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Thread: Chain Letter (ft. Tim, Deviate and Percept)

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    Chain Letter (ft. Tim, Deviate and Percept)

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=262498

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=262671




    Chain Letter


    Johnny 6-feet

    Read the chain letter, all else is tattered theories
    In 2 bars a brain splatters, shattered so clearly
    When the people come together for sequels, none is better
    As we trend set you fella's for brain storming weather
    Born professors of the art, code hackers and freed minds
    Teaching lessons for the smart, bold actors and street mimes
    And each time a piece is dropped it becomes a prophesy
    Which evolves to a philosophy when told properly
    I'm possibly a mic messiah with the power to light the fires
    The type thats higher, with walk on water lyrics versus you biting liars
    So you can shower me with compliments or think i'm deranged
    It's Johnny 6-feet signing off, the first link of the chain

    Percept

    Visualising attacks, before the enemy realises its a battle
    A verbal stampede, treadin on ignorance with the effects of cattle
    Everlasting endurance, an ill performance, qualities I possess
    Psychiatric skills, lyrical diction from your thoughts I suppress
    Philosophical phrases, evasive, persuasive and consistently hypersonic
    Contradictory emotions, externally tranquil, yet internally demonic
    Superior compositions, forcing MC's into deep mental submission
    Distinct variations, contrasting in styles like juxtapositions
    Multidimensional frames, overturning any legislative campaign
    Anarchical malpractice, resulting in the demise of a domain
    Revolutionary spits, deep like oceanic waters based on a real theme
    Conquering masses, omnipresent visions of mortal street dreams

    Deviate

    Fumes emit in effervescent plumes of unadulterated doom,
    Dilluted with bubbles of sick festering in the corner of our hideout room.
    Shouts echo eclipsing the moon, dampening its bright shine,
    Eerie glances and unseen travellers manipulate through imparted rhyme.
    Yet, intelligence is flawed, in a state like Orwell's nineteen-eighty-four,
    This is a political establishment manifested from stories of folk-lore.
    Aware of our looming coup, our revolution, our response to their violence,
    Thousands of men were shot dead in attempts to reduce us into silence.
    Sustained plans emit grams of pure sand barraging revolutionary moves,
    Comrades awaiting the command to commence, splinter from their grooves.
    An omnipresent, all seeing eye, conquering the masses is disgusting,
    Standing at the base of the capitol building with laser sights twitching.
    Reading demands of the masses with tears in my eye, bullets cut a swerve,
    Tearing air in puncturing, freezing time as one balances on a nerve.

    Tim
    for they couldn't see, tripped up, and suddenly dumbfounded
    so surrounded the intellect, or the lack there of, was compounded
    a stepping stone away from the perilous last glance
    an intrepid endeavor, tip toes, a meticulous dance
    an empowerment bestowed on to the shoulders of some
    a picturesque scene, whose peoples words weighed a ton
    an over anxious, out spoken group that neither fades or withers
    dressed in black, the courts feared them, sending spine tingling shivers
    blown up out of proportion, distortion reaching its pinnacle
    quite despicable, now blind, momentless, and overly cynical
    the endorphin releasing them layed there forever to clad there earth
    were passes at freedom, and symbolic of all they were worth
    Last edited by Johnny 6-feet; January 6th, 2006 at 12:17 PM

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    this was a very very very good piece i like how yall did a chain letter as your OM, all of it had flow but the only thing yall need to fix is Deviate's line structure it was to out of place which coulda made the flow better. it was very creative....the imagery was very good and i liked all of yall parts of the chain letter. each of u use very creative words and put good thought into what u wrote

    10/10

    hope to see another one

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    Well this was a Very nice Text piece
    Percept came hard his wordplay was on point
    i enjoyed reading his verse
    With some other the other verses its seemed like
    the guys were just ryming with big words thats didnt
    make sense so work on that
    i was nt feeling johnny 's verse much either {what is a street mime}
    it just seemed FORCED Work on Making Sense
    holla

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    Anyway nice work lads... I must admit mine wasn't the best i've ever done by a long shot, but the rest of you wrote well.
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    to the haters id be mad too if i wasnt smart enough to understand the piece the true writers on the board ill get it

    good job to the rest good piece

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    well if you are refering to me
    it doesnt make the piece hot just because
    you using big words...you guys were defenitly forcing it
    and it seemed more like a poem REAL RAPPERS
    make it so that people can understand
    plus deviate and tim yall both had the weakest verses by the way.................
    ELevate

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    okay lets go topical battle ill go set it up if you want and edit this out

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    I have to say this was a spectacular peice......the all around great rhymes and excellent flow and strucutere made it very enjoyable to read.......vocab was very good from all of you....i liked the topic..it was different and a bit interesting to me...overall this was very dope peice.....keep it up all of you........peace..

    and i'd appreciate if you peeped one of latest drops that i will up in about 2 minutes
    thanks

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    word everyone was an opinion ~Skribble~ thanks for the crit ill peep your verse in a few and IM ill PM you the battle

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    Born professors of the art, code hackers and freed minds
    Teaching lessons for the smart, bold actors and street mimes
    And each time a piece is dropped it becomes a prophesy
    Which evolves to a philosophy when told properly



    Visualising attacks, before the enemy realises its a battle
    A verbal stampede, treadin on ignorance with the effects of cattle
    Everlasting endurance, an ill performance, qualities I possess
    Psychiatric skills, lyrical diction from your thoughts I suppress



    Aware of our looming coup, our revolution, our response to their violence,
    Thousands of men were shot dead in attempts to reduce us into silence.
    Sustained plans emit grams of pure sand barraging revolutionary moves,
    Comrades awaiting the command to commence, splinter from their grooves.



    an over anxious, out spoken group that neither fades or withers
    dressed in black, the courts feared them, sending spine tingling shivers
    blown up out of proportion, distortion reaching its pinnacle
    quite despicable, now blind, momentless, and overly cynical



    Nice.

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    this was hot, liked everything in this 1, & the way each 1 of yall explained yaself in ur verses, like everything good piece, the verse was hot & each & every1 of yall have atleast to 2 OM HOF so i expected reall good soft & was not disappointied good piece again

    Nice
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