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Thread: Woman In The Mirror - Solo.

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    Resistance
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    Woman In The Mirror - Solo.

    Woman In The Mirror

    No emotion in this relationship, She didnt really hate at heart.
    I loved her so much, But i really didnt play the part.
    So many arguements, she dropped to her knees and swore to god.
    That she would never be in my house again, And on the bed she left a mark.
    It was a letter, saying the sorrows and hatred towards me.
    I left her 12 messages, Asking her to come back to me.
    I think about the mistakes i've made, and the pain i should've healed.
    She saw all the pictures and videos, now i was revealed.
    Life was really worth something, when i was a part of her.
    I called her once again, i was shocked thatvshe answered.
    She said i have 3 minutes to elxplain, i told her how i was really hurt.
    Scared at night, no one to hold me from the thunder.
    After i finished my sorrows, she murmmered with tears, and i wondered.
    Did she hang up, did she listen even listen to anyhting that i said.
    Then i hung up the phone and took a qiuck shower before the bed.
    Then she randomly called crying, saying she was hurt too from leaving.
    And i said i should be the one feeling your pain, because i didnt know the meaning.
    Of love when i looked into her eyes, But when i did it made things clearer.
    Washing my face, looked up and i saw My Woman In The Mirror.




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    Resistance
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    Last edited by Resistance; May 24th, 2006 at 08:16 PM

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    Resistance
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    uppin for some feed.

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    Resistance
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    ...

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    this shit was tuff I liked and felt the emotion going threw the shit so I can relate to this ur structure was okay and ur wording was ight this shit was real good I liked it ur elavating
    Free Agent.

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    I like how u created a picture for me and was real easy to follow good structure and showing of emotion

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    thanks for the feed homies, uppin for some more.

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