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Lol - y'all obviously lookin for more feed :smile:
I liked the whole concept man, you flowed with emotion rather than just putting words on a page, i liked the flow of the "Moving on" especially, and the hurricane katrina verse was dope. Keep doing ya thing - in the meantime, feedback me -
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=253670
-KriminaL-
word... uppin again
It was well planned. Your vocab was ok and went well with the piece. I saw some forced rhymes but it looked decent. The piece needs better structure. The topic is played out though and I agree with what you say. Fuck Bush, anyways this piece was emotional and had imagery. Nice drop, and focus on vocabm flow, and structure.
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View this from last year^
Thanks for the feed. Rise again.
First bump in AGES!
Maybe some new people'll leave some feed.
no, probaly not lol
good topic, nice vocab, had loads of lines i liked, had a good topic that got me reading, then the concept kept me reading, had a very good flow that i felt, i was impressed, ~Dope~
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