fallin' in love with someone
    When they have no intentions on cathin' you
    Or at least pullin' out a safety net to break your fall
    But I'm used to fallin'
    That's prolly why I've been able to land on my feet lately
    Might take me a while to start walkin' again
    But I'll keep walkin'
    With my eyes closed, right into another trap
    Catchin' hook, line and sinker
    Don't worry about bait, your deception is enough already
    But, every time you drop me back in the water
    I learn a little more
    And grow a little more tired of your bullshit
    Matter a fact, there's no more lessons needed
    Fuck your catch and release games
    So here, gimme back my flowers
    Fuck showin' appreciation to someone who doesn't deserve it
    And you can take your arrow too
    Give it back to Cupid or somethin'
    Who knows, maybe he'll give you a refund
    Then, you can buy your own damn flowers
    And put 'em on your nightstand so you can look at them every night
    And appreciate the fact that I'm gone
    Appreciate the fact that you lost me
    Someone who turned your mistakes and flaws
    Into reasons for lovin' you
    Cuz no matter how many chances I gave you
    You never did appreciate that

    A.i

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    I like it. Its different. Its deep. Well done man. Nice change of pace.
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    yea i liked this....structure was a bit off and flow was descent..but it was deep and i liked the topic..something different..rhymes were good.......and overall i liked it..keep it up...

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    somethen different
    flowed great all the way thru
    good imagry
    i could see it more as a story or poem though
    since there is no rhyme
    but if u can spit it
    i can get it
    keep up
    drop some feed on mine
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    "Steadly Deciding...Thoughts Sowing Deadly weather
    I rip verses apart,Yet my flows pulls them together"

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    I liked this.. Alot. Just good words, ya know? You placed your perspective easily and it read like it was written quickly. Just flowed out right? Is this intended to be spoken word? It seemed like it. Anyways... I truly have nothing to complain about. Good flow, Good topic and well written. Props.

    Could you critique these lyrics for me? I always like to get some opinions before I record.
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    this didn't rhyme... :-\
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    I hate when people say your structure is off. Lmfao, how is your structure off? Anyway, I liked the poetic steez and the emotion you packed into this with the metaphorical repetition of 'flowers'. This chick really got to you, well the story, don't know if it's real or not.

    They say flowers are a symbol of affection
    But eventually, even those die
    And what I want with you lasts forever
    So here, take these as a symbol of appreciation instead
    Appreciation for you bein' here
    Cuz you could be gone
    Or just get tired of comin' around anymore
    Either way, I'll find a new way to say I love you tomorrow

    ^ I liked this opening part a lot. Really set the stage for the following words. Cool shit.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Private.
    yea i liked this....structure was a bit off and flow was descent..but it was deep and i liked the topic..something different..rhymes were good.......and overall i liked it..keep it up...
    what rhymes? lol

    good looks on the feedback.

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    it was tough. first time i read a OM that didnt ryhme but thats a hot way to drop something.its different.

    vote on this battle...anybody

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    a very different piece and im not used to seeing shit that dont rhyme on here, but you definately seemed to pull it off which is weird cuz i usually hate stuff that dont rhyme. but nice job being able to come out wit somethin different like that, overall i liked it, it was a cool deep piece and i dont know what else to say, it was just good for a drop that doesnt rhyme so nice work homie

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