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    Notebook knowledge

    Wit a Chrome full a lead,Naw fuck that
    Take the lead wit da Chrome
    Gave a nigga 2 Choices
    "Pay up,Or take the lead to the dome"
    Must a thought fast,Payed...
    ...And sent his ass home
    Dont ever Deal with a Crew,I take my business alone...
    ...ill rattle ya bones,leads flying,drop ya to the ground
    Im hood Bound,Naw fuck that
    Nigga I run hoods down...
    ...No Bodies found,Put the lac to the coast
    Another Bittch,For another notch on my bed post
    Call a the ghost,Naw fuck that
    Call me the Ghost writer
    Full a goose,Naw fuck that
    Full a goose and cider
    Take ya higher,Alcoholic level steadly rising...
    ...Order another drink?
    This is a matter worth compromising
    Steadly Deciding...Thoughts Sowing Deadly weather
    I rip verses apart,Yet my flows pulls them together
    From rhymes which nether,To let them Attack
    It aint bout the 20 spent on the sack
    Its the fact,I flipped the sack to put 20's on the lac cuz
    I know this shit,From the Good side a bad
    Upside a down,And Happiness of the Mad bruh
    Id try and end this,But i dont see it happening
    I lost my flow,Bout 3 Verses ago,Its Contradacting
    Contradciting,Ill sluuurrr my words,Reading this text
    Flyin ya higher than herbs,Turn Verbs to nouns
    What I type is how it sounds,Let these voice come around cuz
    Would it take a grip,To dip ya a Bit
    Come sit...wit me,ill show you what fits
    Im Speaking Non sense,I cant even Flow
    The shit i Grow,Is Dro the you blow
    Ready To sow,Strait Scared of snow
    Not Really,White girls is how i Roll (Cocaine)
    Stimulatin ya brain,Im Rippin too many topics
    I probably lost ya at the last subject,Like the Wrench with out its sockit
    This only the 1st piece of many more to come
    Empty ya clips,or either load ya guns
    Come get some...nigga
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    "Steadly Deciding...Thoughts Sowing Deadly weather
    I rip verses apart,Yet my flows pulls them together"

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    "Steadly Deciding...Thoughts Sowing Deadly weather
    I rip verses apart,Yet my flows pulls them together"

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    leave some feed plz
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    "Steadly Deciding...Thoughts Sowing Deadly weather
    I rip verses apart,Yet my flows pulls them together"

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    For a 15 year old homie your not bad at all...your creative...You could work on a couple things, one being that your verse seems to wander an I fell out of interest a couple times, but I mean you have talent for your age...I must say that...

    "Steadly Deciding...Thoughts Sowing Deadly weather
    I rip verses apart,Yet my flows pulls them together"

    Those were your best lines...Keep at it homie, your on the right track your bound to elevate...Hit my latest piece up when you get the chance...thanks peace...

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    actually this was fire for your age hot 16's and you aint even 16 work on punches
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Word of the day: Elevation

    It comes in time, but some things you can do to help it along is to up your vocab a little, and work on your flow and the structure of your verse. You're young, and show some potential. All-in-all, this wasn't a bad piece.

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    (You should all check this out)



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    Quote Originally Posted by ELEETE
    For a 15 year old homie your not bad at all...your creative...You could work on a couple things, one being that your verse seems to wander an I fell out of interest a couple times, but I mean you have talent for your age...I must say that...

    "Steadly Deciding...Thoughts Sowing Deadly weather
    I rip verses apart,Yet my flows pulls them together"

    Those were your best lines...Keep at it homie, your on the right track your bound to elevate...Hit my latest piece up when you get the chance...thanks peace...
    ^^^^WERD ........... This was not a bad read at all .....

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    Thanks yall and i know i had already wrote up to the alochol line and then i went to go make something to eat..so i lost flow a bit
    Elevation i know
    thanks for the feed
    keep it up
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    "Steadly Deciding...Thoughts Sowing Deadly weather
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    "Steadly Deciding...Thoughts Sowing Deadly weather
    I rip verses apart,Yet my flows pulls them together"

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