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    Haven't You People Heard Of

    With my suit strapped to the shadow
    Of half an anvil over my adam's apple
    Battle with mist with arthrital wrist
    Slip into a puddle of bananas, ripped
    Open at the seams, and the anvil falls
    Crushing my balls, distorting the future
    Scripting a timeline , sign language neutured
    For the general public with pubic hair
    Pick, Our expressions square, like build a bear
    Gone wrong....

    Now come out of a dream yound padawan
    Dream banded in thongs are gone
    Do you remember what your doing
    Using the force, a lightsaber diffusing
    Slipping deeper into extacy, a quicksand of drugs
    Killing time down your lungs, her hair rung
    From the semen that clung to lips
    That drip in lipstick, circling the tips
    Of a theoretic children postulated in clits

    Ha.... Ha... all because you screwed a bitch
    In the premier of Star Wars.

    No doors to close, clothes disposed
    Snuggled into popcorn cannisters exposed
    Rows empty of ghosts, ushers post
    Themselves at silver stiched into the aisle
    Coughing bile into the faces of bodies piled
    Small children sneaking in to see the sex scene
    Lycopene mantled nipples, what you eat
    Is you, yes I guess they are watching you

    The ghosts
    The ushers
    The broke children

    That puts a new spin on R- rated
    Have you ever dated, or waited
    Upon her like medieval ignorance

    Wait! Look where the semen went!

    Got you!

    Why haven't they kicked you outside
    Because you paid! The customer is always right

    -Keystyle. Wrote it like in five minutes.

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=294510
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=293292
    Last edited by Syk.iLL; May 29th, 2006 at 10:49 PM

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    poetic in style wordplay was vicious,took a second to build but when it did every factor played so well this was actually a good read i like your style

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    Fly My Child!!!!

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    Upping once more For you people

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    Fly Once More

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    pretty damn poetic....i liked it for the most part...
    flow was nice..rhymes were good...
    topic was interesting and this was kind of creative..
    Overall this was a good peice....
    Much room for elevation though...keep at it....peace

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