appreciate it nick.
This was some good shit man..i was feeling it all the way through....complexity and vocab was nice and flow was excellent throughout...topic was intersting..i liked it....very enjoyable to read..rhymes were good...nice multies....and overall this was very good..good job..keep it up..peace~
that was nice piece allah, great flow and the inners were basically topnotch, good take on your topic and the overall structure of the shit was pretty dope - overall dope shit, ending was tight as well... hit up the first in my sig
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that was a pretty good drop... the topic was good, vocab and flow was nice... coulda used a lil work on the structure... multis and rhymes were on point and you explained the story pretty well... although u did put alot of work into this as i can see i did notice u were lacking some imagry and emotion so try to work on that...
-sorry for short feed im in a hurry-
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...36#post4405136Originally Posted by *~Big Nash~*
cry or whoever else dropped links, I'll get at them when I wake up. going to sleep now. good looks though.
UA
good flow and good structure
Wicked Wicked Wicked
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I hit the links up.
what up guys, more feed?
UA
shit this was dope as fuck rhyming couldn't be better concept and topic i loved sad, intense, emotional, deep you really packed a lot in here flow was consistent very very good so was the word play i saw some good vocab in here liked the words you choose in my eyes you kept gettin stronger in this as the verse went on towards the end it came out great stay up lookin foward to hearin more from you
hit up these om's wit some feed
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thats whats up. thanks man. by the way you blood? lol.. I love asking that, dont know why. hahaa.
good looks though pyro
UA
^ Lol at you asking if he was blood. Dont encourage these newer kids, Allah!
This was pretty cool, I preffered your 'We Need To Take Control' or whatever piece more, but this wasnt bad. I think the fact Ive read it at six other sites now maybe slightly dampened the impact for me, but hey - Thats what you get for boarding at so many other sites! Lol. Stick around, and keep dropping here ..
- B.M
WORD P e r f e c t !
RESERVOIR GODS
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Well heres a link as neithr i can find my old oneOriginally Posted by Pakaveli
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=290637
Kiss me through the camera lens.TNL