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Thread: Blood in my eyes( The Emmett Till Murder)

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    Blood in my eyes( The Emmett Till Murder)

    Blood in my eyes(The Emmett Till Murder)


    It was a sunday afternoon,about 2:15
    everything was silent,cool breeze blowin through the trees
    not a cloud in the sky,crystal clear like a diamond ring
    freshly cut grass I could smell,as the birds sing
    I felt like walking,so I told my uncle I'm out to stroll
    Southern State,so my Uncle replied remember the places not to go
    I said ok and proceeded out the front door
    took along journey,not knowing what was in store
    Raised in Chicago,14 years old visiting the south
    where many colored folks brutially murder from speech out the mouth
    as I walked,I found a group of boys hanging out infront a store
    I introduced myself with a handshake,an started talking to the four
    I told them where i was from,even showed them my girlfriend
    they said, "What!" a white girl,thats not true man
    I said yes,so they dared me to talk to the women inside
    picked up some candy an brought it,said bye baby with pride
    later that night,I returned ate supper and went to sleep
    suddenly two men entered the room,kidnapping me
    didn't know what to do, i was scared, so i screamed
    but that was muffled, all i hurd was my heart beat
    words repeated, stupid nigger, stupid nigger
    hittin me in the face, the bumps grew bigger
    suddenly a stop, stranded by a barn
    beaten with blows so powerful, I was weak in the arms
    then a shot in the face by a shotgun, as if the beaten wasn't enough
    they scooped my eye out,tied me up and put me in the back of the truck
    drove to the mississippi river, tosed my mangled body overboard
    there I layed 14 years ol, but in the south just another dead nigger boy



    written by: Quest

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    damn man this was deep, i liked it, there was tons of emotion, alot of raceism which was a downside but all in all i think this peice was one of the better reads in the forum im nominating it for hof thats how much i liked it i never nominate anything so big ups on that keep up the good job man
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    rhymes wer good and were quite deep too. however eventhough the structure is an emulation of ninjah red's flaws of flawlessness there are certain parts that are choppy and this makes the floww a lil off, overall it was quite good.

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    this was a hellish peice, really enjoyed it..

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    thanx for the feedback yall.....uppin

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    let me get some more feedback

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    Aiight, that was some deep shit. Sounds ALOT like my writing style styll. It was very descriptive, and you didn't jump. Overall I'd give it an 9/10. Only reason is that its too typical lol, but keep at it, bring some new shit in.
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    Damn Johhny u did yo thang with this piece. it was real deep. ima give u a 12/10 on this one. the wordplay was real good. ad so was yo vocab. i really liked all of the rap. the one part that stuck out to me was:
    as I walked,I found a group of boys hanging out infront a store
    I introduced myself with a handshake,an started talking to the four
    I told them where i was from,even showed them my girlfriend
    they said, "What!" a white girl,thats not true man

    good job man

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