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Thread: Racism

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    Racism

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    Now listen up, the topic here is powerful enough
    to see right through you, exposing every coward and his bluffs
    im devouring you punks, a strong issue is at hand
    here's a leson, let me stress to you the history of man
    back to indians and land, new explorers, to slaves
    the order became a blemish to the oracles brain
    a horror that slained many cause of form and display
    distortion was framed, and tainted what would corner our fate
    a portrait remains this aura of racism is strong
    no escape, and basically all this hates pissing me off
    OK, this is just wrong, NO WAY, can we be all
    the same color, but blood'll still stay red in us dog
    behave, witness the spawn - today you'll see the form switched
    im sorry you've been warned, look!..."your baby was born mixed"
    and from slavery's warned grips, the hatred supports this
    see a blatant rapport sent us through racism's war ships
    immitations of course simply are roaming the earth
    loathing a birth, harrassing the youth, if only you heard
    the blasphemous use, of brutal and inappropriate slurs
    the facts and the truth, would prove this isn't a hoax but a curse
    approaching its worse cause since the discrimination evolved
    judgement has been determined by intergration of flaws
    skin pigmintation has paused the informational clause
    with sins invading the laws and disobeying them all
    no indication of god, these veiws have been man made
    and wounds from our black slaves cant recoup with a band-aid
    it's stupid to chance fate, because you wanna stand straight
    with a group who demands hate due to hues of a mans face
    confused, i just cant wait for that Spark Thats Soon to Bring Hope
    and finish what was started back when Martin Luther King Spoke
    put and end to the pestilence let Hearts Just Sooth the Sting so
    we can all be known as equals as the Martyrs Music Brings Home
    the Harp and Flute from Sweet Low, sweet chariot'll play
    then the carelessness'll fade and all prosperity remains
    til the therapy for hate isn't a rarity, and race
    inside the peoples minds is merely just a parady replaced
    by the clarity and grace of he who helps us fix mistakes
    through events to quickly place new beginnings to our fate
    but forgive me when i say, you're full of shit if you relate
    cause reality's the bitch that comes and visits us each day
    when we get up, when we lay, when the hard times begin
    we can say we stay together but apartheid it lives
    it's been archived by skin color marked by the men
    working full time to fix what takes part time to end
    im a smart guy within sent to give to you the knowledge
    that racism is everywhere cause scrutiny was promised
    from you parents peer pressure, to your middle school then college
    while your walking through an office, malls, the movies, lets be honest
    your community see all this can be found in rooms and closets
    where the pool of vomit leaks from the mind of a humans conscience
    force fed this food of thought its - displayed by the rudest comments
    and the crystal ball's a chessboard supporting the future on it
    provocative slue of nonsense that's forced, by an appointment
    to not end it but extend it and hoard, prior employment
    it's like a contradiction saves the report, can i avoid it
    of course not...cause even the Source, tried to exploit it

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    'sup Percept?

    This was a nice verse, man, long but it had to be because as I read you had a lot to say. From what I read I heard more of a poetic rant than anything, the way some of the lines where forced to follow from the former, and some of the ways you expressed stuff, it was more like you were angry but poetic at the same time, dancing with the subject if you could call it that. You hit the nail on the head in a few bars though, some really nice lines in there that expressed how you felt perfectly and screamed what you were trying to get across. Some good mulit's, over-par wordplay and expression, a good rhyme scheme and a great vocabulary.

    A solid piece man, nice work .

    William Nolan

    I need some respectable heads to leave me some feed, would you?

    Thanks.

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    damn at you getting nom'ed for every single thing you drop. topical god bastard. look out for a collab PM soon
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    yo great imagery an good topic you had a pretty good voacab in this one so just keep at it an keep doin ya thang

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    upping this again...

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    I Liked It Fallowed A Lil Classic Rass Kass But Nice .started Off Simple Enough To Attract Anyone But As It Grew The Idea Expanded Well Upping This For You
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    This was dope as hell. Probably the dopest shit I've read in the OM section since forever. I liked the flow throughout the entire piece and the message was very solid. You got your point across completely and I agree with everything you said.

    behave, witness the spawn - today you'll see the form switched
    im sorry you've been warned, look!..."your baby was born mixed"
    and from slavery's warned grips, the hatred supports this
    see a blatant rapport sent us through racism's war ships
    immitations of course simply are roaming the earth
    loathing a birth, harrassing the youth, if only you heard
    the blasphemous use, of brutal and inappropriate slurs
    the facts and the truth, would prove this isn't a hoax but a curse
    approaching its worse cause since the discrimination evolved
    judgement has been determined by intergration of flaws
    skin pigmintation has paused the informational clause
    with sins invading the laws and disobeying them all
    no indication of god, these veiws have been man made
    and wounds from our black slaves cant recoup with a band-aid

    ^Crazy. Good shit.
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