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regular rules
verses due Friday. 12EST
Voting Ends Sunday
must vote on 3 battles
Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
Last edited by .Cal; June 3rd, 2006 at 02:27 PM
What it do, g/l to you too.
Artificial Intelligence
Ur a loser n a jerk, ur really the worst guy in town
So ill never review ur verse...I couldnt bare it the first time around
This kid is garbage, n this battle i will slam him alot
The fact ur even in the league, just shows the standards have dropped
And girls run from u, its a fact, chicks depise ur every word
There's a chance u could get head but, a headbut is more likely to occur
So get packin homes, need a ride? u better grab ya phone
Ill put a bounty on ya head...
Cuz ull need 9 rolls of it to clean the blood when I smash ya dome
Get bashed n thrown, stop babblin kid this is crunch time
But congrats, on singlehandedly making top battles look like the front lines
Son ur a boar, ull love animals after im done wit u whore
Kid u'll adore n reptiles...when I make your head one with the floor
I bring a handgun to kill this fag, homophobes will love me
Cuz Samsung isnt a phone...it just describes ya first date wit hubby
Im rapin u sonny, no effort involved, im toppling sinners
And kid if U God, then Wu-tang's prolly droppin that member
Artificial Intelligence
Seems like you’ve fallen off lately, but I guess there’s next week
And we don’t needa know where your format… to know ure a fuckin net geek
It’s true you aint quite rock bottom, but this win’ll be resounding
So don’t say your heart aint in it… cuz your penultimately made this a fuckin clowning
Losin to John, you’re on a downfall and you can’t weather it geek
See we know you’re a has been… the way you former wack verse every week
Ill compromise on SC’s slogan, even tho your verse is a duller thing
So watch as I beat this fag… and give a member of artificial colouring
You aint makin the playoffs dude, and its nothing less than you deserve
So if I do spare key… its cuz ya already used to bein a reserve
I know your considered dope n all, but ill never think ya good see,
But I like ya Hollywood shot… cuz anyone who puts you in a movie should be,
With a name like yours, your pretty much askin to get ragged…
This match is a gift, so ill give jab… hooks and uppercuts to this fag
Just step down dude… personally I think you shud sling ya words,
But it’s no surprise you’re a seasoned vet… you’ve already attracted a ring of herbs,
Pz.
PS: Marv stfu nobody likes you
Ur a loser n a jerk, ur really the worst guy in town
So ill never review ur verse...I couldnt bare it the first time around
meh..
This kid is garbage, n this battle i will slam him alot
The fact ur even in the league, just shows the standards have dropped
yea aight
And girls run from u, its a fact, chicks depise ur every word
There's a chance u could get head but, a headbut is more likely to occur
yea cool concept didnt like the wording.
So get packin homes, need a ride? u better grab ya phone
Ill put a bounty on ya head...
Cuz ull need 9 rolls of it to clean the blood when I smash ya dome
was cool
Get bashed n thrown, stop babblin kid this is crunch time
But congrats, on singlehandedly making top battles look like the front lines
haha
Son ur a boar, ull love animals after im done wit u whore
Kid u'll adore n reptiles...when I make your head one with the floor
cool wordplay..
I bring a handgun to kill this fag, homophobes will love me
Cuz Samsung isnt a phone...it just describes ya first date wit hubby
lmao
Im rapin u sonny, no effort involved, im toppling sinners
And kid if U God, then Wu-tang's prolly droppin that member
eh?
Seems like you’ve fallen off lately, but I guess there’s next week
And we don’t needa know where your format… to know ure a fuckin net geek
hmm coulda been so much better
It’s true you aint quite rock bottom, but this win’ll be resounding
So don’t say your heart aint in it… cuz your penultimately made this a fuckin clowning
was cool
Losin to John, you’re on a downfall and you can’t weather it geek
See we know you’re a has been… the way you former wack verse every week
nice
Ill compromise on SC’s slogan, even tho your verse is a duller thing
So watch as I beat this fag… and give a member of artificial colouring
lmao cool
You aint makin the playoffs dude, and its nothing less than you deserve
So if I do spare key… its cuz ya already used to bein a reserve
haha ight
I know your considered dope n all, but ill never think ya good see,
But I like ya Hollywood shot… cuz anyone who puts you in a movie should be,
lol nah
With a name like yours, your pretty much askin to get ragged…
This match is a gift, so ill give jab… hooks and uppercuts to this fag
aight
Just step down dude… personally I think you shud sling ya words,
But it’s no surprise you’re a seasoned vet… you’ve already attracted a ring of herbs,
meh didnt like it
hmm pretty cool battle here, was suprised tho, thought key woulda came harder... i dunno i just didnt like his verse fam.. had some quotables tho but meh liked lyrical gods verse better.. just appealed more..
so if it aint a DQ . vote - LG
Key - I guess you came as well as you needed to. I felt like you had a lot of very average lines which were only effective because LG is still pretty new to the league. Review your verse line was good tho, head butt was kinda funny, and I liked the samsung thing. Bounty was a nice concept, but ya didn't use it well at all. Overall, not bad, just some very bland lines in there.
LG - Artificial colouring was a cool concept, but I don't like the way ya used it. Key nameplays are played, but yours was pretty decent. Hollywood shot was a really nice concept, it was used okay but coulda been better. If you had been that consistent throughout, this match might have been yours. Unfortunately, as the case with most of your verse, you had a lot of played shit. Heart line, has been, jab... all that shit really damaged your verse a lot.
Overall - Key didn't have that much that was really dope, but came very consistent throughout n' really didn'dt have anything wack. LG, you had some cool ideas, but your wording and execution of concepts lacks that surprise element and it was definately your downfall here.
Vote - Key
Ive never seen penultimately w/play before.
Anyways, Thanks for votes
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Last edited by .Cal; June 4th, 2006 at 12:15 PM
wtf @ this having 2 votes..........
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Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
Key WINS (6-2)
Lyrical God LOSES (4-3)