We Runnin Things - Instigator and Tru Menace

[<Supreme>]

[Tru Menace]
yo were runnin things all over these boards,
and we'll never stop to many hot lyrics stored,
all over the RAPBATTLES were adored,
by our cre hostile minds,
what mine is theres and whats theres is mine,
yea inst1gator never used to battle but he startin to shyn,
yea im not a feather im a light i'll never bite, i'll always stand and fight,
we runnin things from our mighty might,
i wouldnt be suprised if the age of 15 im wearin black and whiter strips
i got more b1tches then fucking pimp,
1 night with me and the next they walk home with a limp,
tru-menace is on the lose up goes the crime rate,
droppin punchlines line there bomb goin towards the head of state,
but before i do best smoke some more weed so i can see straight,
were lyricly possesd and we send you chills,
we got more lyrics then printed dollar bills,
and flow that makes the whole world stand still,
so next time you spit don't leave a sorry note leave a WILL..........

[Instigator]
Sometimes I wonder, why did I get out of bed
It’s because of the way thoughts run through my head
So fast, like the way we runnin things in HipHop
The way we drop rhymes like we takin sick shots
To make it run smoother like the way that I flowed
In all my freestyles that are better than raps you wrote
Cos I don’t have to sit with a pen and notepad all day
To make some shit stuff like ‘Hey men, yall gay’
I develop it till its good, and so does Tru Menace
Till they don’t make sense like a Flu Dentist
So I’m sittin here with a can of carling
Talkin about how I ran through Harlem
Even though it’s the first time I mentioned it
Cos we runnin things without any censorship
We still on top like a flag on a rock
At the top of Everest, but like a flock
Of sheep, in the Welsh hills and valleys
Cos we poppin pills and takin valiums
To calm our asses when we runnin things to well
So people complainin like ‘Who the Hell?’
We Runnin Things

[<Supreme>]

less 20 mins wrk alltogether by me and Tru Menace
links r in my sig

[Solido]

both verses have flowed realli well and both of ya have spend time on producing good drop. the rhymth works in both very well with not much 2 call between the both of verses on which 1 was da best in rhymth. i realli gd drop both of ya keep it up and im lookin forward 2 more class drops from u guys

[bennett]

yo poll it ya'll..................................

[DevilOG]

Want really feeling this peace either it was decent b ut i think you guys neeed to elevate on flow and multies structure was wack and topic was frresh but you guys can do better

[<Supreme>]

uppin

[bennett]

uppin leave the shit on tha poll aswell man......................

[<Supreme>]

uppin

[[S]uB-[L]yrikaL]

i think this needs some work.. it aint bad but it aint good...the name of ya title is straight overall with some work i think it could be good....
Get At Me...

[<Supreme>]

thnx uppin

[<Supreme>]

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin g
leave links and i;ll comment on ure drops/battles

please leave feed, even tho it wasnt our best piece

[The Vortex]

i think the multies could be more adventurous from both.. then i prolly say that to eryone cuz i like multies yeah...
1st verse seemed to lack in consistancy as far as flow and structure is concerned.. and could also be worded a lot better.. plus some lines were undeveloped and delivered rather horrible...no h8 just str8

2nd verse was better witht the flow and structure.. did have sum ok humour and flow.. rhymes was ok coulda been more artistic i guess.. did have a feww fun type punches which gave it a lift.. but flow thinned out t'ward the ened a lil....somme lines had potential but were a lil undeveloped as complete bars...

all in all needed some stronger concepts and emotion poured into the verse yeah... soo i say needs sum work.. yeah!

pz


check out my last OM yeah..if u aint already

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=259790

pz

[<Supreme>]

thnx man
uppin
word i already commented

[bennett]

uppin............................................. ....