LLL Jr. Week 3
yup 3rd week of season
last weeks no shows are gone
2 more weeks and belts will be introduced
boot matches also as the league is too big currently
As for this week same rules as previous weeks
Check by wednesday drop by friday
no fucking around
Good Luck
Checkin' in, 12 lines is good
ahhh..... yea 12 lines is good... good luck......
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the last 3 lines is meant to count as 2
yea my name is andres, but i aint no latino, to tell you the truth
if i was lying, i guess thats the only way,.. i'd get Hurtz by the Trus
so u wanna be king of the rap world?..hahaha.. well, good luck trying
cuz if i said you couldn't be king, i'd be like simba, except i aint lion
ill slow down my offensive lines, so to you, it wont be very confusing
they say great D wins championships, so then why are your Ravens losing?
man i have a real appetite for women, so dats why last nite i was wit ur girl
they say u are wut u eat, so i guess this guy's the first cock in the world
u really need to up ur talent, go ask a legend if they could help you
forget it, u'd have to suck dicks cuz thats the only AID they'll give you
to you, i know i dont even pose a threat at all, but let me really start rappin
yea i know, the chances of me winnin are like Jay and Nas endin beef,....
.................................................. but wait, didn't that really happen?
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I heard ya got riches n' bitches n' that ya can blast geeksOriginally Posted by Record
I guess that means your the man...
... who won WORST battle of last week
I read that verse, damn, watch me punch where it hurts
NASA found a new fucking planet with all the space in that verse
Ya verse ain't hittin' the hardest n' this fag ain't the smartest
Ya shit makes such little sense, I mistook you for an artist
So who's wackest of the league? When it comes to crunch time
It's not untold, it's been WELL SAID you belong in front lines
Fuckin' punk, I hate newbs, think ya good? you ain't dude
I'd bring an A game, but then I'd drop wack n' played too
Takin' the league by a storm, watch as I'm spinin' through
But gimme a Seck, cuz he's almost as easy of a win as you
I heard ya got riches n' bitches n' that ya can blast geeks
I guess that means your the man...
... who won WORST battle of last week
nice^
I read that verse, damn, watch me punch where it hurts
NASA found a new fucking planet with all the space in that verse
^dope
Ya verse ain't hittin' the hardest n' this fag ain't the smartest
Ya shit makes such little sense, I mistook you for an artist
kinda played but i still liked it
So who's wackest of the league? When it comes to crunch time
It's not untold, it's been WELL SAID you belong in front lines
dope
Fuckin' punk, I hate newbs, think ya good? you ain't dude
I'd bring an A game, but then I'd drop wack n' played too
not goin comment cuz i did'nt really get it
Takin' the league by a storm, watch as I'm spinin' through
But gimme a Seck, cuz he's almost as easy of a win as you
lol. dope
vs
yea my name is andres, but i aint no latino, to tell you the truth
if i was lying, i guess thats the only way,.. i'd get Hurtz by the Trus
wack
so u wanna be king of the rap world?..hahaha.. well, good luck trying
cuz if i said you couldn't be king, i'd be like simba, except i aint lion
wack
ill slow down my offensive lines, so to you, it wont be very confusing
they say great D wins championships, so then why are your Ravens losing?
meh,wats dat got 2 do wit anything
man i have a real appetite for women, so dats why last nite i was wit ur girl
they say u are wut u eat, so i guess this guy's the first cock in the world
wack
u really need to up ur talent, go ask a legend if they could help you
forget it, u'd have to suck dicks cuz thats the only AID they'll give you
good
to you, i know i dont even pose a threat at all, but let me really start rappin
yea i know, the chances of me winnin are like Jay and Nas endin beef,....
.................................................. but wait, didn't that really happen?
nah
datrus hurtz won dis hands dowwn he aint even drop hard cuz he did'nt need 2 cuz andres just came wack and his punches were stretched and they were completely wack
v/datrushurtz
drop a honest vote on mine please
Last edited by Barburyin; December 9th, 2005 at 10:33 PM
yea my name is andres, but i aint no latino, to tell you the truth
if i was lying, i guess thats the only way,.. i'd get Hurtz by the Trus
^^he's been around since 04, dont ya think Trus and Hurtz punches are played. Ah well, nice try
so u wanna be king of the rap world?..hahaha.. well, good luck trying
cuz if i said you couldn't be king, i'd be like simba, except i aint lion
^^heh, actually this isn't too bad
ill slow down my offensive lines, so to you, it wont be very confusing
they say great D wins championships, so then why are your Ravens losing?
^^eh
man i have a real appetite for women, so dats why last nite i was wit ur girl
they say u are wut u eat, so i guess this guy's the first cock in the world
^^very played
u really need to up ur talent, go ask a legend if they could help you
forget it, u'd have to suck dicks cuz thats the only AID they'll give you
^^err, no
to you, i know i dont even pose a threat at all, but let me really start rappin
yea i know, the chances of me winnin are like Jay and Nas endin beef,....
.................................................. but wait, didn't that really happen?
^^tried to be clever, but was just way too stretched and badly worded
so you had 1 good line
vs.
I heard ya got riches n' bitches n' that ya can blast geeks
I guess that means your the man...
... who won WORST battle of last week
^^ok
I read that verse, damn, watch me punch where it hurts
NASA found a new fucking planet with all the space in that verse
^^heh, corny, but ok
Ya verse ain't hittin' the hardest n' this fag ain't the smartest
Ya shit makes such little sense, I mistook you for an artist
^^meh, ok
So who's wackest of the league? When it comes to crunch time
It's not untold, it's been WELL SAID you belong in front lines
^^heh, not too bad
Fuckin' punk, I hate newbs, think ya good? you ain't dude
I'd bring an A game, but then I'd drop wack n' played too
^^hehe, I liked this
Takin' the league by a storm, watch as I'm spinin' through
But gimme a Seck, cuz he's almost as easy of a win as you
^^heh ok
v/Trus
hahaha.... nice drop trus....
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I heard ya got riches n' bitches n' that ya can blast geeks
I guess that means your the man...
... who won WORST battle of last week
I read that verse, damn, watch me punch where it hurts
NASA found a new fucking planet with all the space in that verse
Game over.
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yea my name is andres, but i aint no latino, to tell you the truth
if i was lying, i guess thats the only way,.. i'd get Hurtz by the Trus
ok attempt at the personal, but its kinda obvious hes heard this so many times.
so u wanna be king of the rap world?..hahaha.. well, good luck trying
cuz if i said you couldn't be king, i'd be like simba, except i aint lion
this was better, but ive seen this wordplay alot maybe why i only thought ok, but betta
ill slow down my offensive lines, so to you, it wont be very confusing
they say great D wins championships, so then why are your Ravens losing?
no hard punch
man i have a real appetite for women, so dats why last nite i was wit ur girl
they say u are wut u eat, so i guess this guy's the first cock in the world
played, alot, ive read this concept so many times l8ly
u really need to up ur talent, go ask a legend if they could help you
forget it, u'd have to suck dicks cuz thats the only AID they'll give you
ive seen this alot too, but without any hate u tried to change it and made it less effective
to you, i know i dont even pose a threat at all, but let me really start rappin
yea i know, the chances of me winnin are like Jay and Nas endin beef,....
.................................................. but wait, didn't that really happen?
this was aight, coulda been better if it wasnt stretched but ok closer
vs
I heard ya got riches n' bitches n' that ya can blast geeks
I guess that means your the man...
... who won WORST battle of last week
aight opener, not gr8 but ok
I read that verse, damn, watch me punch where it hurts
NASA found a new fucking planet with all the space in that verse
lol i liked it, good
Ya verse ain't hittin' the hardest n' this fag ain't the smartest
Ya shit makes such little sense, I mistook you for an artist
not feelin this
So who's wackest of the league? When it comes to crunch time
It's not untold, it's been WELL SAID you belong in front lines
ok, not hitting rlly hard tho, kinda changed a played concept
Fuckin' punk, I hate newbs, think ya good? you ain't dude
I'd bring an A game, but then I'd drop wack n' played too
this was aight, not heard this b4, ok
Takin' the league by a storm, watch as I'm spinin' through
But gimme a Seck, cuz he's almost as easy of a win as you
aight closer
Quite obvious from the breakdown Trus got this one by about 2 bars 2 me with wittier and harder punches. I liked the Nasa line, made me laugh.
Andres, alot of ur punches were rlly played, when ur writing ur verse, ask yaself if uve heard a similar punch before, because it just looks bad. Your closer coulda been ok, if it wasnt so stretched, but you still wouldnt of won the battle.
No hate.
V/ trus for harder punches and a more humorous verse and coming less played.
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I read that verse, damn, watch me punch where it hurts
NASA found a new fucking planet with all the space in that verse
So who's wackest of the league? When it comes to crunch time
It's not untold, it's been WELL SAID you belong in front lines
Fuckin' punk, I hate newbs, think ya good? you ain't dude
I'd bring an A game, but then I'd drop wack n' played too
vs.
to you, i know i dont even pose a threat at all, but let me really start rappin
yea i know, the chances of me winnin are like Jay and Nas endin beef,....
.................................................. but wait, didn't that really happen?
even that was just...meh.^
Andres, you came kinda played in about every bar. Your closer the only thing "original" i saw from you. DaTrus, you posted a stabl verse....nothing special but enough to do more then just win. You stayed consistent.
Vote.DaTrus
thanks for the feed.... looks like u gots an easy win Trus... hahaha
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I'd bring an A game, but then I'd drop wack n' played too
Takin' the league by a storm, watch as I'm spinin' through
Rofl^ Now I know you said to break it down, but I think we can make an exception in this matchup.
V. D
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you guys can really write!
v/trus. wow, now im really looking forward to battling u.
will explain why in mag. oh n andres two thumbs up for taking my advice. ur getting better.
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