Gangsta Rhymes / Shanks N" NiNeS

[Sea iN tHe sKy]

Yall know what it is, FlatLinerZ nigga, yea, yea!

nigga we stay wit the nines, if you shit talk then you're dead
we murda your rhymes,then flatten the lines on yo hospital bed
homie i see you on yo corner,actin tough holdin your glock
damn, had to put yo ass out, just for you patrolin yo block
quit lieing nigga, you know you got shot, i even had it confirmed
mad cause you learned about shells, and how bad they burn
yea but homie, ive had my turn, ive been dropped a few times,
socked in the eye, kicked on the ground,even shot by a nine,
when you're marked in the hood, life's only a matter of time
you get shot in your blood, then straight shatter yo mind
you bitch niggas love to talk, but nigga dont start testin
cuz then you be traced in chalk, and police askin questions
how you wana go out? you babbelin, nigga what you talkin about?
i hear you wana be like 50, ok, i can have you shot in the mouth
im serious, this niggas' ALWAYS, yappin how he's gonna blow soon
if you so hot....tell me why the fuck does nobody knows you?

hahha

[Sea iN tHe sKy]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...30#post3767330
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=262979

[Fresh101]

cold shit

[Issue]

What the fuck is with this bullshit feed?

Anyways, this wasn't very original, it was a completly played out topic, you had some decent wordplay and vocab, man, go from there, just edge yourself away from this BS... If it happens to you, don't act like you think you're the only one, hundreds of posterson this site will post a copy of this in the next month, the only way to get noticed here is by coming original, don't get lost in the pile.

- Peace.

[_Yadza_]

dont flow...

[Issue]

Fuck off with this bullshit feed.

[EyeBite]

this was alright..topic wasnt really interesting and i wasnt feelin it too much man.......the strucutre was good nice and even....flow was aiight....could be better...this was pretty short but w.e........um..rhymes were aiight..pretty descent a lil bit too simple but still aiight..vocab was very simple.....mostly you should work on better topics and complecity overall...keep elevating....peace

[Phenom_354]

pretty good keep elevatin...

[Issue]

William Nolan

[Mr.E]

this was on a level where when you are about 15 tring to be hard you need to step up on your wordplay and your vocab and maybe your gangta talk will sound better if you going to be a abc rapper take 50 cent style i don't like the man but he does have a style that people like.

[big j da fat boy]

yo i thought it was aight. the topic is a lil played out but you did ya thang. so im not gonna hate. but that dude that said it didnt flow he's outta his mind. i thought it flowed pretty damn good. but you did ya thang an i aint mad at you so keep at it dawg

[Sea iN tHe sKy]

alright alright uppin

[Mike Murda]

Damn nigga that was tight pretty cold, short, to the point, I like it, specially the hospital bed one, good shit, wanna collab anytime pm me.