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    erbody

    CHO:
    Erbody get up...erbody get crunk
    Erbody get up...erbody pop trunk
    erbody feel bass erbody feel sound
    erbody with dey klik and dey hold dey klik down
    Where you at nigga...durty south nigga
    Where you at nigga...durty south nigga
    Where you at nigga...durty south nigga

    So wuz up

    Verse:
    Im in day durty south with my klik holdin it down
    sippin shit, pushin whip, bass bumpin round town
    im just lookin fer a fight reppin tampa all round
    waitin fer a nigga to step up so i can knock dey ass down
    if ya talikn bout plexin youll get knocked da fuck out
    im in One and only and triple "s"* you know we some troops
    so show respect stand strait and give us are salute
    If a nigga disobey,... they end up in ICU
    cant care for them selfs in a coma getin feed through a tub
    cant breath so they got an oxygen machine
    but thats the affects of the auto-matic machine**
    cuz when hot steel hits ya,... ya drop dead stilla den a picha(picture)
    your last stand will be no help no matta whos witcha
    ill leave ya there and drive off, nigga ill letcha rot in the street
    nigga get eat by some birds cuz they starvin fer some meat
    and im starvin fer some bread ill do anything to get it
    erbody know the reap, im not just a bleep on the map nigga I is it***

    *one and only and Triple "s" are the rap groups in in
    ** im talkin bout a machine gun
    *** im refering to myself as the map

    Tell me whatcha think


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    wack
    seriously fuck all these kids with the "vote for me, i'll vote for you bullshit" You love textin, battlin, comin up with the vocab to really bust someone out? why cheat and ride each others nuts?seriously i see these niggas put up HONEST VOTES as part of their rules, then the same dickriders come and vote for em. you suckas aren't foolin anyone.....

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    tks fer that feed nigga uppin lets get some feed tks

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    lol... yur 20? shit...
    First... get a better topic than some gay fucking gangster deal. Second, work on imagery, rhyme scheme, wit, wordplay...EVERYTHING.... honestly, id give up if I were you but w/e...

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    ^^^don't give up --just elevate ur topic choice like he said
    everybodys done these kinda pieces so we all look 4 whats original
    i liked ur hook the best but ur overall flo wasn't bad neither so keep workin @ it

    "and im starvin fer some bread ill do anything to get it
    erbody know the reap, im not just a bleep on the map nigga I is it***"

    ^^^i'm not sure bout how u ended dis tho...i think u coulda done somethin better but just try again--mayb try 2 build more of an image next time...
    Newayz, aiight drop overall but a lil more originality wouldn't kill ya
    keep postin

    chk my OM if u gtz the chance tho, Gracias!
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    4-sho Southside ya shit was nice keep it up

    battle needs votes:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=271183
    Votes needed

    Me Vs. K-Tip

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    I dont like the topic, dont like the rhymes and text sucks.
    And you need train more on the vocals, and you have no imagery at all
    this is crap, trash going quick, leave off the open mic.

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    iight keep feedin

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    [QUOTE=Mariposa Latina]^^^don't give up --just elevate ur topic choice like he said
    everybodys done these kinda pieces so we all look 4 whats original
    i liked ur hook the best but ur overall flo wasn't bad neither so keep workin @ it

    "and im starvin fer some bread ill do anything to get it
    erbody know the reap, im not just a bleep on the map nigga I is it***"

    ^^^i'm not sure bout how u ended dis tho...i think u coulda done somethin better but just try again--mayb try 2 build more of an image next time...
    Newayz, aiight drop overall but a lil more originality wouldn't kill ya
    keep postin


    i agree wit mami right here.. nahmean.. but its up 2 u weather u take tha advice or not.. stil hope 2 read suttin more orignal from u nex tym aiite..1
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    uppin fer feed

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    Same as I always saw, man, come on now... Please try come original somewhere, go find a decent topic and run with that, good luck

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    iight dawg read some of my other ones and see how they are

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    uppin for some feed back

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    this wasn't all that good, honestly. you had alright flow but you need serious work on concepts and shit. add metaphores and all that

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