Vaskez (5-2) Vs. Camarac (4-2)

[Mystery~Murdera]

regular rules
due Fri 12 EST
Votes Close Sun.
check in by Thurs.
must vote on
championship
match & two others.

[Vaskez]

yep, 10-20 match whoever drops first

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post4433726
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...33#post4446033
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...39#post4448939

[Baron Mynd]

Sounds good. :noor:

[Vaskez]

16 foo

Its not really about my ranking, more so about Illtalic's. He gave me the name back only last week, so how on earth is he signed in?!

Ain't seen Illy around much, not that that will upset the balance
But the quote explains his recent drastic reduction in talent
I see we're both representin, like ya name, I'm sure it fits
My avy shows how my fist tenses...
...n ya sig tells us in which of ^^those you're a bitch
But ya new style's got EVERYTHING, creativity's hard hitting
Wow@ the multies n I'm impressed by your punches...
...being the only part missing
Sorry, I know ya experimenting n ain't been rehearsin it much
N ya just tryina give new life to text...cos ya verses are fucked
So I'm expected to win, but Cam can surprise us when he chooses
He'll accomplish the upset...
...startin with whinin, then a tantrum when he loses
But shiiit if you get angry you'll be reservin me some hearse space
n sayin "no more Mr. Nice Guy..."
...is redundant cos you were never nice in the first place
But this I can't dispute: you've sometimes been underrated by peers
N ya skill's legendary...
...cos it's been passed down in myths n exaggerated for years
Even THIS battle'll be mentioned in years as one of the best
N the result'll be passed down...6 feet so ya body can rest

[Baron Mynd]

Im sorry, was that verse 21 linjes, or 14? Because your lines are so fucking long, you need an extra one to get to the damn punch! Fuck outta here, faggot -

Lemme find out where this fella lives,
I’ll show him EXACTLY what a felon is ..
.. & beat him til his Body Language speakin more Broken English than his Hungarian relatives!
It must suck living alone, with no life on the tenth floor ..
.. and having your mother turn up on your doorstep - As the Mail Order Bride you`ve sent for!
Plus her back’s hairy as fuck, man! - I heard tons of people ..
.. saw her in public, and thought they’d started filming the American Werewolf In London sequel.
You`ve been jostling her pants,
But Id NEVER put my cock in that skank ..
.. just to go down on her, I’d need Beer Goggles - Flippers - AND an Oxygen Tank!
Plus you swear the breasts are big on that hairy being ..
.. but c’mon dawg, they`re Barely C’s… I mean - We can BARELY SEE ‘em!
Nobody here really believes that you’re touching me ..
.. but after I ate Quo last week, MM figured he could use some company.
My clownage sends the board into fits. Its all in the wit, im whoring you bitch…
.. Vask don’t dress like a baller and shit - He dress like KABBALAH AND SHIT!

Ugh!

[Born To Kill]

Ain't seen Illy around much, not that that will upset the balance
But the quote explains his recent drastic reduction in talent
Nice opener...
I see we're both representin, like ya name, I'm sure it fits
My avy shows how my fist tenses...
...n ya sig tells us in which of ^^those you're a bitch
Real nice...wording though, dude.
But ya new style's got EVERYTHING, creativity's hard hitting
Wow@ the multies n I'm impressed by your punches...
...being the only part missing
Funny...
Sorry, I know ya experimenting n ain't been rehearsin it much
N ya just tryina give new life to text...cos ya verses are fucked
Blah.
So I'm expected to win, but Cam can surprise us when he chooses
He'll accomplish the upset...
...startin with whinin, then a tantrum when he loses
Seen the concept before...aight...
But shiiit if you get angry you'll be reservin me some hearse space
n sayin "no more Mr. Nice Guy..."
...is redundant cos you were never nice in the first place
Eh...
But this I can't dispute: you've sometimes been underrated by peers
N ya skill's legendary...
...cos it's been passed down in myths n exaggerated for years
Eh again...
Even THIS battle'll be mentioned in years as one of the best
N the result'll be passed down...6 feet so ya body can rest
Blah!

Damn, Vas...you just crumbled at the end...the first part was pretty nice.
Then = Brainlock

VS.

Lemme find out where this fella lives,
I’ll show him EXACTLY what a felon is ..
.. & beat him til his Body Language speakin more Broken English than his Hungarian relatives!
And you talk about Vas dragging out a punch??? Eh...aight, ok opener
It must suck living alone, with no life on the tenth floor ..
.. and having your mother turn up on your doorstep - As the Mail Order Bride you`ve sent for!
Again, stretched a bit...but hilarious, this one was! ROTFL!!!
Plus her back’s hairy as fuck, man! - I heard tons of people ..
.. saw her in public, and thought they’d started filming the American Werewolf In London sequel.
There's already been a sequel..."In Paris", but still...pretty nice. Funny.
You`ve been jostling her pants,
But Id NEVER put my cock in that skank ..
.. just to go down on her, I’d need Beer Goggles - Flippers - AND an Oxygen Tank!
Good humor...nice wit.
Plus you swear the breasts are big on that hairy being ..
.. but c’mon dawg, they`re Barely C’s… I mean - We can BARELY SEE ‘em!
Blah!
Nobody here really believes that you’re touching me ..
.. but after I ate Quo last week, MM figured he could use some company.
Blah!
My clownage sends the board into fits. Its all in the wit, im whoring you bitch…
.. Vask don’t dress like a baller and shit - He dress like KABBALAH AND SHIT!
Uh...eh...whatever...

Ya'll each only have 3 quotes I liked...

Almost tied...but that "Mail Order Bride" gave Cam the edge...
So did "Beer Goggles"...I like laughing.

Vote: Cam

[Erupt]

Ain't seen Illy around much, not that that will upset the balance
But the quote explains his recent drastic reduction in talent
I see we're both representin, like ya name, I'm sure it fits
My avy shows how my fist tenses...
...n ya sig tells us in which of ^^those you're a bitch
But ya new style's got EVERYTHING, creativity's hard hitting
Wow@ the multies n I'm impressed by your punches...
...being the only part missing

vs

Lemme find out where this fella lives,
I’ll show him EXACTLY what a felon is ..
.. & beat him til his Body Language speakin more Broken English than his Hungarian relatives!
You`ve been jostling her pants,
But Id NEVER put my cock in that skank ..
.. just to go down on her, I’d need Beer Goggles - Flippers - AND an Oxygen Tank!


I've got Vaskez with a few more quotables, I think if cam could mix in some nastyness into his verse he'd definatly be hard to beat.. coz your wordplay and humour mixed with the nice rhyme schemes is very good.. just when faced with a vicious verse like vaskez it doesnt seem to beat it.. even if it was more talently wrote.. (no offence vaskez)

anyways vote vaskez for a meaner verse

[Vaskez]

no offense taken, thanks for the votes

good battle Cam

1-1

[Meks.]

this was close..

oxygen tank was a dope line..
vas' opener and following bar were nice..

vote cam

[Donald Trump]

Ain't seen Illy around much, not that that will upset the balance
But the quote explains his recent drastic reduction in talent
I see we're both representin, like ya name, I'm sure it fits
My avy shows how my fist tenses...
...n ya sig tells us in which of ^^those you're a bitch
But ya new style's got EVERYTHING, creativity's hard hitting
Wow@ the multies n I'm impressed by your punches...
...being the only part missing
But shiiit if you get angry you'll be reservin me some hearse space
n sayin "no more Mr. Nice Guy..."
...is redundant cos you were never nice in the first place

vs

Lemme find out where this fella lives,
I’ll show him EXACTLY what a felon is ..
.. & beat him til his Body Language speakin more Broken English than his Hungarian relatives!
You`ve been jostling her pants,
But Id NEVER put my cock in that skank ..
.. just to go down on her, I’d need Beer Goggles - Flippers - AND an Oxygen Tank!
My clownage sends the board into fits. Its all in the wit, im whoring you bitch…
.. Vask don’t dress like a baller and shit - He dress like KABBALAH AND SHIT

v-Vaskez

[nolonger]

Vas

I see we're both representin, like ya name, I'm sure it fits
My avy shows how my fist tenses...
...n ya sig tells us in which of ^^those you're a bitch
But ya new style's got EVERYTHING, creativity's hard hitting
Wow@ the multies n I'm impressed by your punches...
...being the only part missing
Even THIS battle'll be mentioned in years as one of the best
N the result'll be passed down...6 feet so ya body can rest

Vs

Cam

You`ve been jostling her pants,
But Id NEVER put my cock in that skank ..
.. just to go down on her, I’d need Beer Goggles - Flippers - AND an Oxygen Tank!
Plus you swear the breasts are big on that hairy being ..
.. but c’mon dawg, they`re Barely C’s… I mean - We can BARELY SEE ‘em!



hmmm vas got this mos def, cam why was over half youres hiot about his mum? they were some funny lines but it got boring, i was like he gotta stop with the mum shit now. Not a bad verse vas mate, you got it.

vote vas.

[Tae Profit]

meanest quotables

You`ve been jostling her pants,
But Id NEVER put my cock in that skank ..
.. just to go down on her, I’d need Beer Goggles - Flippers - AND an Oxygen Tank!

vs.

So I'm expected to win, but Cam can surprise us when he chooses
He'll accomplish the upset...
...startin with whinin, then a tantrum when he loses
But this I can't dispute: you've sometimes been underrated by peers
N ya skill's legendary...
...cos it's been passed down in myths n exaggerated for years


V/Vas...and Cam what r u talkin bout, ya styles seem pretty similar to me

[Mr. Nice Guy]

Ain't seen Illy around much, not that that will upset the balance
But the quote explains his recent drastic reduction in talent
..ILL. good punch..
I see we're both representin, like ya name, I'm sure it fits
My avy shows how my fist tenses...
...n ya sig tells us in which of ^^those you're a bitch
..WTF! dohpe man. i really liked this punch. creative, yo..
But ya new style's got EVERYTHING, creativity's hard hitting
Wow@ the multies n I'm impressed by your punches...
...being the only part missing
..lol. i enjoy'd this cause i remember that verse he did and stuff..
Sorry, I know ya experimenting n ain't been rehearsin it much
N ya just tryina give new life to text...cos ya verses are fucked
..naw. that was lame. filler, shit..
So I'm expected to win, but Cam can surprise us when he chooses
He'll accomplish the upset...
...startin with whinin, then a tantrum when he loses
..lol. not that great cause this has been play'd to death on twizted, but funny..
But shiiit if you get angry you'll be reservin me some hearse space
n sayin "no more Mr. Nice Guy..."
...is redundant cos you were never nice in the first place
..nope. this concept has been used TOO much to me on this name..
But this I can't dispute: you've sometimes been underrated by peers
N ya skill's legendary...
...cos it's been passed down in myths n exaggerated for years
..lmao. this was really witty. dope man..
Even THIS battle'll be mentioned in years as one of the best
N the result'll be passed down...6 feet so ya body can rest
..ok flip on this concept. not bad but not good for a closer..

vs.

Lemme find out where this fella lives,
I’ll show him EXACTLY what a felon is ..
.. & beat him til his Body Language speakin more Broken English than his Hungarian relatives!
..not bad, but i've seen this concept quite a bit from site to site..
It must suck living alone, with no life on the tenth floor ..
.. and having your mother turn up on your doorstep - As the Mail Order Bride you`ve sent for!
..wtf? um, maybe in a street battle but not text. actually, this would be funny in a street battle..
Plus her back’s hairy as fuck, man! - I heard tons of people ..
.. saw her in public, and thought they’d started filming the American Werewolf In London sequel.
..lol. this was funny. dope, man..
You`ve been jostling her pants,
But Id NEVER put my cock in that skank ..
.. just to go down on her, I’d need Beer Goggles - Flippers - AND an Oxygen Tank!
..roflflflflfl. nice man..
Plus you swear the breasts are big on that hairy being ..
.. but c’mon dawg, they`re Barely C’s… I mean - We can BARELY SEE ‘em!
..NO!!! this was ugly..
Nobody here really believes that you’re touching me ..
.. but after I ate Quo last week, MM figured he could use some company.
..naw. sad part was, quo didn't even show(i think)..
My clownage sends the board into fits. Its all in the wit, im whoring you bitch…
.. Vask don’t dress like a baller and shit - He dress like KABBALAH AND SHIT!
..naw. nother maybe in a street battle but i dunno if kats would like it there either..

well, first off, cam how you gonna come in here 'n say Vask's shit was stretched when u had to condense the size of ya verse smaller and also did alot of stretched lines as well. besides that, cam, you came weak for a text battle. some of that shit wasn't even that creative or witty. vask, you came nice as hell though. good thought out punches all the way through and u hit 'em where it hurt. good battle guys.

v/ vaskez

-untold

[chuck taylor.]

Ain't seen Illy around much, not that that will upset the balance
But the quote explains his recent drastic reduction in talent
I see we're both representin, like ya name, I'm sure it fits
My avy shows how my fist tenses...
...n ya sig tells us in which of ^^those you're a bitch

vs

Lemme find out where this fella lives,
I’ll show him EXACTLY what a felon is ..
.. & beat him til his Body Language speakin more Broken English than his Hungarian relatives!
You`ve been jostling her pants,
But Id NEVER put my cock in that skank ..
.. just to go down on her, I’d need Beer Goggles - Flippers - AND an Oxygen Tank!

me that oxygen tank line for me killed it, that was tight as fuck..

vote- cam

[Vaskez]

thanks for feedback

6-2 me