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    S.O.S ( Sick Of Society)

    Why should I become trusting and God-loving
    Social acquisitions positions religions of nothing
    The only person who made me was my mom
    If she weren't horny where would I come/cum from
    I visualize societies historical decision's errors
    A "war on terror" dont make my visions clearer
    As homogenous structures eruptures prejudice
    Crumbles the edges promotes anger's syllabus
    Im an affiliate of truth and spoken word's validity
    But why do people have to struggle politically
    Trash on streets as cities glorified in pamphlets
    Sounds to me the horror of Jews in Auschwitz
    Every city got a troubled area of crime rates
    Leavin people like primates to annihilate
    Ignorant people sit around and dismiss facts
    As failure rises ya prejudice is what attracts

    ......I write an S.O.S in the ground you see
    But what comes to me is that Im Sick Of Society
    ......I write an S.O.S in the ground you see
    But what comes to me is that Im Sick Of Society


    We heard many stories and fables as morals
    Then we grow and come up with stupid quarrels
    Life seems to be a 2 sided coin with no balance
    With love by the drips we pour hatred by gallons
    The lower, middle, and the upper class structure
    One suppresses the other as the last one suffers
    A government been made to destroy the individual
    Whats visible is politicians ignore their principles
    Shame on them for selling out to corrupted officials
    Yet the "good" you say has never even been little
    Its been in milliliters as they just lay in leisure
    Claiming they're bi-partisan and strong leaders
    I don't understand how we fall into a mess
    Success dont come overnight for us to access

    ......I write an S.O.S in the ground you see
    But what comes to me is that Im Sick Of Society
    ......I write an S.O.S in the ground you see
    But what comes to me is that Im Sick Of Society


    Gun shots, distribution of illegal drugs transfer
    The truth hidden when we dont get a full answer
    What disturbs me is people dont care to learn
    Just party, no attention as awareness adjourns
    Thats how their lives get affected subliminally
    Depression sets as the party releases energy
    The path in life has many ways so dont worry
    Don't get stuck in situations or you see the jury
    But the statistics that exist reminisces hell
    When ya got companies' prejudice that sells
    I walk in a bathroom and vomit in the toilet
    Spells out all the hatred,but we cant avoid it

    I'm creepin on the floor like zombies in graves
    I'm pickin cotton like whites did to the slaves
    I'm stripped naked shot and buried by Nazis
    I'm ethnically cleansed by Columbus' armies
    I'm a man living in enemy territory tiredly
    .......I'm a man that is sick of society

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    "I look to a day when people will not be judged by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character."

    - Martin Luther King Jr.


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    Last edited by 2hot2handle; May 8th, 2006 at 12:59 AM

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    I really feel political pieces...i enjoy politics, therefor i like to see how ppl portray happenings in our world. I hate when people do not know what they are talking about, and are just bitching...and you definetly DID NOT do that here, i was feeling your verse from start to finish...also felt the quick chorus's....this flowd amazingly well, and you had wordplay just overloadin the lines, which made me wanna put it on a beat (and i dont even do audio lol)....your lines got me thinkin,and questing my own beliefs on certain things, which i appreciate greatly..i love pieces that can do that....i did a piece similiar to this....however i dont recall reading much of your work..but im glad i hit this up...cuz its probably one of my favorite political pieces ive ever read here in om..not to mention the fact that it was written with e/thing a good piece needs from flow-vocab!

    keep up the great work

    (thank you for hittin up my piece aswell)

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    "I look to a day when people will not be judged by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character."

    - Martin Luther King Jr.


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    nice piece i also like political pieces, wordplay was tight had me thinking alot well i can't touch on anything new that spekz didn't say so yah

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    yeah i was feeling this piece nice way to express
    you feeling nice word play tour flow was on point
    this was enjoyable to read 8/10

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    This was a real nice drop. very political and word'd with great essence and definition. it went str8 to the point and hit hard on TARGET!. i liked your emotion and vocab. your multies was a great asset to your delivery!
    keep it up homes.

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    This Was A Dope Piece, Political Issues Can Be Boring But You Made THis An Interesting Piece. Nice Delivery Of Mulits And Vocab, The Flo Was On Point.
    The Lil Chourus Was Also Dope, Im Gratefull You Didnt Oberload This Piece With Too Much WordPlay As It Tends To Be A Bit Noobish In My Eyes,

    Excellent Read Cuz...9-10

    Keep It Up.

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    yo nice fucking flow yo f;sho..........multies was banging yo.........vocab rolled well....
    emotion roared aloud........i felt the multies could of been continued further still tho coz u had some but they werent chock-a-block as it went on .........yeah was an action packed read . could of had a bit more metaphorical content in my opinion. but all in all a solid rap...


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    thanks guys, uppin again

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    "I look to a day when people will not be judged by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character."

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    "I look to a day when people will not be judged by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character."

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