regular rules
verses due Friday. 12EST
Voting Ends Sunday
must vote on 3 battles
agree on line limit in 3way
regular rules
verses due Friday. 12EST
Voting Ends Sunday
must vote on 3 battles
agree on line limit in 3way
Text (b.2001 - d.2006)
LLL Season Four: Champion
LLL Season Four: Undefeated
Rbs 1st Text Tourney Champ
LLL's Longest Streak (22-0)
Former SS League Champ
Rbs 1st Battle In Legends Forum
Rbs 1st 1-2 Punch Champ
Member of A.I.
wtf is this shit??? sorry lol
anywayz, let's go like 11 on each person cuz ppl wont wanna be readin no more than like 60 lines
Edit: actually i can drop like 2night if ya want. iunno why but mad concepts are just poppin into my head
Last edited by Tony Brown; May 30th, 2006 at 08:43 PM
ill prolly do like 20, 10 on each..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...53#post4540953
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=295033
Last edited by Mage; June 1st, 2006 at 11:05 PM
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Look Gucci........
Guess my parents were right, u can always learn something more
Cuz Cot Damn!......i’ve never seen a retarted gangsta before!!!
Listen up G, I most def ain’t a prep in close to any way
But shit....
Gucci’s makin even ME think holister’s the next big thang
He kinda slow plus I know words can have double meanings
So when I say this nigga’s grimey, I’m referring to ya hygiene
Now look, im not judgin u, but Gucci? Live up to ya name, G
S’ not the mark of the beast, s’ just shit stains on ya bed sheets
I gotta hand it to you though, them kicks is holdin up well
That shoe you rockin is a throwback.....onto the fuckin shelf
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yea that^^ WAS my verse, but he pulled a bitch move so.....
Beatin me? He’ll do all that he can, fuck yea the kid’s desperate
Deleted his pic, but compared w/ urs, my punches r STILL effective
It’s obvious to see MM wanted you gone, outta the fuckin league
He knew the surest way to do it, was to put you against me
Cuz ima fuckin beast, btw that alias you rockin, it aint hot, G
That dollar sign….HELL NO, fag stop tryna be $pit’s mini-me
Sayin im wack, haha stop the bull shit, if so then tell me how
Cuz everytime I start a crew, you’re the first dumbass to tryout
I’ll give it to u, since you joined, u elevated a lot, a str8 monsta
N despite that, you somehow manage to stay ranked at the bottom
Shit, life sucks n you could most definately relate just the same
Cuz Gucci^......that's NOT just me writin your username
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Nervous as rocks, now look I aint from Des Moines, but well...
I’ll admit Iowa apology for givin an underage teen an L
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Ok, that was harsh, I’m done w/ the mean ish n makin u feel bad
Hey, your onto something.....a record ALMOST as bad as Vlad’s
You broke fuck get a job, no one’s ever been as poor as u were
So if im talking bout VT’s capital, I obviously mean Montpelier
See usually, I’d throw some kinda punch about Anov cheating
But that’ll get played quick…sorta like ur lines are weekly
You shook? Must be, still ain’t shown, c’ mon hater....
Get your fuckin check in!......so I can rob you for it later
N you wouldn’t do shit about it^^^you’re a punk, trust
Plus your lines are so stretched...u’d make Tae Profit jealous
Last edited by Tony Brown; June 3rd, 2006 at 12:25 PM
Wtf?! why'd you delete your pic gucci? put the shit back up there if your the one who deleted it.
Bitches,
ya'll aint winnin' coz yall both lookin' scrawny like them fuckin' olsens
its a Mystery
.............how'd I go from gettin' a wack opponent, to gettin' TWINS!
Tony Brown....
ya raps look out of breath so i'll start with a lil re naming, you snout
look at it foldout, tony aka skirt coz even my girl would wear you out
im comin' with straight fire ya'll, T's burnt out? dont have to guess
its ironic...... that this is a 3-way battle and your STILL fourth best
thats your verse? LOL ya got no hope, and mine? well it's just dope
tony wanted to drop heat.............. so the phucker toasted his soap
lookin' at ya verse ya dont even have to say you half assed, clown
when ya gon' bust out ya skills son? been waitin' half a year now
now let me put a end to this, without you even makin' a sound
i would of burnt & scortched you.. but fact is your already brown
Vlad Tempus....
ya girl'll bend over backwards for you, but she'll bend forwards for me
say you a pimp n always get hoes? <- but its not that time of year yet b
the chicks you be fuckin', ew stick ones n ones that fuckin weigh a pound
truth is you do have heaps of hoes, only when december comes around
vlad dont temped us, to boot ya rapunzel ass out, coz ya text is poor
coz after this L, ya record'll start lookin' like a fuckin' basketball score
they say "what goes around comes around" but i don't think it's true
coz we forgot you went,
.........so you gon come back around? or did karma forget about you too ?
T sat on a tree that decides legend? or dope?, all he got was a cough
well vlad tryed to get on and the tree fuckin' kicked him off.
-Garikz "The Snake" Hattan
Last edited by $nake.; June 2nd, 2006 at 08:57 AM
you cant just change your verse lmao...
but w/e uppin'
you cant just delete your pic either homo
Cuz ima fuckin beast, btw that alias you rockin, it aint hot, G
That dollar sign….HELL NO, fag stop tryna be $pit’s mini-me
Ok, that was harsh, I’m done w/ the mean ish n makin u feel bad
Hey, your onto something.....a record ALMOST as bad as Vlad’s
Nervous as rocks, now look I aint from Des Moines, but well...
I’ll admit Iowa apology for givin an underage teen an L
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ya'll aint winnin' coz yall both lookin' scrawny like them fuckin' olsens
its a Mystery
.............how'd I go from gettin' a wack opponent, to gettin' TWINS!
ya raps look out of breath so i'll start with a lil re naming, you snout
look at it foldout, tony aka skirt coz even my girl would wear you out
now let me put a end to this, without you even makin' a sound
i would of burnt & scortched you.. but fact is your already brown
they say "what goes around comes around" but i don't think it's true
coz we forgot you went,
.........so you gon come back around? or did karma forget about you too ?
aiite battle.. i wasnt feelin your first verse tony.. + i dont really remember how the pic was.. but umm.. i thought you coulda done better.. naw.. i kno you can do better.. ur 2nd and 3rd verse were alrite tho.. the iowa punch was cool.. but other than that i wasnt feelin much of it.. but u didnt have some other aiite lines.. gucci.. cool opener.. not bad.. i was feelin ur tony brown verse more than the verse agianst vlad.. but nonetheless.. i think u came with better punches.. and slightly edged this..
v/ Gucci
w/e bearch.
Sayin im wack, haha stop the bull shit, if so then tell me how
Cuz everytime I start a crew, you’re the first dumbass to tryout
I’ll give it to u, since you joined, u elevated a lot, a str8 monsta
N despite that, you somehow manage to stay ranked at the bottom
Nervous as rocks, now look I aint from Des Moines, but well...
I’ll admit Iowa apology for givin an underage teen an L
Vs.
im comin' with straight fire ya'll, T's burnt out? dont have to guess
its ironic...... that this is a 3-way battle and your STILL fourth best
lookin' at ya verse ya dont even have to say you half assed, clown
when ya gon' bust out ya skills son? been waitin' half a year now
now let me put a end to this, without you even makin' a sound
i would of burnt & scortched you.. but fact is your already brown
Never counted punches against vlad...
Vote/Gucci i felt his quotables were stronger.
Tony can dodge real fights,but can he dodge these fist.
You can show ur Bicep..but its already quite obvious.
Im here 2 win,So fuck tryna son you proper like poppa can.
Cuz Tony's the weakest in the league like Aquaman.
Wack,Disguting,pitifull an weak<--Yep,u fit in the ratio.
Cuz We only demand seeing tony drop.....when its on HBO.
T dope?yall cant convince me.
Cuz he aint just flippin lines,hes drop'n the same 1's used against me!
------------->King of RB?Ur no heir to the throne Lyin Bastard!
The Truth hits so hard'll give u ^ line fractures.
Snakes a bitch,You no showed an now its my sad turn.
Sike,Cuz even if gucci changed his name..we still see ur pattern.
This battles a wack fact,infact us 3 know defeat stinks.
Cuz in this Chain of events..we all know Gucci's the weak link.
Ill damage this youth,and hand'em his loss such blunt truth.
Cuz my punches'll going for the gold....thats on ur front tooth.
Ur sweet like berry's that red an blue,yes its true.
Cuz you can ^ ur emotion as deep as these punches'll will you.
So shut up scramz,those wack bars wont reach vote limits.
Cuz This battle's the wackest in the league,Not one quote in it.
U can DQ me if yall want...My bad..I kinda didnt have computer access.
Sayin im wack, haha stop the bull shit, if so then tell me how
Cuz everytime I start a crew, you’re the first dumbass to tryout
I’ll give it to u, since you joined, u elevated a lot, a str8 monsta
N despite that, you somehow manage to stay ranked at the bottom
Nervous as rocks, now look I aint from Des Moines, but well...
I’ll admit Iowa apology for givin an underage teen an L
Vs.
im comin' with straight fire ya'll, T's burnt out? dont have to guess
its ironic...... that this is a 3-way battle and your STILL fourth best
lookin' at ya verse ya dont even have to say you half assed, clown
when ya gon' bust out ya skills son? been waitin' half a year now
now let me put a end to this, without you even makin' a sound
i would of burnt & scortched you.. but fact is your already brown
Punches against vlad dont count so i vote Gucci for having stronger punches against Brown
Im TayTay
Tony Brown....
im comin' with straight fire ya'll, T's burnt out? dont have to guess
its ironic...... that this is a 3-way battle and your STILL fourth best
lookin' at ya verse ya dont even have to say you half assed, clown
when ya gon' bust out ya skills son? been waitin' half a year now
now let me put a end to this, without you even makin' a sound
i would of burnt & scortched you.. but fact is your already brown
the chicks you be fuckin', ew stick ones n ones that fuckin weigh a pound
truth is you do have heaps of hoes, only when december comes around
^meh
vlad dont temped us, to boot ya rapunzel ass out, coz ya text is poor
coz after this L, ya record'll start lookin' like a fuckin' basketball score
T sat on a tree that decides legend? or dope?, all he got was a cough
well vlad tryed to get on and the tree fuckin' kicked him off.
Gooch - ok verse, real direct against tony, not so direct on Vlad but still some OK punches. could've been a better verse, some wack concepts, and some BARELY quotable lines on this list above.
vs.
Sayin im wack, haha stop the bull shit, if so then tell me how
Cuz everytime I start a crew, you’re the first dumbass to tryout
I’ll give it to u, since you joined, u elevated a lot, a str8 monsta
N despite that, you somehow manage to stay ranked at the bottom
Nervous as rocks, now look I aint from Des Moines, but well...
I’ll admit Iowa apology for givin an underage teen an L
Ok, that was harsh, I’m done w/ the mean ish n makin u feel bad
Hey, your onto something.....a record ALMOST as bad as Vlad’s
You shook? Must be, still ain’t shown, c’ mon hater....
Get your fuckin check in!......so I can rob you for it later
N you wouldn’t do shit about it^^^you’re a punk, trust
Plus your lines are so stretched...u’d make Tae Profit jealous
Tony - couple nice lines, some bad ones. not THAT direct on gucci, but you deffinatly owned Vlad lol ..
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Im here 2 win,So fuck tryna son you proper like poppa can.
Cuz Tony's the weakest in the league like Aquaman.
Vlad - seriously the only line of yours that was kind of funny to me. the rest was kind'a shitty. sorry
so to end the story here, i think that Gucci, obviously came more direct. he swung hard, and tony brought some goddamn fire against Vlad, but gucci was owning tony a little more here while as Vlad didn't do much. so basically, Tony owned Vlad, but gucci beat tony ..weird battle
v. Gooch
can i have some feedback plzzzz
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