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Thread: Def Dreams - Tuckzz and Mc Mystique

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    Def Dreams - Tuckzz and Mc Mystique

    Mc Mystique
    Its that sorrow for lyrics, The Respect And love.
    The imagery of mindless thoughts put into words ( Dreams )
    Its that Inc. Doin respectable things ( We praise the lord Above )


    Tuckzz

    Imagination at its best, making simple words into scripture
    painting images in your mind, pictures, respected literature
    made from put together words, expressing our inner feelings
    through storys that are appealing..... to your emotions
    we're rebels without a motive, like rivers we're perpetually flowin
    its the Inc. swiftly and quickly makin masterpieces in a blink
    like the lost pieces of a chain, we are the missing links
    diamonds in the rough, patiently waiting to be discovered
    legends in the making who are undiscovered, hip hop lovers
    its the love for the music that keeps us with that paper and pen
    writting down in rhymes the thoughts that are moving through our heads
    the inc. till death, surely but slowly we'll make our way to the top
    no desire to stop, we will keep pumpin imperial material till we drop
    we have the skills, deep inside we have infinite potential to succeed
    its def dreams on the scene with the key to unleash
    .. something that the world has never yet had the pleasure to see

    Mc Mystique

    We Got that respectable flow, Its The boys you know, We got that lyrical life,
    The Inc. got that gift, (The real Insight), The dreams the reason i picked up a mic,
    Its something you were born to be you can't be taught, Preach it yourself,
    We let the drugs slide, Shoot base in studios, we getting High off Wealth,
    The poetic propaganda, Continuously writing, Next to bars we writing with stanzas,
    Topical justice, Unintentional its hard to bust us, We got the bag of gifts like santa,
    We cant hear anybody we Def, D-R-E-A To the M We that Internal Inc. ( Ink )
    Analyzing data an changing the way of hip-hop, an how people think
    We catching contacts in the industry, Tryna produce tracks to give you a buzz,
    Praying to god just to get the chance, We worship these grounds like the lord above
    We striving to make it, When we do its your failed dream you'll remember us by
    Why lie, It's a syndrome were stuck with for the rest of our life, doin ne thing to get by
    Unknown by the minute, Our Intentions are rising to get to the top of Hip-Hop,
    Yeah,That's where we all wanna be aint it? Just set ya mind to it untill the day you drop,
    It's our life we write, The drive to make it, The pain we facing with the words we Jottin,
    Look back at it now,We saw all the bad go good an those who have droped will not b forgotten



    -Def Dreams Inc.

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    uppin for feed

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    uppin.

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    Shit was dope- complexity was nice flow was nice and tha wordplay was nice overall shit was real dope to me hope to see this in December HOF-

    Hit my Newest Om: Free at will

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    Thanks For the feed...

    Bump

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    yes.. thanks.. uppin.

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    Shit was ok- complexity was nice flow was nice and tha wordplay was nice overall shit was ok to me..

    Agreed ^, but 1 more thing to add. It wasnt that consistent. Keep making more OM's together and see what you come up with...pz.

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    Nice and complex vocabulary. I'm not certain about the flow, because some lines are shorter than others, despite their appearance. Topic-wise, I'm not too keen, this is a simple case of "look at us, respect us" piece. One that has been done over and over.

    Your vocab definitely sets you apart from others, but without that, I wouldn't think this piece would be so appealing. Because of it's topic, there is little or no emotion involved, it'd be nice to see some, seeing as you claim you rap to people's emotional side.






    Can I make a side note and ask for feed on my piece?

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    its a crew song. Def Dreams Inc.

    thanks for the feed.

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    I know, no hate on that idea, I'm just saying, It's be nice to see something different in a crew song, if you understand what I mean.

    Anyway, yw

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    i do, thanks for the advice. =)

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    No probs, you're welcome.

    Could you leave some feed for me here...

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=253094

    No feed as yet, which sucks ass.

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    it was dope yo, i liked it...knowin that this is my crew..nice job, nice complexity, creativty, dopeness yo....werd..

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