Com (4-2) Vs. Mr.Write (4-1)

[Mystery~Murdera]

regular rules
due Fri 12 EST
Votes Close Sun.
check in by Thurs.
must vote on
championship
match & two others.

[Erupt]

hey Write..
20 lines?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...30#post4434730
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=291221
also voted on championship match

[Mr W.Rite]

thats cool

[Erupt]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/atta...id=14536&stc=1


Got ladies dieing to meet ya, to Kyle and the rest you're a preacher,
And congrats on your promotion... from the Chef to a teacher
I'll beat ya face till its caved in, so prepare to be rocked n' amazed kid
Coz you're about to witness a spectacle...get knocked off your face quick
Its fucking blatant he's dead, but don't go mentioning this thread
I mean dude's had a lot on his mind, look at the dent in his head
Bitch I'll take your rank without question you're the nicest yank in contention
The last time he tried to harbor a grudge.. I sank his intentions
So invent some new shit you're past it, bitch your writing needs help
This prick's so long in the tooth.. he's started biting himself
You said if I kept dropping like this I'd take the league, so never doubt Com
So I'll say "Write keep dropping fire... it'll be the same fucking outcome"
And Prick my time has begun so why try now when I've won?
Bitch I'ma relish this moment, so get your ass on the bun
And its good you no showed, but the leagues confused where your mind is
Coz Rite ain't missing battles.. just practising his role for the finals
I'll leave your spinal cord shattered, and no one cares that you're battered
Just face it dude, your spots... are the only thing that ever mattered
And I know work gets in the way, but we all want you to turn up
So make the choice in what you're pushing.. pens or your luck

[Mr W.Rite]

that guy in your pic is dope lol..
sorry Com i cant show this week man
good verse man..

[Mr W.Rite]

nah just kidding


lets go..






Lately…






Different styles have plagued the league, they suck, n its boring dude
At least Cam’s just experimenting…so what the fuck is your excuse
Stop beggin to make legends - just do your job…and choke whore
You’ll only be in the Championship - to peep my shit to vote for
With ya average achievements…you shouldn’t be proud of shit son
I’ll even start from ten until I’ve counted your ass - outta this one
And yea I said he was dope before, but i admit, this fellas a loser
Is that really the name of your crew, or are you telling the future?
I know you hate the changes, u fallen hard, just take the spanking
DaTrusHurtz, so it must’ve killed you when u didn’t make the rankings
shouldn’t be on the roster, crew got heads that’s used to writing
your best is Spit and your behind the dude that’s been accused of biting
To hell with bless-ed atonement, fuck wit me - you testing the strongest
But I figured he’d come outta no where, like the rest of the homeless
Im blazing chief…and sorry Com, but its you I’d hate to be
I must be amaze, cause this fag gets’loss every time he faces me
Fuck it
erase the beef…got something to prove, bitch stop ya message
Just give up now – cus Spits already got the final spot in legends
trashin this dweeb…the talk of the town’s when this bastard should leave
thinkin you’re dope, three of ya wins came in the worse half of the league




-W.Rite

[Joe Metts]

Mr. W.rite you look like d-von dudley and i look like bubba ray. i thought that comment was worth a freepost since its true and funny, which is a deadly combination.

[Cody Nash]

Got ladies dieing to meet ya, to Kyle and the rest you're a preacher,
And congrats on your promotion... from the Chef to a teacher
I'll beat ya face till its caved in, so prepare to be rocked n' amazed kid
Coz you're about to witness a spectacle...get knocked off your face quick
^lmao.
Its fucking blatant he's dead, but don't go mentioning this thread
I mean dude's had a lot on his mind, look at the dent in his head
rofl
Bitch I'll take your rank without question you're the nicest yank in contention
The last time he tried to harbor a grudge.. I sank his intentions
You said if I kept dropping like this I'd take the league, so never doubt Com
So I'll say "Write keep dropping fire... it'll be the same fucking outcome"
And Prick my time has begun so why try now when I've won?
Bitch I'ma relish this moment, so get your ass on the bun
nice
I'll leave your spinal cord shattered, and no one cares that you're battered
Just face it dude, your spots... are the only thing that ever mattered

vs

Different styles have plagued the league, they suck, n its boring dude
At least Cam’s just experimenting…so what the fuck is your excuse
^heh cool
Stop beggin to make legends - just do your job…and choke whore
You’ll only be in the Championship - to peep my shit to vote for
^i saw this one a couple weeks ago ..i think $pit used it, not sure.
And yea I said he was dope before, but i admit, this fellas a loser
Is that really the name of your crew, or are you telling the future?
I know you hate the changes, u fallen hard, just take the spanking
DaTrusHurtz, so it must’ve killed you when u didn’t make the rankings
both of these were awsome ..
To hell with bless-ed atonement, fuck wit me - you testing the strongest
But I figured he’d come outta no where, like the rest of the homeless
trashin this dweeb…the talk of the town’s when this bastard should leave
thinkin you’re dope, three of ya wins came in the worse half of the league

i barely quoted that championship punch because i've seen it almost word for word like that. and i didn't quote the amaze one because even i've used that concept in Front Lines and i suck ass. . .lol, the battle itself was pretty tight. COM had the upperhand here from the beginning, write's verse was alright. but there was a lot there i didn't like and some i felt like i was reading a repeat of another line. dunno, just my opinion. that spectacle line was cool from COM too ..i got COM here,

v. COM

[Vaskez]

I'll beat ya face till its caved in, so prepare to be rocked n' amazed kid
Coz you're about to witness a spectacle...get knocked off your face quick
Its fucking blatant he's dead, but don't go mentioning this thread
I mean dude's had a lot on his mind, look at the dent in his head
So invent some new shit you're past it, bitch your writing needs help
This prick's so long in the tooth.. he's started biting himself
And its good you no showed, but the leagues confused where your mind is
Coz Rite ain't missing battles.. just practising his role for the finals


vs.


Different styles have plagued the league, they suck, n its boring dude
At least Cam’s just experimenting…so what the fuck is your excuse
With ya average achievements…you shouldn’t be proud of shit son
I’ll even start from ten until I’ve counted your ass - outta this one
I know you hate the changes, u fallen hard, just take the spanking
DaTrusHurtz, so it must’ve killed you when u didn’t make the rankings
shouldn’t be on the roster, crew got heads that’s used to writing
your best is Spit and your behind the dude that’s been accused of biting
To hell with bless-ed atonement, fuck wit me - you testing the strongest
But I figured he’d come outta no where, like the rest of the homeless
trashin this dweeb…the talk of the town’s when this bastard should leave
thinkin you’re dope, three of ya wins came in the worse half of the league

lol good battle, both had a lotta hits on target, all of those were strong quotables, but Write's more personal touch took this for him IMO

v/Write

[DaTrusHurtz]

Got ladies dieing to meet ya, to Kyle and the rest you're a preacher,
And congrats on your promotion... from the Chef to a teacher
I'll beat ya face till its caved in, so prepare to be rocked n' amazed kid
Coz you're about to witness a spectacle...get knocked off your face quick
Its fucking blatant he's dead, but don't go mentioning this thread
I mean dude's had a lot on his mind, look at the dent in his head
And its good you no showed, but the leagues confused where your mind is
Coz Rite ain't missing battles.. just practising his role for the finals

vs.

Different styles have plagued the league, they suck, n its boring dude
At least Cam’s just experimenting…so what the fuck is your excuse
I know you hate the changes, u fallen hard, just take the spanking
DaTrusHurtz, so it must’ve killed you when u didn’t make the rankings
To hell with bless-ed atonement, fuck wit me - you testing the strongest
But I figured he’d come outta no where, like the rest of the homeless
trashin this dweeb…the talk of the town’s when this bastard should leave
thinkin you’re dope, three of ya wins came in the worse half of the league

This battle was alright, but not as good as I expected. Com, you started off dope as fuck and after reading your first 3 bars I thought it was ova, but you really fell off hard after that. The witness a spectacle shit was definately my favorite line of the battle. Write, you came okay, the 4 bars I quoted for you were pretty dope. However, I felt the rest of your verse had too many bland personals in it. Most of them were things all too familiar to what I've seen before, just wasn't that witty. Thanks for givin' me a shoutout, the idea is played as fuck but the flip was a pretty nice personal. Anyway, I got this tied 4-4 in quotables, it was close. After rereading, I just think Com was slightly more consistent and his quotables were better.

Vote - Com

[Automatic.]

I'll beat ya face till its caved in, so prepare to be rocked n' amazed kid
Coz you're about to witness a spectacle...get knocked off your face quick
Its fucking blatant he's dead, but don't go mentioning this thread
I mean dude's had a lot on his mind, look at the dent in his head
So invent some new shit you're past it, bitch your writing needs help
This prick's so long in the tooth.. he's started biting himself
And its good you no showed, but the leagues confused where your mind is
Coz Rite ain't missing battles.. just practising his role for the finals

vs.

Different styles have plagued the league, they suck, n its boring dude
At least Cam’s just experimenting…so what the fuck is your excuse
And yea I said he was dope before, but i admit, this fellas a loser
Is that really the name of your crew, or are you telling the future?
I know you hate the changes, u fallen hard, just take the spanking
DaTrusHurtz, so it must’ve killed you when u didn’t make the rankings
shouldn’t be on the roster, crew got heads that’s used to writing
your best is Spit and your behind the dude that’s been accused of biting
trashin this dweeb…the talk of the town’s when this bastard should leave
thinkin you’re dope, three of ya wins came in the worse half of the league

I have write winning this by one quotable. Great battle though, alot of lol lines on both sides. There were a few more on COMs verse that were ok but i just wasnt feeling them enough to quote them. O btw write, i used that vote in my battle line a couple of weeks ago. but ya, write got this one.

v/ Write

[Donald Trump]

Got ladies dieing to meet ya, to Kyle and the rest you're a preacher,
And congrats on your promotion... from the Chef to a teacher
I'll beat ya face till its caved in, so prepare to be rocked n' amazed kid
Coz you're about to witness a spectacle...get knocked off your face quick
Its fucking blatant he's dead, but don't go mentioning this thread
I mean dude's had a lot on his mind, look at the dent in his head
And its good you no showed, but the leagues confused where your mind is
Coz Rite ain't missing battles.. just practising his role for the finals

vs.

Different styles have plagued the league, they suck, n its boring dude
At least Cam’s just experimenting…so what the fuck is your excuse
I know you hate the changes, u fallen hard, just take the spanking
DaTrusHurtz, so it must’ve killed you when u didn’t make the rankings
To hell with bless-ed atonement, fuck wit me - you testing the strongest
But I figured he’d come outta no where, like the rest of the homeless

v-COM

[Born To Kill]

I'll beat ya face till its caved in, so prepare to be rocked n' amazed kid
Coz you're about to witness a spectacle...get knocked off your face quick
Bitch I'll take your rank without question you're the nicest yank in contention
The last time he tried to harbor a grudge.. I sank his intentions

VS

Different styles have plagued the league, they suck, n its boring dude
At least Cam’s just experimenting…so what the fuck is your excuse
Im blazing chief…and sorry Com, but its you I’d hate to be
I must be amaze, cause this fag gets’loss every time he faces me
trashin this dweeb…the talk of the town’s when this bastard should leave
thinkin you’re dope, three of ya wins came in the worse half of the league

I dunno...

I just didn't like much from this battle.

But I think Write hit more...and harder.

[Mimesis.]

Got ladies dieing to meet ya, to Kyle and the rest you're a preacher,
And congrats on your promotion... from the Chef to a teacher
Its fucking blatant he's dead, but don't go mentioning this thread
I mean dude's had a lot on his mind, look at the dent in his head
Bitch I'll take your rank without question you're the nicest yank in contention
The last time he tried to harbor a grudge.. I sank his intentions
And its good you no showed, but the leagues confused where your mind is
Coz Rite ain't missing battles.. just practising his role for the finals

vs.

Different styles have plagued the league, they suck, n its boring dude
At least Cam’s just experimenting…so what the fuck is your excuse
With ya average achievements…you shouldn’t be proud of shit son
I’ll even start from ten until I’ve counted your ass - outta this one
To hell with bless-ed atonement, fuck wit me - you testing the strongest
But I figured he’d come outta no where, like the rest of the homeless
Im blazing chief…and sorry Com, but its you I’d hate to be
I must be amaze, cause this fag gets’loss every time he faces me
erase the beef…got something to prove, bitch stop ya message
Just give up now – cus Spits already got the final spot in legends

Dope battle. . I got Write with one more quotable though. .

[Erupt]

4-3 to Write