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    trying to breakthrough

    im sick of this bull man, we cant break through
    all becasue our accent is fuckin different to you,
    even if we got talent, we can get deals,
    so we resort to sellin pills, and stealing the wheelz,
    but it dont matta, cos you already made up your mind,
    but im still on the grind, hopin one of these days youll find,
    that we got talent and were british at the same time,
    and we can be good, even though we dont rap about nines,
    but fuck it man, i dont need your fuckin approval,
    and im still gunna try and elevate the brits as usual,

    im from the uk man, yes its true
    and you yanks dont think we can be betta than you,
    but whatever you know, think what you like,
    cos soon well be sendin you off, on ya bike (bye bye)

    well get through eventually, and i cant fuckin wait,
    for us to bust through the international gate,
    but until then ill spit and be appreciated in the UK,
    and know that my homies love me, n that shit aint fake

    no hate on the US, just how i feel, prolly get alota shit for this but tell me what you think thanks
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    Nice to see some other UK heads doing this. Cant say I agree with the topic choice, cos nuff UK heads are on this board and the yanks still show respect where its due. As for ther verse, I enjoyed the read - it has more of a grime type flow to it as i read it, but not bad by any means.

    Keep it up bruh.

    Reply to my latest drop if you get a chance.

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    thanks m8, uppin for feedback
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    drop gd
    flow was kk
    structure kk
    vocab improvin
    keep@it

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    well this was a pretty good drop man....topic was cool....rhymes were good...
    flow was smooth all the way...nice and even strucutre too........
    vocab needs sum elevation same with complexity.............
    overall this wasnt bad it was pretty good...keep elevating
    you have a lot of potential....peace---

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    thanks for the comments, uppin for more feed
    dont pull no punches, if i sucked i wanna know so i can improve :d thanks
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    uppin 4 more feed
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    Topic was new. You stayed true to it and didnt have to rap about killin somethin to make it hot. It was definetly a hot drop, stay up man.

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    Aight topic wasn't of my liking, but flow was aight, ya really have ta up the use of rhymes and make it more advance, some parts were meh, but on the whole tis ok.......Am from Uk too and i get nough respect...Respect is earned here on RB not given cause you from here or there......aight stay up
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    this was aight. don't really agree on the topic neither. it had some good flows. an it rymed fairly well. but you need to make your verses longer. an as for callin us yanks thats not gonna get you no respect. but i understand how you feel. so i'm not gonna bite your ass on that. but just keep at it an keep elevating dawg. peace out

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    topic bit used
    flow was alrite
    rhymin ws gd
    structure ws ok
    alrite drop
    elevate

    keep tryin

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    thanks for feed so far, uppin for more
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