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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    SETTING IT OFF FOR tAKE mONEY FAM

    Nigguz only think get paid, pay for they sins when they get old.
    Fuk that, Im full blown aids, you’re a full grown common cold,
    get it right shorty seeing me is like fighting dehydration with a 40.
    Anyone talking beef please abort
    Im from a hood that leaves most looking like ritzy resorts
    Cats looking more broke down than ford escorts.
    Love don’t live here, my battles is like divorce court.
    You aint herd ?Im a beast, Turning these hemophiliacs to necrophiliacs
    riding dicks of the deceased, niggus that should be resting in peace
    im platinum bound over ipod sounds cassette tapes rewound even renoun on mp3
    my fans include the devil and G-O-D with
    churches passing a collection plate to donate to my cd.
    I aint in the for cash just to tell the world to kiss my ass
    Meaning im dope in my craft having addicts fighting for the stones I cast.
    Child neglect these 16’s ,one of the freshest spitting with out listerene.
    Emcees pussy around like they aint dicks inbetween
    theres no room here for drag queens rolling with fag teams
    skill recognize skill real know real but yall something I cant feel
    Centz is to ill raping so many emcees facing me comes with a bill
    and a consalation prize of morning after pills.
    Exhaust residue and smoke from my lungs,No guns
    but get arrested for trying to slide my gums through customs.
    Spitting these shots , bumin me in your ride
    Could resort in police escorts with criminal charges for drive bye’s
    Paragraph and 16’s cant kill this menace, even if you rhyme with a vengence
    you couldn’t murder me with spits if we shared the same dentist.
    But im relentless enough to Make life without parole your only death senetence
    Peep game my name should be AOL how im nice with the aim.
    Infared scope in my eyes to single out these lames
    But im ashamed of these kids with weak veres and weaker adlibs.
    Faking about it thenturn around glorifying doing bids
    And whoever think they notroius aint BIG if they live.
    If there’s a chance in hell there isn’t one in heaven if you suck
    That’s why I dont swet it, my careers going up.
    None offending me just practicing selebacy
    Every mans has skeletons in they closet for you they gay tendencies.
    It would be better to fold on mic then battle and pay the toll
    Im in a different league like the world series and super bowl.
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Damn bro...You never let me down fam...Im telling you we need to collab...You are straight lyrical hip hop in your pieces...you aint poetry or whatever the fuck niggaz be puttin on O.M...In fact fuck it...I dont give a fuck , im drunk anyway...90% of these niggaz shit belong in the poetry section not in O.M....I thought O.M. was hip hop musical verses...feel me? well anyway im fucked up homie...but i always feel you pieces...yo hit me back on my latest piece...

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    Uppin This And Pm Me Fam
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    damn shit is cryptic
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    yep I'm feel'n this too
    had alot good verses alittle too raw for most
    but never the less you had whats required
    Keep up the good post its missed badly Max.Cleveland
    In The Middle Of It All, I'm The One You Call, "MAX'CLEVELAND"




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    upping this
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    damn...what can i say but nice dawg
    shit i'd like to say i could but out some shit like dis
    but im a keep elevating and i'll be up there wit u soon cuz

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    thanx for the love twin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    you did a ok job, but you dont need alot of punches in topicals, you just need imaging and wording.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Theory.
    you did a ok job, but you dont need alot of punches in topicals, you just need imaging and wording.
    i feel you but im trying to change the average killed concept of how rhymes including topicals are done
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    yeah this was a pretty good drop glad you did it man you did a good job on imagery no doubt and creativity was there from the begining nice wordplay in a way and it was an ok take on the topic but it was pretty long and the structure seemed to be a bit off at some points but a good drop overall

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